Shraman ff: HUM TUM part 27(updated on page 144 - Page 76

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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow...it's amazing...
Really really loving it very much...
Am so addicted to ur story ..
Donno wat to say...
Keep going...
Loving it vmuch...
Thx for pm... eagerly waiting for next...
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Posted: 8 years ago
hi piya di,
brilliant upidate,, yehh baat mujhse har baar repeat karwaoge to pagal samjhoge😛
urvashi shaadi shuda hai, yipeee!!!!!!
first scene was beautiful. especially the part jab sumo says
"phir se chodh kar jaa rahe ho mujhe."

"aapki meri life main kya importance hai aap nhin jaante."

the part when nirmala says
"maine kuch bola, kuch puccha. mujhe pata hai kitni fiqr hai tujhe suman ki."
i was like badi sahi saas mili hai sumo ko

"main yahan apni beti ko uthane aayi hu, apne bete aur bahu ko disturb karne nhin." that one was epic.

"phir to mujhe rishi thanku bolna padhega." even i have that liking towards rishi.

but i didn't know shravan itna shariff hai,, hook bhi band kar duya,,,impressed.👏

god the part when shravan gets frustrated at not bieng able to meet sumo was adorable too.

but i personally loved the part when shravan and sumo are in his room.
"mere ishq ka rang chadh gaya tumpar."

for once and for all di aap bohooot acche writer ho. love your works.

love
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Posted: 8 years ago
plzzz update soon...plzzz plzzz plzzz...u r basically like a diwali package...lots of love for u...
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Posted: 8 years ago
This ff is addictive. Pls pls update soon...cannot wait
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Posted: 8 years ago
Rally an AWESOME update. Thankfully shravan came back to his Sumo. EAGERLY waiting for next update😉😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
piya dear thanks a lot for pm's ...read all parts in one go ... i just loved all of them ... sudden court marriage, sumo ka gussa then melting down...the night horror movie show n then their kiss n god shravu hurt her control man...n then i loved the track of case... it was something different... u have showed the reality... a big hug for writing this part dear... won my heart ..n sumo ka unconscious hona god hell i was death scared n shravu thanks god he was okay... facetime chat part was too emotional...loved it n in morning chummachati word was hilarious... n thanks a lot all of his friends are married n urvashi is pregy...how naughty he is didnt tell sumo that urvashi is married... loved when shravu came back from mumbai n entered her room...their night together ..n sumo opened her heart out... liked the way shravu controlled himself...n ha mumbai jate time car scene was amazing...pushkie ko shravu send out ..lol...n then kiss omg m blushing loved shravu ke friends..all are amazing ...haldi ceremony n then room fiasco..my god ...his friends are like him...n at dining table impatient shravu...it was so cute..loved it...waiting for next part n their marriage to take place in next part... my old analysis will start from next part ...seriously loved all parts n songs...piya love u my dear pls update next part soon n pm me..take care
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Posted: 8 years ago
Piya Where are u ??????
we are waiting
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hey.. Sorry for commenting late coz of my exams Read last 5 chapters in one go Nd it's amazing... Shraman are legally husband and wife but I can't wait for their proper wedding...U really scared me with karbanda track...Hope he never returns back in shraman's life...Nd shravan's friends are really cute.
Thanks for PM... Plz continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Sorry guys as this time also i could reply u all as i am out for a trip ..
And it was a surprise trip from my hubby darling..
So was very busy in packing and everything elese ..
I wrote this chapter during the flight.. So typo mistake .. Maaf kardo plzz..

So there is the update
Part 21



"Guys yeh to gaya... Yaar ise Ekbar suman se mila do nahin to abhi pura gharwalo ko uthayega... " Agastya said

"Let me do something.. "Urvashi got up and headed downstair...

"Yaar i dnt know to much about the indian wedding.. Rituals and all that.. But really it's annoying tht u cant kiss your bride , hug her. In front of others... "Rishi said

"Kiss to duur ki baat hai... Haath bhi lagane jaoon to sumo darr jaati hai.. "Shravan said finishg the 2nd peg of his scotch...

"Size dekh apna .. Tere saamne woh ...Tujhe dekh ke hi to bichari dRr jati hogi"... Said raj

"Aur maine kiya bhi go bahut galat uske saath.. Bahut bahut galat samjha maine use... Bahut dukhh diya... Uske bare mein kitna ulta sidha bola... Phir bhi woh mujhse pyaar karti hai... " Shravan said

Yaar aise mat bol... Tu usse bahut pyaar karta hai... Teri nafrat mein bhi to pyaar hi tha...humne tere muuh se sirf suman kii naam suna hai... Chahe tere gusse me hi na ho... "Ria put her hand on his shoulder..

"Aur jitna himne use jana woh bhi tujhse mohabbat karti hai.. Tu bahut lucky yaar ..."Raj said

"Bas tujhse zyada hi sharmati hai."... Rishi pushed him...

"To achha hi hai na uski sharam tod ne ka mauka tujhe milega jo humme nahin mila tha.. Humari biwiya yo humse bhi zyada bold thi.."agastya laughed

"Paas bhii aane nahi deti... Door bhi jaaane nahi deti... Pagal ho jayunga main... Kaal raat kaise guzara sirf main jaanta huun.."...shravan shook his head..
"Oye tu apne muuh ko thodi lagaam de bhai.. "Agastya said..

"Ya to isko suman se milao nahito mat pilao.. Abhi amne sare erotic dream ke baare bolna suru kar dega..." Agastya added
Everyone laughed..

