Shraman ff: HUM TUM part 27(updated on page 144 - Page 69

Originally posted by: Faith28

Aaesome!L brilliant!! Loved every bit of it👏Haye urvashi n mumbai i mein kya hone wala hai... Tension ho rahi hai😕Updt soon.

Hey thanK you yaar
Ya i will post ot with in this week

Originally posted by: krutish22

Mind blowing update priya

U depicted all characters very well and giving weightage to all in this chapter

Shravan is always in romantic mood. Bada Koi bhi chance nahi chhodta or Sumo is always in ye kya, chalo hatto mood mai, kuch jada hi sharmili

Car romance... Is good

I really pity on pushkar, bichara, use auto lena pada...

Waiting for next update

Thank uu dear
Ha shravan itna zyada bold hai ke suman ko shrmili hona hi padega .. Otherwise .. Shaadi se pehle bachhe ka annaprasan ho jata
Will post it asap

Ok looking forward for your awesome update 😳 😊

Originally posted by: Crazypiya

Thank uu dear
Ha shravan itna zyada bold hai ke suman ko shrmili hona hi padega .. Otherwise .. Shaadi se pehle bachhe ka annaprasan ho jata
Will post it asap

Shadi se pehle bache ka anprashan 🤣

Originally posted by: Sithara.Soman

Yes,you are right😊
Sometimes I behave like half-mad and sometimes tubelight😉
I am trying to make me strong but sometimes i am failed in this mission
Today onwards I will try my maximum in a positive way
Actually I trust you .I know very well you are an extraordinary writer.
You can handle any situation smartly
But sometimes my comments depends upon my mood
Now I feel like a fool😳 emotional fool 😳

Achha to ab main extra ordinary bangayi?? But haa twist to thodi ayegi...

Hi Piya...

Originally posted by: vimikrao

Hi Piya...

Wonderful chappy ab toh keh ne ki zaroorat hai nehin kyonki app to hamesha acha hi likti ho...

Lekin yeh kya hai Shravan will not be there for his sangeet & mehendi... Its really bad... Emergency shadi ke time par hi ana tha... Now Sumo will not be happy in her own function... She will be in sad sad mood...

BTW from where this chamak challo Urvashi come from... Sumo has seen her with Shravan & she will be thinking this till Shravan comes back I think... He will be there na for his marriage on the day... Dher na hojaye kahin dher na hojaye..!...

Update soon & thanx for the PM dear

Hey thank uuu for the comments
Ab shravan hai hi profile law yaar..
Case ka date aa gaya to jaana hi pada ...
Aur usne sumo ka dil tod diya..

Ab urvashi kya karegi yeh toh dekhna padhega

That was beautiful loved it from start to end. ...but he kya shravan or sumo ki judaaaiii naaahhhiii 😭😭 (ok sorry for the drama) but real me yahi feeling ayi thi ...and shock shock shock uravshi madam kaha se tapak gyi?? But don't know why mujhe eso feeling a rhi h ki jealousy track is on its way😉 jo bhi ho i know you'll write more than expectedlu awesome...so waiting waiting ...update soon...ab intezaar nhi hota...also thanks for the p.m and sorry for being extremeeellly late it read it in the day you posted but comment me late ho gya. ...hope you don't mind ...pls chotti bachi se naraz na hona. ..meet you soon😆

Originally posted by: Namiksfan

That was beautiful loved it from start to end. ...but he kya shravan or sumo ki judaaaiii naaahhhiii😭😭(ok sorry for the drama) but real me yahi feeling ayi thi ...and shock shock shock uravshi madam kaha se tapak gyi?? But don't know why mujhe eso feeling a rhi h ki jealousy track is on its way😉jo bhi ho i know you'll write more than expectedlu awesome...so waiting waiting ...update soon...ab intezaar nhi hota...also thanks for the p.m and sorry for being extremeeellly late it read it in the day you posted but comment me late ho gya. ...hope you don't mind ...pls chotti bachi se naraz na hona. ..meet you soon😆

Love,

Dolly😊

Hey dear thank u for the comments
Hey as i told u earliersab achhe hai ..