BeYhaDD : when obsession overpowers love DARK OS - Page 3

Originally posted by: _Eternity_

Amazing..
Superb work dear 👏

tysm dear 😊

Originally posted by: Shri_girl

<font color="#cc33ff">although i love dark...but at the end i always want love to overpower obsession...and that's the problem with me...i always read dark stories with a hope that at the end love will overpower all...just to disappoint myself🥺...but for the first time...with ur story..i am not at all disappointed...instead i feel this obsessive end to be more suitable than a lovable ending...maybe because u started with the dark end...and thus giving me no hopes...that used to get crushed at the end and made me sad...so basically ur dark start gave me a satisfied light end😊...so now i get the culprit-my hopes...so from now on i will try to keep my morals down before reading a dark story...oh! i forgot about ur praisings in between of my realisations</font>

<font color="#cc33ff">😆so first of all a big thankuuu🤗 for writing this i really wanted to see some complete edkv dark stuff and u completely nailed it with cyco shravan👏loved it darkly...😉</font>

hehehehe lol that was always the thing with me too 😆 we're sailing on same boat sis
tysm dear 😊 moi too wanted a dark stuff on edkv but couldn't find any 😭
Glad you got your culprit 😆

finally read it. Bella u nailed it again...God I was completely shocked throughout reading this ...I had just held my head with one hand n was like God this is insane. I was flabbergasted completely...first time when she said she's going to meet her grandma he jumped off the roof...God seriously the title beyhad really suits this os ...beyhad ka dialog yad ata ...hdd se zyada kuch v acha ni hota ..pyar v ni ..this dialog perfectly fits in here... he threatened doctor to keep her alive like body without soul just because he wanted her to be with him always...its obsession .it can't be love ...love is pure, honest, beautiful... its not necessary if u love sm1 the other one loves u too but goddamn hell he crossed all limits... never let anyone come near her or himself...n it was height...he tried to kill nanu just because he wanted her not to leave him...he was possessive n he calls it love...no...its better not to love anyone than this type of love...well its not love..its obsession. ..possessiveness... n how he didn't wait for her answer just started kissing her n unbuttoned her shirt ..yuck..how could he?? m glad she opposed ... n when he heard name of aditya God he went mad n angry again... n all paintings ...good it was her dream n his too but she never loved him...always considered as her best friend...couldn't he just understand this simply... n when she took name pf nanu he again thought of killing him...if sumo wouldn't met with an accident he'd surely have killed nanu ...totally psychic he was .. I was numb for a while after reading this Bella...n sweetie ur an amazing writer..girl u have just gazab ka potential...loved it truly...it was something different n breathtaking ...sorry for commenting this late :( n thanks for the pm dear :)

Originally posted by: anonymousanju

finally read it.Bella u nailed it again...God I ws cpletely shocked throughout reading this ...I had just held my head with one hand n was like God this is insane.I was flabbergasted completely...first time when she said she's going to meet her grandma he jumped off the roof...God seriously the title beyhad really suits this os ...beyhad ka dialog yad ata ...hdd se zyada kuch v acha ni hota ..pyar v ni ..this dialog perfectly fits in here...he threatened doctor to keep her alive like body without soul just because he wanted her to be with him always...its obsession.it can't be love ...love is pure, honest, beautiful... its not necessary if u love sm1 the other one loves u too but goddamn hell he crossed all limits...never let anyone come near her or himself...n it was height...he tried to kill nanu just because he wanted her not to leave him...he was possessive n he calls it love...no...its better not to love anyone than this type of love...well its not love..its obsession. ..possessiveness...n how he didn't wait for her answer just started kissing her n unbuttoned her shirt ..yuck..how could he?? m glad she opposed ...n when he heard name of aditya God he went mad n angry again...n all paintings ...good it was her dream n his too but she never loved him...always considered as her best friend...couldn't he just understand this simply...n when she took name pf nanu he again thought of killing him...if sumo wouldn't met with an accident he'd surely have killed nanu ...totally psychic he was .. I was numb for a while after reading this Bella...n sweetie ur an amazing writer..girl u have just gazab ka potential...loved it truly...it was something different n breathtaking ...sorry for commenting this late :( n thanks for the pm dear :)

thanks a lot dear for such a long comment
its all ok I am glad you atleast read it 😊
I know it's not love but obsession and when it empowers all other feelings person doesn't see what is right or what is wrong maybe from childhood he didn't got anyone's love care and attention but when sumo showered it on him he didn't wanted her to go away from him at any cost
that forcing scene well I didn't wanted to write that ... that was something I was not at all sure about ... i myself was feeling uneasy while writing that but to show his obsession that was necessary
thanks again dear 😊

Originally posted by: 0Bella0

thanks a lot dear for such a long comment
its all ok I am glad you atleast read it 😊
I know it's not love but obsession and when it empowers all other feelings person doesn't see what is right or what is wrong maybe from childhood he didn't got anyone's love care and attention but when sumo showered it on him he didn't wanted her to go away from him at any cost
that forcing scene well I didn't wanted to write that ... that was something I was not at all sure about ... i myself was feeling uneasy while writing that but to show his obsession that was necessary
thanks again dear 😊

I'm happy you like my long comments dear :) ...thanks.. yeah it's obsession...
yep ur right just because he never got anyone's love or attention he became like this...but it's kind of scary you know ...
he needed a psychiatrist...n he took her to new York. ...n only you know wat happened after that...;)
it was amazing...thanks for pm ...

@anonymousanju i know its scary true he needed a psychiatrist
lol even I don't know what happened in new york only he knows what happened there 🤣

Originally posted by: 0Bella0

@anonymousanju i know its scary true he needed a psychiatrist
lol even I don't know what happened in new york only he knows what happened there 🤣

hehe but ur the writer behna...;) n yeah he badly needed one...

Dark side of Shravan is intimidating. Somehow I can't imagine Shravan like that

Originally posted by: anonymousanju

hehe but ur the writer behna...;) n yeah he badly needed one...

yes I m but still moiko v koi idea nhi 🤣