Shravan took his phone and dialed her number
After some ring

"Hello "she picked it up
"Hey jaan Missing uu .".. Sharavn said
She blushed
"Biwiii kahan ho yaar tum .. Woh subhe mile the.. Uske baad ek baar bhi tumhara chehra tak nahin dekhne ko mila.."... Shravan sighs

"Dolly bua bahar se door lock karke gayi... She laughed... Waise Kal dekh lena... "Suman smiled

"Kya yaar tum... Yaha mujhse ek pal kinbhi doorie bardasht nahin ho raha hai.. Aur tum kal
Ki baat kar rahe ho...shravan said looking at the stars at the sky

"Kuchh nahi ho sakta .. Ab to hum subha se pehle mil bhi na sakte.. "Suman lied down and blushed

"Yaar yeh kal kab ayegaa... Kab tumhara vhehra meri ankhon ke samne hoga"...Srvan smiled..

"Kyaa aap bhi ... Subhe hi to mile ... Aap to aise bol rahe ho jaise hum pehlibaar milenge"..suman turned around and grabbed the pillow..

"Kya karu meri biwi hai hi aisi."... Shravan scratched the back of his head

Dekha hazaron dafa aapko
Phir beqarari kaisi hai
Sambhale sambhalta nahi ye dil
Kuch aap mein baat aisi hai

"Aap bhi na..." Suman blushed

"Achha ...sirf main??? Tum mujhse milna nahin chate ho??"shravan asked

"Maine aise kab bola.. Meri to saans bhi aapme atke huye hai...jab aap nahi hote ho saans lena bhi mushkil lagta hai"... Suman closed her eyes




Lekar ijazat ab aap se
Saansein ye aati jaati hain

"Sumaan... "Shravan said ...
Suman snapped her eyes as shravan called her suman...
"Hmmm ??" Suman asked

"Ekbaar bolo na ke tum..."he couldn't finish..

"Jab aap hote ho to sab kuchh achha lagta hai... Sab kuchh.. Aap ke bina to main jaise kahi kho hii jaati huun"...Suman said

Dhoondhe se milte nahi hain hum
Bas aap hi aap baaki hain

"Hum ek hi chhad ke neeche hote huye bhi itne door kyun hai sumo??? Kyun tum meri bahon mein nahi ho... Kyun humari dhadkan alag alag dhadak rahe hai..??? Mujhse ab yeh doori kyun nahin bardasht ho raha hai??? "...Shravan whispered

"Shayad humesha ek hone ke liya..???? Sumo blushed

Pal bhar na doori sahein aap se
Betaabiyan yeh kuch aur hain

"Aap na bilkul pagal ho... Kahan door huun main?? Aap ke paas hi to huun... Apne dil pe haath rakho ... "Suman said

Shravan put hand on his heart..he feels the heartbeats

"Woh jo dhdhak raha hai na woh main huun..main to aap mein hi huun shravan...jaise chaand door hoke bhi humesha humari paas hoti hai..." Suman looked at the moon from her window

Hum door hoke bhi paas hain
Nazdeekiyan yeh kuch aur hain


"Love u jaaan..." Shravan whispers

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"Beta kya huya?? Tu thik to hai?? "...Kamini asked urvashi..
"Actually aunty .. Ria log terrace pe party kar rahe hai.. Aur mujhe akele sone mein thodi ghabrahat ho rahi hai.. To main aap logo je paas aagayi.."...Urvashi said..

"Agastya kahan hai...?? "Nirmala asked tujhe "aise halat mein ... "Nirmala added
"Nahin nahin aunty woh bhi to itne dino baad sabse mila hai.. To they r njoying actually m
Feeling nauseating smelling alcohol.."...urvashi said...

"Dekho to biwi maa bannewali hai.. Par in ladko ko koi fikr hii nahi hai... "Dolly bua said

"Aur aunty .. Main bahut thak gayi huun... "Urvashi closed her eyes...

"Tu mere room mein chal.. "Said nirmala
Nahin nahin aunty main actually agastya ke ass paas rehna hi chahti huun ...mean upstairs.. "Urvashi cover up...
"To tu suman ke room mein so jaana.. "Said pinky bua...
"Ohh thank uu "...urvashi jumped at joy..
"Dheere betaaa."... Nirmala stopped her...
"To main chalu??? "Urvashi said
"Pani ke bottle lete huye jana "...said dolly bua...

"Lo... A gayiii... Kya huya????? "Asked raj looking at urvashi...

"Kuchh nahi ho sakta .. Uska room locked hai... Urvashi sighed.. Maine socha suman ko yahan pe leke ayu.. But... "She added

"I knew it... "Shravan sulked

"Oye bollywood tragedy hero.. Nautanki rakh.. Main jab msg karungi suman ke room tak ajaana mil jayegi tujhe teri suman.. Ohhh sorry biwi... "Urvashi smirked

"Sachhh?????shravan hugged her..
"Oye ab to tujhe teri biwi mil gayi ab humari biwi ko chhod.. "Said agastya..

"Teri biwi baad mein pehle meri bestie hai.. "He kissed her cheeks..
"Aur ab do ise double pamper karna padhega.. " Said rishi...
"Guys ab main chalti huun .. Coz agar suman ko patah chalega to woh nahi ayegi..".said urvashi

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"Hello dear..." Urvashi opend the door
"Are tum??? Par kaise????"Suman asked
"Ab kya kare dosti ki hain nibhani to padhegi...???
"Shravan pagal hoi raha hain tumse milne ke liye.. Hurry up ... Aur main uski best frnd yahan se Tumhe rescue bkarne ayi huun.. Ab chalo... "Urvashi smiled...
"Par bua... ????"suman asked..
"Don't worry babe upar koi nahi ayega..."Urvashi winked
"Par mujhe to mana kiya..".suman pouted

"Come on tum dono ke honour mein terrace pe party hsin aur um room mein locked ho... Ab chalo bhi.. Tumhe na sahi mujhe mere pati ke paas jana hai... "Urvashi said...

