Shraman ff: HUM TUM part 27(updated on page 144 - Page 71

😆Di we know aap shrvn ko jada kuch hone nhi dogi hero h vo story ka😉 but sumo 😕vo to bimar ho gai na but ab shrvn aa gaya na😛 ab sab or bhi jada acha ho jayega or sahi m sumo bahut lucky h pushkar or varun jesa bhai pake or hm aap jesi writer pake 😊 this story is too good so caring family it's awesome 👏👏

hum tum is not really a simple one..its very unique...totally a masterpiece... [:D/]
loved it more cz it was a totally dffrnt one..pushkar & varun r jst prfct bros...i loved everyones concern toward shravan & suman...a lil tensn was there also..thank god piya,u hav made shravan return home fully safe & sound...
waiting fr a dffrnt urvashi..

and most importantly wedding da season hai yaar...shadi mubarak all 🥳

Hi di. i am a new reader of ur thread. I read all ur updates and they were all outstandings. thanks for recreating SHRAMAN magic again. U r really an amazing writer😊

Yayyy... Piya... First to lots of jgappiyan n pappiyan for you! Heart attack hote hote bacha hai! Lovely update as usual! But shravan... My god! Funny shravan... My babies... 😆😉 Then our very own shravan... Shravan malhotra ko sasti cheezon ka adat bhi nahin hai... Ufff! 😳 And then of course romantic and caring shravan! But... That angry shravan.. Just made my day...and yes... Suman was nice, emotional... Pushkie was funny too... My Virgin phone... 😆...but still my shravu rocked! Just can't get over! Okayyy this is my longest comment on any post in IF... So you can understand the excitement brewing in me... love you bahut sara... 🤗

Dear Piya,

Hats off to ur writing piya di... 👏
Loved the chappi sooo much...
U have beautifully narrated Possessive, caring, emotional sharman 😃 ...
Emotional scenes were bang on...
Loved pushman bonding. ...
And ...yes... hum tum is not a simple story it's an masterpiece
👏
Eagerly waiting for next part...Plz update asap 😃
And... congratulations... reached 100 pages 🥳

Originally posted by: Sadia.Ritu

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Followingthis story since my exams are over and this isamazing..I love the way theirbonding isgettingstrong...Ilove thisnaughty Shravan & shy Sumo😳

But why she calls him "aap"? Not like I amcomplaining...but justcurious!😆

Continue ASAPcan't wait!

Andcongratulations Piyali di..reached near 100 pages..😊

Hey my sear ritu darling thank uuu..that u liked it
Ok now why aap..
Here shravan is 5 yrs elder than sumo..
But as he used to stay away.. She was not friendly wid him.. She calls varun aap.. And pushkar aslo called aap to shravan .. Thats the culture
But when shravan came back she called him aap.. But as u all know its a sort of arrange marriage..
So nirmala and kamini told her to address her husband as aap.. Becoz he is elder than her

Originally posted by: Namiksfan

Yay!!! Shravan vapis a gya..i loved it too much the way she cared for him...the way he teased her...the way she got jealous ...and also the bonding of pushkar varun and sumo really hoped we could see such scenes in the show but thanks a lot for this...hope that evil man doesn't creates any problem for shraman in the future and the FaceTime calls were a bliss...and pushkar ka virgin mobile🤣i reall really love the length of your post so never ever shorten it and pls pls update soon isme zyada shraman scenes nhi the so we need more in the next and next is wedding i think??...whatever it is i know you'll write the best👏...also thanks for p.m and is baar i am not late yayee😉

Love,

Dolly

Thank u dear for your analytical update..
Are dont talk about the lenth yaar .. I can't write short one.. This one is more than 8000 wirds...