BeYhaDD : when obsession overpowers love DARK OS - Page 5

Bellaaa!!!!! WHT WAS THT???...yar u scared me...imagine me reading all alone at nite n my room all quite n gloomy..kya haal hoa hoga..i was hell scared...i was so sure tht I 'll easily read it without any uneasiness but this Crazy psycho Shravan freaked me out..hez all insane...he definately needed a psychatrist..for sure.
He tried to kill Nanu...whn i read tht part i was hell shocked literally woh apnay dewanay pan mein kuch nhi smjh pata all he remembers or knw is his Sumo thts it..
he knew wht he did was wrong but still he did tht...how cud he..literally [I]hadh say zyada kuch acha nhi hota...pyaar bhi nhi[I]
Thn he tried to force himself upon her...he physically tried to force himself upon her..against her wish..but thankfully he stopped...it took me hell lot of time to process it all..literally..i was shell shocked might be an understatement..i cud say..
she didn't loved him back...she just concidered him as her dearest bestest friend..but he he turned into a beast..a wild beast..who cares bout nothing except her...atleast according to himm..though i reality all he cared was bout his obsession his madness which he named as love..
Tht room ful of memories was beautiful..no dout but if only had been sane..thn..it was like he was he intuding into her n her dreams...he was being opressive thts it.
All he wanted was her...chahay against her wish hi kyun na ho...
she slipped had n accident this way...how miserable...n Shravan intoduced her as his wife at hospital..hadh hai..
Sumo got the most dreadful shock of her entire life tht day..
Shravan just cudnt let her go away from him at any cost...if it hurts her tab bhi nhi..how cud anyone do such thing...making her live in pain n miseries nothinh else n thn u sau u love her...by giving sheer pain n making her suffer through sheer torture...this i wud say is a selfish love...
he was all addicted to her just like a drug addict addicted to drugs..
he took her along n left to live in world of his own...poor Sumo..i pity her badly.
He was all like this cuz he remained love deprived throughout his life n whn he found tht someone cares for him he jst cudnt restrain himself from commiting thoz sins...yes i wud consider his deeds as sins...kissi ko zabrdasti bandha rkhna aur musalsal takleef detay rahana meri nazar mein bara gunah hai..dont knw bout wht other think but my pov is this..
I also felt bad for Nanu as he himself cudnt do anything..haahh..
By the end i was crying like a mad person..cudnt stop myself..

All in all Bella...tht was stupendous...hell beautifully penned..rite now i feel like by using such small words of praise m insulting ur skills...literally it was the BESTEST...for sure...loved it to core..its plot was outstanding..u pulled it out brilliantly..hats off man!!
love u Bella..tonz of huggies for u 🤗

Originally posted by: Sunain

Bellaaa!!!!! WHT WAS THT???...yar u scared me...imagine me reading all alone at nite n my room all quite n gloomy..kya haal hoa hoga..i was hell scared...i was so sure tht I 'll easily read it without any uneasiness but this Crazy psycho Shravan freaked me out..hez all insane...he definately needed a psychatrist..for sure.
He tried to kill Nanu...whn i read tht part i was hell shocked literally woh apnay dewanay pan mein kuch nhi smjh pata all he remembers or knw is his Sumo thts it..
he knew wht he did was wrong but still he did tht...how cud he..literally [I]hadh say zyada kuch acha nhi hota...pyaar bhi nhi[I]
Thn he tried to force himself upon her...he physically tried to force himself upon her..against her wish..but thankfully he stopped...it took me hell lot of time to process it all..literally..i was shell shocked might be an understatement..i cud say..
she didn't loved him back...she just concidered him as her dearest bestest friend..but he he turned into a beast..a wild beast..who cares bout nothing except her...atleast according to himm..though i reality all he cared was bout his obsession his madness which he named as love..
Tht room ful of memories was beautiful..no dout but if only had been sane..thn..it was like he was he intuding into her n her dreams...he was being opressive thts it.
All he wanted was her...chahay against her wish hi kyun na ho...
she slipped had n accident this way...how miserable...n Shravan intoduced her as his wife at hospital..hadh hai..
Sumo got the most dreadful shock of her entire life tht day..
Shravan just cudnt let her go away from him at any cost...if it hurts her tab bhi nhi..how cud anyone do such thing...making her live in pain n miseries nothinh else n thn u sau u love her...by giving sheer pain n making her suffer through sheer torture...this i wud say is a selfish love...
he was all addicted to her just like a drug addict addicted to drugs..
he took her along n left to live in world of his own...poor Sumo..i pity her badly.
He was all like this cuz he remained love deprived throughout his life n whn he found tht someone cares for him he jst cudnt restrain himself from commiting thoz sins...yes i wud consider his deeds as sins...kissi ko zabrdasti bandha rkhna aur musalsal takleef detay rahana meri nazar mein bara gunah hai..dont knw bout wht other think but my pov is this..
I also felt bad for Nanu as he himself cudnt do anything..haahh..
By the end i was crying like a mad person..cudnt stop myself..

All in all Bella...tht was stupendous...hell beautifully penned..rite now i feel like by using such small words of praise m insulting ur skills...literally it was the BESTEST...for sure...loved it to core..its plot was outstanding..u pulled it out brilliantly..hats off man!!
love u Bella..tonz of huggies for u 🤗

thanks a lot dear [>:D <]
So sorry to scare you dear
yup he needed a psychiatrist
that forcing part I didn't wanted to write that but thought it'd be able to justify his obsession plus the further story sooo
well I'd call that obsession or love overpowered by obsession
Well I'd not justify shravan here cuz according to me he too was a sinner her his character is negative not grey but negative the only positive part was that he loved sumo well he surely did but that too was overpowered by his obsession
glad you like it dear 😊
lol tons of huggies from my side too [>:D <]

Originally posted by: 0Bella0

thanks a lot dear [>:D <]
So sorry to scare you dear
yup he needed a psychiatrist
that forcing part I didn't wanted to write that but thought it'd be able to justify his obsession plus the further story sooo
well I'd call that obsession or love overpowered by obsession
Well I'd not justify shravan here cuz according to me he too was a sinner her his character is negative not grey but negative the only positive part was that he loved sumo well he surely did but that too was overpowered by his obsession
glad you like it dear 😊
lol tons of huggies from my side too [>:D <]

Originally posted by: Sunain

Well I concur u..n m not trying to justify his act..not at all..it's just that his deprivation led obsession to overpower his Love.

N thanks for the Huggies😉

exactly my point his obsession has overpowered his love that turned him into this