"Mujhe bhi" suman blushed.. "Bas thodi change kar lu??? "

"Suman just change the pajama to a beautiful black long skirt with golden border .. With a black sleevless tank..
..
She stepped out of the room and found shravan was standing in the corridor

He was resting his back on the door of his room.. Crossing his hands on his chest...

He is looking staright on her eyes...
Urvashi looked at both of them

"Ohhh suman mera phone tumhare bed pe eh gaya.. Plzz leke ayogi.. Main terrace pe huun..."
Urvashi said looking at shravan...

Suman lowered her head as she realised that Urvashi wanted to give them space...

"Tu chal hum phone leke aate hai... "Shravan said not breaking the eye contact .
Urvashi chuckled "aram se aaaja..."

Shravan closed the gap between them .. And leaned towards her
He pushed the door behind to open her room...

He pressed his body to pushed her back..
As she entered the room.. He closed the door behind...
"Ab????"He pulled her closer...
"Sumo meri taraf dekhogi nahi???? "His voice hoarse.. He was feeling intoxicated dure her body head and alcohol .
"Woh bua ne bola abhshagun hoga .. "She said

"Agar itne paas hote huye bhi nahin dekhogi to meri saans tham jaye... "He couldn't complete as suman put her hands on his mouth...
Phir se aapne aise baat ki to mujhse bura koi nahin.." She said closing her eyes..
..
He pulled her into a hug...
She wrapped her arms around him..

Aagosh mein hai jo aapki
Aisa sukoon aur paaye kahan

Suman closed her eyes
Suman smelled his cologne...
Shravan sighed.
Dinner kyun nahin kiya??? He aked kissing the top of her head..
"Wo vhaat zyada kha li thi to.."she said reating her head on his masculine chest
Ab tak kyun jaag rahi ho??? He caresed her hair

"Aapke bina achha nahin lag raha tha... "Suman digg her face into his chest..

"Toh phir dekho meri taraf"
He pulled her chin up and made her look into his eyes..
He grabbed her waist and pulled her ...
Tum itni khubsoorat kyun ho biwi...he said looking at her face..
Suman blushed looking at his eyes


Her hand touched his forhead where he used to have a banded...
Now its a open cut
"IsSshhhkitna chot laga aap ko..."he caresed the outer area...
"Abhi bhi dard hai???" She blew air from her mouth
Shravan closed hie eyes...
"dawai jo nahi lagai...::Shravan said
"Kyun????? Aaap bhi na... Kyun nahin lagayi...??"She frowned.
"Tumne dii jo nahin ""shravan said looked at her

"Kaunsi?? "She looked at him..
"Kiss... Shravan said...
Aap bhi na.. "Suman blushed

"Kyaa yaar biwi tumko jab chot laga to maine dawai dia tha na... Ab tum Mujhe nahi dogi??? "Shravan asked naughtily..
Suman's face heated up..
Shrravan ...
"Tumne bola tha .. Ab nahin dogi...??? "He pouted
"Ok "she whispered..
She saw shining in his eyes..."Sachhh????
Chalo do..."
He leaned towards her...

"Uhhhuuu...aap Ankhe bandh karo.".. Suman said
"Ok my lord.. "Shravan closed his eyes..
Suman cupped his face... And leaned towards his face..
Shravan parted his lips.. He felt her breath on his nose...
He was breathing heavily as he was waiting to capture her lips...
Suddenly he felt soft touch on her forhead where his wound is...
He shot up his eyes...
"Hey .. Wahan kyun??? I need a kiss here "... He pointed his lips...
"Chot aap ko yaha pe lagi.. "She touched his wound
"Yahan pe nahin." She touched his lips...with her finger...
"Bar biwi ..." He tried to speak
"Uhhhu she shook her head...jahan chot wahan dawai.. ..." She chuckled

"Kaash mere hoton pe chot lagta... "Shravan pouted..

"Kuchh bhi.. Aap ko chhot lagne se pehle meri jaan na chli jaye.." She looked at him...

"Waise jaan yeh rule banake tumne bahut achha kiya...jahan chot waha dawai.. "He smirked..

"Matlab..???? "She frowned
He picked her up in bridal style
...
"Shhhravan kya kar rahe ho aaap??? Mujhe neeche utaro.. Aur urvashi ka phone bhi dena hai... Kahan leke ja rahe ho..". She asked

He made her lie down on her bed..
Sumo got up on her elbows . And moved back..

He put his arms on her both side...
"Ab mere dawai lagane ki baari..." He smirked

"Par mujhe koi chot.. "She couldn't finish..
"Lagi hai jaaan .. Meri wajaise .." He looked at her bre**t..
Her eyes widen... "Shrravan "
She cover herself.. With hand.. And lost her balance .. Anf feel back on the bed..
He looked at her..
"Jahan chot wahan dawai.. "He whispered...on her face leaning on her...

Suman can feel his heated body on top of hers...
Her cheeks are red...
Shravan brushed his nose on her cheek...

