Shraman ff: HUM TUM part 27(updated on page 144 - Page 71

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Posted: 8 years ago
😆Di we know aap shrvn ko jada kuch hone nhi dogi hero h vo story ka😉 but sumo 😕vo to bimar ho gai na but ab shrvn aa gaya na😛 ab sab or bhi jada acha ho jayega or sahi m sumo bahut lucky h pushkar or varun jesa bhai pake or hm aap jesi writer pake 😊 this story is too good so caring family it's awesome 👏👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
Piya...🤗.Luv u so so so so much for this chappy...❤️
Dil kar raha hai ke duniya ke sabse khoobsurat phool tujhpe barsa du...😳
It was tooo good man...Suppper se bohot bohot uppar wala chappy...
jab maine padha ke accident ho gaya hai mera dil toh zoro se dhadakne laga...
Thank god woh sahi shlamat hai yaar...Dil vich thandak pe gayi...
pushky was too cute man...😃
At last Shravu is back without any jaanhanni😆 m the happiest person alive at the moment...
Par ye bich me kyu chood diya...zara..bas zara sa aur likh leti yaar...
Koi gall nahi...update Real SOON...aab aur intazar karna mushkil hai yaar...
Luv u to the moon n back..
Love,
ANU😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi piya, u r really fabulous writer. I am silent reader of this story and wait everyday for ur update. Love the way u r going with story. Pushkar part is beautiful. Please make feel special to sharvan by sumo. Story s every part is awsm. I must say there is should write for shows. Sure u get success. Zyada wait mat karwana want to see more romance between Sharman. Give chance to preekar also in comedy way... Thanks 👏👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
hum tum is not really a simple one..its very unique...totally a masterpiece... [:D/]
loved it more cz it was a totally dffrnt one..pushkar & varun r jst prfct bros...i loved everyones concern toward shravan & suman...a lil tensn was there also..thank god piya,u hav made shravan return home fully safe & sound...
waiting fr a dffrnt urvashi..

and most importantly wedding da season hai yaar...shadi mubarak all 🥳
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi di. i am a new reader of ur thread. I read all ur updates and they were all outstandings. thanks for recreating SHRAMAN magic again. U r really an amazing writer😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Yayyy... Piya... First to lots of jgappiyan n pappiyan for you! Heart attack hote hote bacha hai! Lovely update as usual! But shravan... My god! Funny shravan... My babies... 😆😉 Then our very own shravan... Shravan malhotra ko sasti cheezon ka adat bhi nahin hai... Ufff! 😳 And then of course romantic and caring shravan! But... That angry shravan.. Just made my day...and yes... Suman was nice, emotional... Pushkie was funny too... My Virgin phone... 😆...but still my shravu rocked! Just can't get over! Okayyy this is my longest comment on any post in IF... So you can understand the excitement brewing in me... love you bahut sara... 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
Dear Piya,
This was a beautiful update. The complete chapter is my fav. Dont know why I felt tht this chapter will have a glimpse of the childhood accident of Suman and there you are, you brought it in this chapter. Their bonding is going stronger. When will Suman outrightly say the magic words to Shravan ;-). You are going to get back Urvashi, hmmm waiting now to see how her character will be shaped. All the characters are wonderful, so this will be too. Love da guru Vandy bhabi started giving lessons to Suman. :-). Now waiting for the mid of week.
-Sri
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hats off to ur writing piya di... 👏
Loved the chappi sooo much...
U have beautifully narrated Possessive, caring, emotional sharman 😃 ...
Emotional scenes were bang on...
Loved pushman bonding. ...
And ...yes... hum tum is not a simple story it's an masterpiece
👏
Eagerly waiting for next part...Plz update asap 😃
And... congratulations... reached 100 pages 🥳
Edited by shaggy8 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Sadia.Ritu

Unress

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Followingthis story since my exams are over and this isamazing..I love the way theirbonding isgettingstrong...Ilove thisnaughty Shravan & shy Sumo😳
But why she calls him "aap"? Not like I amcomplaining...but justcurious!😆

Continue ASAPcan't wait!

Andcongratulations Piyali di..reached near 100 pages..😊



Hey my sear ritu darling thank uuu..that u liked it
Ok now why aap..
Here shravan is 5 yrs elder than sumo..
But as he used to stay away.. She was not friendly wid him.. She calls varun aap.. And pushkar aslo called aap to shravan .. Thats the culture
But when shravan came back she called him aap.. But as u all know its a sort of arrange marriage..
So nirmala and kamini told her to address her husband as aap.. Becoz he is elder than her
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Namiksfan

Yay!!! Shravan vapis a gya..i loved it too much the way she cared for him...the way he teased her...the way she got jealous ...and also the bonding of pushkar varun and sumo really hoped we could see such scenes in the show but thanks a lot for this...hope that evil man doesn't creates any problem for shraman in the future and the FaceTime calls were a bliss...and pushkar ka virgin mobile🤣i reall really love the length of your post so never ever shorten it and pls pls update soon isme zyada shraman scenes nhi the so we need more in the next and next is wedding i think??...whatever it is i know you'll write the best👏...also thanks for p.m and is baar i am not late yayee😉

Love,
Dolly



Thank u dear for your analytical update..
Are dont talk about the lenth yaar .. I can't write short one.. This one is more than 8000 wirds...

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