BeYhaDD : when obsession overpowers love DARK OS - Page 4

Originally posted by: crazy_vaish

Dark side of Shravan is intimidating. Somehow I can't imagine Shravan like that

But well written and Sumo living the life of a corpse😭. Very Painful.

Thanks for the PM.

agreed dark side of shravan is unimaginable but wht to do story had progress like that only even I couldn't imagine shravan like that frankly shravan was never in ma mind when I wrote this but I wanted a dark story on shraman sooo
Tysm dear 😊

hmm ab tmne keh dia ki u urself don't know to kchna ho skta ab :-p ... I think new York le jakr admit kraya hoga ...ki kaise v thk ho jaye sumo...pagla gya hai ladka pura pyar me...

Originally posted by: anonymousanju

hmm ab tmne keh dia ki u urself don't know to kchna ho skta ab :-p ... I think new York le jakr admit kraya hoga ...ki kaise v thk ho jaye sumo...pagla gya hai ladka pura pyar me...

🤣 sahi pakde hain

Originally posted by: 0Bella0

🤣 sahi pakde hain

rofl...bhabhiji ghar par hain ;)

@anonymousanju sahi pakde hai 🤣
I love that show it's the only show I follow now

Originally posted by: 0Bella0

@anonymousanju sahi pakde hai 🤣
I love that show it's the only show I follow now

I don't watch any serial ...edkv was the only one I used to watch...:)

Originally posted by: anonymousanju

I don't watch any serial ...edkv was the only one I used to watch...:)

ooo well I don't watch any but bhabhiji is something I can't avoid

Woaoah..!!!!
tht was faanntatic!!!!
Really loved it..just read the first version n it was phenomenal 👏
u simply nailed it for sure..
The way u narated it...stupendous!!!
Shravan for sure is a complete psycho...
Uss kay payaar ki intehaa hi nhi...
Yaa u were rite his love has turned into severe Obsession..
Thoz flashbacks...woah...
their first encounter was lovely...Sumo helped him..n thn choose to be his seat partner..thisase him fall more for her
Shravan throughout his life was love deprived cuz of which he can't let the only person whom he loved n who cared for him go away..
He fell from the roof just to make hr stay with him...Shocking..banda pura kiska hoa hai😆
He loved her but she didn't knew tht...awwh..
lets see wht unfolds ahead..
Can't wait to knw...
Update soon..

Bella🤗
Thank U for such an amazing OS..
loved it..
Haven't read the lighter version..but will read it soon n let u knw bout my thoughts😉
Love ya.

Originally posted by: Sunain

Woaoah..!!!!
tht was faanntatic!!!!
Really loved it..just read the first version n it was phenomenal 👏
u simply nailed it for sure..
The way u narated it...stupendous!!!
Shravan for sure is a complete psycho...
Uss kay payaar ki intehaa hi nhi...
Yaa u were rite his love has turned into severe Obsession..
Thoz flashbacks...woah...
their first encounter was lovely...Sumo helped him..n thn choose to be his seat partner..thisase him fall more for her
Shravan throughout his life was love deprived cuz of which he can't let the only person whom he loved n who cared for him go away..
He fell from the roof just to make hr stay with him...Shocking..banda pura kiska hoa hai😆
He loved her but she didn't knew tht...awwh..
lets see wht unfolds ahead..
Can't wait to knw...
Update soon..

Bella🤗
Thank U for such an amazing OS..
loved it..
Haven't read the lighter version..but will read it soon n let u knw bout my thoughts😉
Love ya.

tysm dear 😊
true banda khisak gaya hai 🤣
Glad you like it
do read the lighter version soon
and make me know whether you like it or not
Thanks a lot dear 😊

Originally posted by: 0Bella0

tysm dear 😊
true banda khisak gaya hai 🤣
Glad you like it
do read the lighter version soon
and make me know whether you like it or not
Thanks a lot dear 😊

Wil surely read it at nite warna tomorrow morning Pakka😉