"Mere babies thik hai??? "He kissed her jawline...
She closed her eyes and gulped..
"Jaaan????? Mere babies ka chot gaya?? "He sucked her collarbone..
Suman arched back and was not able to reply...
"Jaaan ??! Plzz open your eyes..." He moaned ner her ears
Suman slowly opened her eyes...
He touched her tummy ..
His hands were roaming over her tshirt..
"Mere babies.." He aked her looking at her luscious lips...
Suman bites her lips ..
Shravan immediately captured her lips...
She hold his back...
Shravan slowly bites her lowerlip...
"Bolo naa... "He said betwy his kiss..
Suman moaned...
Shravan pluged his lips... Inside her mouth...
Tasting the sweetness of her mouth...
He saw her eyes closing ... In pleasure..
She was melting inder his kiss...
She felt his hands kept on moving upwards...over her tshirt
She wants to stop him but she is not i a position to make him stop..
His hands captured her assets..
"Shravannn .. "She goraned
They parted away as they are out of breath
...
Shravan nuzzeled on the crook of her neck... Giving open mouth kisses...
His hand were playing with her softness
His thumb was caressing her erected buds..
"Plzzz ruuk jao..." She moaned...
Shravan pulled her sleeves down ...
Kisees the upper side of her plumpy assets...
Suman cluched his arms..
..he gave open kisses on her exposed cleavage
"Plzzz shravannn... "She said in pleasure...
Shravan kissed her assets without removing her tops..
Suman arched her back ...
He gave an open kiss tasting the fabric of her tshirt
"Jaaan plzzz ekbaaar... "He asked looking at her eyes...
Suman opened her eyes...
And saw dRk desire in his eyes...
"I promise i will be gentle... Par agar tum nahi chahti ho to.. He couldn't complete as he saw she lowered her eyes and blushed...she covercovered her face ...

"Sachhh?He cupped her face... He removed her handns and kissed her neck
She turned her face on the side and closed her eyes blushinggg profusely...
"Ohhh jaaan i love you."... He kissed her collarbone ... And opened the first button of her tshirt
Suddenly there wS a knock on there door...
"Oyeee phone mila???? "...Its urvashi...

"Phone dhoond raha hai ya manufacture kar raha hai... "
Suman bites her lips in embarrassment

"Tu chal hum aate hai "...said shravan...
Pecking her lips..
"Oye i need to use the washroom.. Dude m pregnant "...she banged the door...
Shravan got up and open the door..
Suman standup and was fumbling with her buttons...
"Wrong timing ka tujhe award milna chahiye.". Shravan said
"Kal ke liye kuchh bachake rakh nalayak.". She pushed him and rushed to the toiled..

Shravan came close..
Suman was panting badlyy..
She was unable tto meet his eyes...
He cupped her face.. Seeing her shyness
"Its ok jaan... Hum to bas pyaar kar rahe the."..
Achha suno ??? Shravan called
She looked at him
change your tshirt.. He pointed towards her chest where its wet becoz of his saliva...
Suman dig her face into his chest...


"Sorry suman for spoiling ur moment.." Urvashi said comming out of the washroom
"Nahin nahin hum to..". Suman said
"I know ludo khel rahethe.." Smiled urvashi


"Tum log ayoge bhi ya hum sone chale "...asked urvashi...
Suman tried to pulled herself from the hug.. But shravan tighen his grip..
"Haddi hai tu.. Kabaab mein haddi" shravan narrowed his eyes.
"Haalat dekh bechari ki... "Urvashi look at blushing suman...

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Suman is sitting beside ria... While shravan was standing opposite... Talking to rishi...

"Urvashi tu ab jaa rest kar le.." Said raj...
"Chhod na yaar.. "Urvadhi said..
"Yaar... Shravan tu honeymoon mein kahan leke jas raha hsin suman ko???? "Asked ria while sipping on the beer...

"Surprise hai..." Shravan said...
Suman snapped at him..
"Are kya yaar hume to bol.. "Said Urvash
"Aur agar tu nahi bolega to suman packing kis
hisab se karegi... Dresses to us hisab se legi rite?? "Ria asked

Suman nodded and looked at shravan...

"Tum bhi na shravan ka irada samjha karo..
Honeymoon pe jaa raha hai.. Room se nikle ga hi nahi... To dresses ki kya zarurat hai.. "Said rishi...

Raj and agastya gave hifi
"Bhabi aap to gayi... Samhal payoge na?? "Laughed raj...
suman lowered her head.. Her cheeks became red like beetroot...
"Oye dost ho ya dushman chup ho jao.."Shravan realised tht she is feeling embarrassed and finished his peg...
He came close to her..
"Sachhi yaar tum log to suman ko dara rahi hoo..."Said riya...

"Hey it's getting cold agastya woh throw dena...suman u need one??" Urvashi asked...
"I think mujhe jana chahiye..."suman said..
"Plzzz biwi baitho na... "Shravan hold her hand..
Ria moved to the singlesofa and snuggled with rishi...
Raj was smoking..
Urvashi lie down on the other sofa resting her head on agastya's lap...
Suman was mesmerised by watching his friends and the bond they share with each other..
Shravan covered her with the throw... And pulled her closer
"Aap ke dost bahut achhe hai.. "She whispered...
"Bhabi yeh baat aap zor se bhi bata sakte ho hum bura nahi manenge... "Said raj...

