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Sumodreamer05

@Sumodreamer05

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1071

Wow Sanjh, what an intense update 👏 loved it to the core...
So it's Shravan's company's truck with which sumo's parents had the accident and Shravan knew about it but still he didn't tell sumo about it...
Ok when accident happened he didn't know about sumo but when he knew about sumo then he should have told her at that moment and also Ramnath and nirmala should not have hide this from sumo.. .
"Tell the truth, or someone will tell it for you".
that's what happens, Shravan didn't tell it to sumo and aditya told...
Aditya 😡 Sanjh isski acchhe se dhulaai karwana Shravan ke hatho 😉
Last part though very serious but at the same time also little bit funny as well..
Shravan locked sumo in the room 😡 hats off to Shravan's audacity..
Ab aditya nahi bachega 😃 😉

Luv
Shrujani[B]

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Rubyag23

@Rubyag23

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1072

First of all thanks for updating dear😛...it was short but nice one...One thing which i didn't understood was what why sumo refered malhotras as cheaters and shravan as lier...what does they knew before...pls update soon and clear the confusion...🤓

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phoenix_edkv

@phoenix_edkv

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1073

Thanks for updating Sanjh.

And its not at all boring.

Aditya...😡 i hate him

Sumo's gussa...i know she is weak now,

but Isme Shravan ki kya galti hai??? he wanted to tell her. it was ramu kaka n nimmo who stopped them.

I just hope that Shravan sorts everyting out and Sumo never leaves him.

I'm so sad for them

update soon and thanks for the pm

love

Madhu

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Faith28

@Faith28

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1074

Awesome update...that aditya should get a nice punch n kick...😡 Pls now updt sooner😊

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Diya

@Sonai_02

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1075

It's very awesome !!!

Heart broken Sumo...😭

That Aditya has made her go against Shravan

I wanna know how will Shravan show Aditya his aukat !!

Post soon this time plz.

Love

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arshuaar

@arshuaar

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1076

beautifully penned...
...😭
loved it...
Aditya...😡

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adityasingh.246

@adityasingh.246

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1077

dhan tannaa.. The moment I think nothing more can go wrong after this .. U prove me wrong .. 👏

this was a totally unexpected turn of events .. 😕

Shravan was thinking about this at that time , Oh ! How if he chose to share all this at that time,coz after that things only went downhill for them .. & then the moment she chose to give a 2nd chance to them .. This resurfaced & bang ! everything back to square one ! This time Shravan will have to work really hard to gain back her & her trust coz its not only about her but her parents too .. So Sumo getting angry is legitimate ..

Though shravan's Pov is also not fully wrong .. as a company,they had to behave professionally,& claim insurance money for the family of driver,maybe later we cud see that the condition of family is poor ..& they were strangers at that time ..

But yes ! he should have told her about this,she wud have been angry but atleast he had a better chance to explain her ..

If u see,its true how in SHRAMAN , sumo had lost again and again,true when she loved him & wanted to marry him,his male ego broke her heart & lashed out at her,then married her forcefully,making her away from her family,& again when she thought to move on,he let down ..

While he had gained only,she came in his life,healed him with love & mended his broken heart too ..

true destiny is their enemy ..

Aditya ruined it for them twice .. 😡

Shravan is guessing it right,Aditya is ready to pounce on vulnerable Sumo & satisfy his greed .. just like he tried last time ..Let's see how Badass Mr Malhotra deals with Aditya ..

Though his manner of protecting Sumo will only make her hate him ..

Let's see what's in ur mind next .. It wud be interesting to see shravan using his angry mode to keep sumo to him & make her do as he says & not leave .. Tashneishq ..😉

Can't wait for next update 😊

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Safire

@Safire

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1078

Sanjh,it was not boring;it was the most interesting chapter...

So nicely written👏

Please update soon...

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pinky.padda

@pinky.padda

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1079

awesome update

beat up Aditya time

cannot wait

continue soon

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shaggy8

@shaggy8

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1080

It was intensely emotional update dear... amazing... loved it... dialogues were mindblowing... beautifully penned... can feel the emotion, pain of sumo and shravan...👏 ... en dono ke beech ek problem khatm hoti nahi ke dussri ajati hai... 😭 ...
Shravan sumo ko room me lock Karke rakhega... 😲 ... ab Kya hoga agge... 😕... so curios to know...
Adiya... 😡 ...hope shravan iss ki ache se dholai kare 😆

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