Everyone laughed...
"Actually mujhe laga .. "Suman fumbled
"Kya ke hum bura manenge.. "Asked agastya..
Suman laughed...
"Rishi .. Suman ki shaadi dekh ke mujhe lagraha hai.. Hum bhi aise with ritual shaadi karte to kitna achha hota na??" Asked ria..
"Babe..its ur fault u r the one who was impatient... "He kissed her...
Suman's widen her eyes...
"Jaan we r brought up in london.. "So itna shock mat ho jao.. He whispered..
Shravan tighten his grip...
"His hand was under her tshirt... Caressing her belly..
Suman was shivering..
Shravan was randomly taking to rishi .. While his hands were busy...near her navel
Suman stiffen up...
She tried to control her nervous ness but get noticed by ria...
"Hey suman wahts up?? "Ria asked
Shravan stopped.. "Hey sumo kya huya???"
"Woh woh main woh."...Suman stammer
Suddenly shravan burst out of laughing..
"Shravan ...bhabi is soo naive said agastya .. Haina ?? "He asked Urvashi and found her dozing off...
"Hey mumma bear... Get up "...agastya caresed her head...
"Chalo ab sone jao u need rest..." Urvashi got up and went to sumo's room...
Suman yawned...
Rishi was preparing drinks.. "Shravan tere liye scotch ya vodka...? "He asked..
Suman turned aound and looked at shravan..
"Bas aur nahin.. "She pleaded..
"Hey bhabi plzzz aaj ki raat mat roko .." Said raj..
Shravan smiled.. "Nahin yaar chhod .. Aur nahin.."
"Hey what yaar.. Aj to party hai.. Bhabi plzzz boliye na use "...agastya pleaded..
"Ek shart pe... "Suman said..
"Kya?? "Everybody asked...
"Aap log mujhe bhabi nahin suman aur tum bulayenge... "She smiled...
"Ohhh bhabi... U r great... Waise bhi tum hum sab se kaafi chhoti bhi ho.. "Said raaj...
"Haan humari shravan ko balika vadhu mil gaya "rishi laughed...
"Ok guys suman is right next wala tum sab ke liye last hoga.. Kal in dono ko shaadi hai bhai..waise bhi bahut pee chuke sab..."ria said
Ha last ine suman said..
"Shravan pulled her fromback and kissed on her cheeek ... "Thank u biwi..."

"Kyaa kar rahe ho aap..". Suman widen her eyes

"Are suman himara shravan ab humare jaisa besharam bangaya ."... Agastya said..
Everyone laughed

After some time .. Shravan realised that suman was complete resting on his body...
He peeked and found her sleeping peacefully resting her back on his body.. Cuddling up to his chest..
"Hey guys sumo so gayi..main use chhod ke aata hun.. "Shravan said..
Shravan picked her up . And went inside..

He pulled the duvet till her chest. And coverd her properly...
He kissed her forhead... "Sirf ek raat ki dooriyan.. Uske baad HUM TUM humesha ek ho jayenge.."

"Thoda romance kal ke liye rakh "...Urvashi murmurs from the otherside of the bed..
Shravan chukled... "Thanks yaar.."

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"Are yaaar sab jaldi karo??? Ghar mein do do shaadi hai... Bhai"... said lalaji...
"Preeti beta tu dekhna suman kahan tak ready huyi hai..".kamini said...

"Ji aunty."...preeti replied and headed upstairs...
"Maaa bhai ka sehra kaun bandhega..". Asked pushkar..
"Waise to behen bandhta hai par shravan ka ria bandhegi..". Said nirmala...
"Thank uu "...aunty ria hugged her..
"Achha to hum pehle suman ko leke venue mein chal te hai aap baarat leke aana... "Said sameer

"Ha jiji shravan ka arati to main hi utarungi... Suman meri beti. Jaisi jo hai..". Said kamini...

"Pushkar aaj jaimala se pehle shravan suman ko milne mat dena."..nirmala said..

"As urwish badi maa"... Pushkar smiled evily

"Achha bhai to neeche hai aur sumo upar .. Dekhne ka koi chance nahi..." He laughed

"Jiji aap -varun shravan ko dekhi main suman ko dekh ke aati huun '... Kamini went upstairs

Suman was sitting infront of her dresser where the beauticians are giving her the final touch...
She was looking mesmerising in her red bridal lehenga ...

"Nazar na laage meri bachhi ko... Hai aaj kitni badi khushi ka din hai.. Saalon pehle is ghar mein aayi thi.. Aur aaj isi ghar ke hoke reh jayegi..". Kamini put a kohl mark behind her ear...

Suman blushed...
"Chhoti maa bahut ghabrahat ho rahi hai.".. Suman said...
"Kyun meri bachhi tu to isi ghar ki beti bhi hai bahu bhi..". Kamini caresed her chin.

"Dii paani lo..". Preeti gave her water
Suman guloed the water...
"Kya dii aap ke toh haath thande ho gaye..."preeti laughed
"Mummma varun bhai ready ho ..." Pushkar couldnt finish as his eyes stopped at suman...

"Wowww ... Meri jaaaneman kya lag rahi hai ... Bahut dulhan dekhe hai.. But meri sumo wrestler jaisa kabhi nahi..." Pushkar said
Suman smiled at him...
"But tujhe nahi lagta yeh lehenga ka wazan tujhse zyada hai??" Said pushkar...
"Haan re main chaluu kaise... ?? "Suman pouted..
"Phere tak manage kar le baad mein bhai ke godi mein ghumna..." Pushkar winked..
Suman bites her lips..

Tingg her phone ring
Ready for the big event???

Suman smiled as she saw the msgs...
"Achha sun tu varun ko leke living area pe aa ja..".
Said kamini...

"Wowww aaaj meri suman bilkul rani lag rahi hai... "Ramnath kissed her firhead...
"Ji bade papa itni khubsoorat dulhan kisine nahi dekhi hogi "...:.said varun...
Suman blushed and fixed the sehra...

"Beta chal hum nikal te hai.. Yeh log baaraat leke baad mein niklenge"...nanu said..
Suman's eye was roaming here n there...
"Oye bilkul nahi.. Bas kuchh ghante uske baad.. "Said nirmala..
Suman blushed
"Waise bhi tumhare shaadi ka muhrat pehle hai baad mein varun vandy kaa.." Said lalaji...

Sameer took suman towards the car followed by preeti n nanu...


Downstair...
Ting
See you soon mr malhotra
Shravan smiled as he saw the msg...

"Bhai zara dil tham ke baithna aaj sumo killer lag rahi hai... "Pushakr smiled

Shravan was fixing his hair infront the mirror
"Ha shravan aaj tu kitna bhi koshish kar le .. Suman jaisa lag nahin sakti .. Ek ladki holar main bhi bol rahi huun ... I haven't seen such beautiful bride.."...said Urvashi
Shravan blused..
"Lo ji sharavan bhi ready ho gaya..."
Said nirmala .." Ria aja..."
Ria came forward
"Aja meri jaaan..." Ria said
Shravan laughed...
She fixed tge sehra...
Rishi and agastya hugged shravan where raj clicked the photo...

"Chalo chalo baarat ka time ho gaya..."said nirmala
"Maaa suman???? "Shravan asked
"Bro woh tere baarat pe thodi nachegi??? Rishi said
Everyone laughed
Woh log venue pouch gaye... Ab late mat ho...
Suman tera intezaar kar rahi hogi..." Nirmala kissed hid forehead
Shravan sighed in happiness...
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Vandy hugged suman... Wow u r looking gorgeous..."
Aap bhi bhabi...".. Suman smiled
"Bhabi mujhe bahut temsion ho rahi hai.. "Suman said...
Shaadi ke liye ya raat ke liye???? "Vandy winked
Suman blushed...

Suddenly preeti came... "Baraaat aa gayi ... Diii jiju kinna handsome lag raha hai..." Preeti hugged suman
Suman blushed
Pandit ji called shravan...
Shravan got up... He looked everywhere...
"Bhai sumo andar hai"... puhskar winked...


"Ufff tu chal abhi teri sumo ayegi.. "Ramnatha hold his hand and reached the stage with him.. He made him stand

"Kanya ko jaiMala ke liye bulaiye.."
Pandit jii said...
"Jiji main leke aati hun... "Kamini said...

Shravan tensed up...
"Kya huya bhai ????"pushakr asked lowering his voice
"Chhote zindegi mein kabhi itni tension nahi huya.." He whispered

Shravan's eye froze on the scene where he found her lady love is dressed up in his favourite colour...

His heartbeat stopped...
Suman slowly slowly reached the stage...
Pushkar helped her getting up..
Suman stand infront of her.. She couldn't looked at him...
"Chalo mala pehnao..." Said ramnath..
Suman slowly raised her head...


His heart stopped for a moment
"Wowww"... shravan whisperd as their eyes met...
He was lost in her big hazelnut eyes...
His eyes roamed all over her face ...her big polki nose ring... Her perfectly shaped red lips...
Her big eyelashes...he let a sigh of relief

Mai tumhe ha bas tumhe chaha karu,
tu mili to zindagi ka paa liya har pal khushi ka, shukriya kaise karu, bas tumhe chaha karu


Shravan was lost...

Suman was looking directly in his eyes.. Those eyes is her life..
Those eyes made her beleive in love which he losts as a child... Those eyes gave her assurance of love and care... Those eyes gave her a family which she never had..
She was lost in him.. He is her prince charming wearing a maroon sherwani



Jai mala suru ki jaye

"Nahi nahi inti asaani se nahi "...said pushkar he and varun picked up...shravan
Suman pouted as this is impossible for her to put a jaimala on him...
"Hey Suman hum hain na... "
Rishi agastya n raj picked her up..
She threw the jaimala and giggled...

Shravan smiled looking at her smile..
Her smile
He can die fir her smile ..
He can kill for her smile...
His life depends on her smile...
Her smile made him believe that love exists
Her smile made him realise true meaning of life
That smile is his life...

Shravan sat on the mandap
Nanaji sat beside to do the kanyadaan

Preeti helped suman to sit beside shravan..
Pandit ji was chanting the mantras..
Shravan looked at her..
Preeti did the gatbandhan..

The havans fire reflected on her face and she was looking like a goddess..lowering her eyelids..
She smiled without looking at him when realise tht he was looking at her

"Ab kanya ke gale mein mangalsutra dalenge.." Panditji said
Kamini gave the mangalsutra..
Shravan leaned at her..
Suman Looked at him..
And feel the relief in his eyes
He tied the mangal sutra
"Ab kanya ke maang mein sindoor bhariye "pandit ji said

Nirmala placed the silver vermilion box in front of him..
He took a pinch of sindoor with his thumb and forefinger he gently pushed the maang teeka aside and fiiled the sindoor..
Suman closed her eyes
Few powder dropped on her nosetip from his finger..
Which maDe look her more divide
Sharavan sighed..
"Mine ".. He whispered

Khusnaseebi hai yeh mera maine tumko paa liya
Dil ko yeh bhi naaz hai ke tumne bhi apna liya..

She looked at him
He found tears brimming in her eyes..
He nodded no..
"Plzzz jaaan "...he whispered
She smiled..a tear drop fell from her eyes
He wiped her tear

"Ab var vadhu Pheron ke liye khare ho jaiye .. "Shravan standup. And found her struggling to get up.. He offered his hand she looked at him and slid her hand
He pulled her gently..
She stand up meeting his eyes
They shared an eyelock
Both of them were losts in each other

Raat din dil mein tujhe dekha karu
Tumne hi manzil dikhayi
Pyaar ki duniya sajai .. Shukriya kaise karu...
Bas tumhe chaha karu..


They started taking the pheres... Holding each other's hand.. First 4 pheres suman was following shravan..
Everyone was showering flower petals..


Meri chahat ko naya anjaam tumne ye diya, Zindagi ko zindagi ka naam tumne ye diya

Suman intensely looked at him who was taking pheres in front of her
"Ab dulhan aage aye..."
Shravan gave her the space...
Suman came forward amd they started taking the pheres..

Shravan looked at her who was walking infront of her holding his hands..
He remembers the first time she met her in his room.. Her teary eyes when he grabbed her and scolded her..
Now the same girl is infront of him...
The same girl who occupied his mind evertime..
The same girl whom he thinks he hated her..
The same girl about whom he kept to thinking all his life
He smiled at his foolishness

mai tere baare me bas socha karu,
Honsla tumne diya,
jeena ab sikhla diya hai,
Shukriya kaise karu,
bas tumhe chaha karu.

Vivah sampann huye ..
Shravan and suman came towards the elders.. They took blessings from nanu...
"Kaaash aaj meri priya hoti.. "Nanu sobbed..
Suman hugged him and cried...
Shravan hold her
Savitri hugged both if them.. "Ab jaldi se par nani banado mujhe.."
Shravan looked at her ..
She was blushing... Lowering her head..
"Ji mousi ekdam bahut din ho gaye ghar mein bachhe nahi khele "...said lalaji...
Suman was inable to meet anyone's eyes...
Ria came and took her ..
They seated on the stage.. Preeti offers her juice.. "Diii aap ne subhe se kuchh nahi khaya... Plzz yeh pee lijiye..".
Shravan widen his eyes...
"Sumo????? Kyun?????"
"Woh maine mannat mangi thi ke sab thik se lipat jaye to main vrat ..." She couldn't finish...
"Come on sumoo"... He called someone and asked for food...
He took the plate and srted feeding her..
She was feeling embarrassed by this.. And was unable to eat...
"Jiju aap mujhe dijiye".. Preeti took it and fed jer..

Vandy and varun's marrage started.. Shravan and suman stand there
Shravan put his hand around nher shoulder...
She sighed in happiness

When suman was about to entered the car shravan asked her.. "Toh ab apne ghar chale."????
.
"Apna ghar... Woh kya hota hai main to bhool hi gayi thi... Thank uu mujhe apna ghar dene ke liye.. She looked at him...
He pressed her hand
"Chalein sumo bhaaabhhhiii ."... Pushakr said and started driving
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Suman and shravan is waiting as vandy's griha pravesh is going on..
Becoz of her heavy lehenga suman in unable to hold her jai mala along with the gatbandhan..
They r waiting at the lawn .. Standing with rishi and raj.. When others are busy with vandy..
"r u ok??" Asked shravan
"Jii.. Woh lehenga itna bhaari hai.."she murmured
"Yeh mujhe dogi?? "He pointed towards the gatbandhan chunri..
"Nahin thik haiZzz "suman said adjusting her lehenga
"Zyada bhari hai??? "Shravan whispered
"Hmmm "she replied
"Dont worry .. Jab thodi der baad utar doonga to.. "He smirked


Suman biter her inner lips

"Ajao bachho..."
Lalaji called
Kamini held a plate full of yellow haldi
Suman dipped her both palms and place it on the outside wall .. Leaving marks on the wall of her both palms

Nirmala did the arati
She put tilak on shravan and cared his face
She put tolak on suman .. And kissed her forehead
"Meri bachhi "whisperd nirmala
"Beta pehle isko dheere se girake apna right pair andar rakh..."said kamini
Suman pushed the jar contains of rice with her right toe..
Suman put her feet on a plate full of milk n red dye...
Then put her right foot inside.. Along with shravan and came inside..
They took the blessings from the elders
Ramnath kiseed her forhead.. "Ab meri beti humesha meri paas rahegi"
Nirmala slid two diamond kada in her hands... "Yeh meri saas ne mujhe dii thi... Is ghar mein jab main pehle baar ayi thi... Aj yeh main apni bahu.. " She laughed
"Beta tujhe bahu bolna kaisa lag raha hai..."

"Jiji bahu mat bolo na beti ee bolo... "Kamini said
"Are bhai meri ek lauti bahu hai.. "She touched her chin
"Bhai sumo ko godi mein uthao.. Aur andar aa jao..."Said pushakr
With in a sec shravan scooped suman and entered the house...

"Chalo chalo angoothi dhoondne ki rasam jaldi karo" said savitri

Varun won the rasam and everybody laughed


"Sumo .. Tujhe jeetna hoga... @Said varun..
"Haa suman atleast ek bahu ki to raaj chalna ki vhahiye.. "Vandy encouraged suman..
"Nooo bhai... Plzzz mujhse aapki halath dekhi nahi jayegi.. Sumo ke atyachar ka shikaar ek main hi kaafi huun."... Pushkar screamed
Shravan winked
Suman widen her eyes and pointed towads the family members..
Shravan sat.. He moved his sleeve up and fist his forearm.. "Chalo dekhte hai kaun jeet ta hai..
Don't worry pushkar tera bhai hii.. Shravan couldn't finish as he found

Suman stumbled with her. Lehenga..
"Jaan samhalke..".. Shravan suddenly said loudly...
"Jaaan??????? "Varun teased
"Meri footi kismat.. Bhai aap to abhi se jaaan banake baitheho... "Puskar said dramatically...

"Bahut bak bak kar rahi hai.. Tujhe to bachhu main baad mein dekhti huun.." Suman pulled pushkar's ear..

"Lo aagayi meri bahu...apni sumo mode pe,..."Said nirmala

Suman bites her tongue

"Waise tu aaj raat ko bhai se pehle khud ko bacha le.. Bad mein mujhe dekh lena... Ankhen dekh teri pati ka..." Pushkar teased her...
Suman looked at shravan...
And slowly put her hand on the milk pot to find ring..




Now suman and shravan in searching fir the ring inside the bowl filled of milk and rose petals..
Suddenly shravan hold her hand
Suman looked at him and pleaded with her eyes..
Shravan smirked And gently pushed tge ring into her palm..
And smiled
Suman's eye widen as she realised that shravan found the ring but gave to her..
She slowly pulled her hand out of the bowl holding the ring
...
@Yeee. iska matlab suman puttar ki hi chalegi... "Said lalaji..

Ohhh nnnooo bhaiii.. Ap to gaye.. "Pushkar laughed
"Bhai... waise bhi ab tak suman kaa hi to ghar mein chalte aya hai "said ram nath...

"Chalo ab tum dono.. Ria n urvashi tum
Inko leke aooo... "Said savitri
Vandy and suman were taken to there room...
Suman pushed the door and froze as she saw the room
It was beautifully decorated with candles and roses...
Ria made her sit in the edge of the bed which was decorated with flowers
"Kya huya ??" Ria touched her chin
"Mujhe thodi ghabrahat ho rahi hai... "Suman gulped
"Everything will be fine...".
Ria said pressing her hands eith hers
"He loves you... And will be gentle dont worry" urvashi winked
"Tu ise aur dara mat"... ria bashed urvashi...
"Tum ruko hum shravan ko bhej te hai..." Ria said.
Suman smiled
Both ria and urvashi left the room...
Suman went towards the window
...

Suman opened the windows to let the breeze come..
Wind blows and some off the candle blown off...
There were only few candles on ..the the lights made the room more dreamy...


Suddenly suman felt ..a soft touch on her shoulder...
She closed her eyes and smiled
"Thank uu biwi .. ""Mere zindegi mein aane ke liye.. "Shravan whisperd and gave an open kiss on her shoulder
"Shrravan "shuman moaned..
He madeher turned around..
Suman lowered her eyes
Shravan kissed her forhead
She closed her eyes...
Shravan cupped her face ..
He leaned forward towards her lips..
Suman parted her lips..
Suddenly she heard a sound and found herself standing alone infront of his walking robe

She walked towards the bed and sat on the side..
She took the photoframe which was there on his bedside table..
"Sab aapki galati hai.." She looked at his photo..
She blushed..
"Aap ne hume kya se kya bana diya.."
She covered her face with her palm,.
She heard a sound..
"Shhravan "she murmured
She felt the footsteps coming close towards her...
Dhak dhak dhak..
She closed her eyes
She put her right hand on the left side of her chest.. And felt the heartbeat...

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"Yaar hum sab bahut thak gaye.".said raj..
"Ha dodo shadi liptana babba.. "Said lalaji..
"Achha ji.. Toh aap ne kya kiya.. Pure shhadi mein aap ki nazar to sirf khane mein thi..." Kamini glared...
Everybody laughed...
"Par sab kuchh kushal se mit gaya.. Bas.. "Nirmala said pouringwater on a glass...

"Oye time kyun waste kar raha hai... Suman kab se wait kar raha hain.." Said ria...
"Are nani ji bahut thak gaye the to unko room tak pouchake aya to abhi... "Said shravan..
"Haa thoda rest kar le baad mein bahut exercise hone wala hain ... "Raj winked...
Kamini was arranging gifts .. With nirmala...
"Jiji baki ka kal kar lenge... "Said kamini...

"Shravan baba aap ke liye parcel aya hain.. "Bahadur kaka came and handed a beautiful red box to shravan...
"Shravan aur varun ab tum dono apne apne room mein jao gift baad mein dekhna "said ramnath..
Ab to uncle ne bhi permission de fi chal rishi whisperd
Shravan got up..
His phone rang...
Private number...
He received
"Hello Mr malhotra... "Shaadi ke bahut bahut badhaiya... "
"Thank u ... Par aap kaun"... Shravan smiled
"Guess to karo ??? "Other person said
"Sorry actually... "Shravan said
"Ok chalo mera gift kholo to aap ko yaad ayega.. Abhi abhi bheja,." Other person said
Shravan frowned and open the box...
He took out a beautiful folded red churni from the box...
His eyes widen ...
"Shravan kya hai??" Asked Ramnath
There is a note..
He hurriedly read the note...
He stumbled but hold the chair
"Kya huya bhai??? "Pushkar asked..
Shravan was standing like a statue with a trembling hand
Everyone was shocked seeing his reaction..
He clutched the note and and looked upstair..
"Sumo!!!!! "He gasped

"Shravan ??? "Agstya shooked him
Shravan pushed his hand ran upstairs...
Pushkar varun raj rishi agastya followed him..

Shravan pushed the door with full force.. And found his room in a total mess...
All the flowers are scattered here and there..
Candles are there on the floor...
As if there was a tsunami in this room..,
All of them stepped inside..
But the rooom is empty...

"Bhai sumo kahan hai.. "Pushkar scream
"Where is suman ???"...rishi asked

"Sumooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!! "Shravan screamed
And he breakdown on his knees.. Holding the red churni in his hands...

Rishi and agastya rushed towards him and hold him..

Puskar took the letter and read
His eyes widen

Aap to famous ban gaye sir ji..
Ek gang rape case jeet ne ke baad inta naam aur shohrat..
Toh maine socha kyun na aap ko aur ek aise case gift kardu????
Ab to aap aur bhi famous hone wale hai..
Chaliye aap ka next case meri taraf se
Same type ka..
Victim ko to aap jante hi honge
Mrs. Suman Shravan Malhotra

To be continued

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Ok guys here is the update
Plzz let know how do u find the update
Plzz hit the like button and shre your thoughts through nthe comments...

One thing i need to tell this is tge last update of this year.. As i am out for a vacation.,
Hum tum will be continued on next year
Till then bye
Merry Christmas and happy new year in advance...

Luv
Piya
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Posted: 8 years ago
it was one of the best chapter...but last yeh apne kya likha???new year mein tension de di apne...anyway plsss update soon...

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