Shraman ff: HUM TUM part 27(updated on page 144 - Page 24

Fabulous..
Sumo.outside in dark and then shra helping her..Both slept together and poor Ramnath...although he must be happy..😆
ShraMan scene awesome
Continue soon dear
Thnx for two updates...

Amazing yar..

Awww... such a lovely updates. Awesome, loved it

Love is in the air...awesome update

piya my dear to be honest ab to words km pdre tarif krne ko tmhari...my darling u are just amazing...I'm at verge of loss of words u know...I read both parts two times...I was smiling like a maniac u know...u just give me a different vibe of shraman...I just love u for this a lot...wish I could give u a tight hug for this :) now about chapter...kya kahu from the beginning to end, it was so beautiful... how sumo was thinking about him, trying to find out wats exactly cooking in his mind n then his girlfriends n the dialog pta ni kiske sath kya kya kia hoga ...lol...hilarious one... then to his room...how she said she'll keep milk on table n he didn't say a word...n then sumo engrossed in beautiful thoughts n then the door banging thing...shravu k to color hi ud gye the face k..n sumo God she was panting like hell...felt very bad at that part :( then his rapid fire of questions n then sumo threw herself in his arms...wow n he consoled her...loved that part...it was so beautiful... n then how she innocently said upr jaoge n his reply tmhe aisi halat m chodkr loved it...n then the way they slept...wow ...like it was safest place for her n for him, he wont ever leave her as if she's his life which is true I know ;) n then ramu ki entry n reaction .. rofl koi v aise hi shocked hoga ...n then sumo woke up from noise n she was hell shocked n ramu was smirking...lol n how hard sumo was trying to release herself from his grip but hell, he was only tightening it ..lol.. n then pleading sumo n shravu ka reply ur so beautiful...God as it she's his wife...hilarious it was according to situation... n then shocked shravu ...acha hua ramu called him for a talk...n ramu kaise socha nirmu ko btyga to hyper ho jygi ...lol... n shravu ka reaction Maine kchni kia ...Mai use hate ni krta like ..wah ji good going. ..n then how ramu brought up about sumo k parents n his promise to them n then manpreet k bete adi (piya pls keep this ass out of shraman's life..this Guy was badly on my nerves n still is...hate him a lot...pls dear its a request as u gave warning he's going to be the kabab ka haddi so pls just throw him out as fast as u can or better keep his chapter closed...m just bloody done with this Guy...I want shraman moments mostly or only u can say...pls piya its a humble request dear..) n how ramu said ki ass adi likes her maybe (well who bloody cares about this ass) ...tm chaho to mai suman ki shadi adi se n ispe shravu ka reaction whoa thanks God he blurred it out...loved his surprised reaction ...lol...looks so cute in such situations...n happy ramu jio ...n shravu k I love u p ramu ka reply don't waste it on me...lol...ache jare ramu kaka .. n it was hilarious for me jb shravu said Mai janta hu papa ..n ramu was like kisne tmhe btaya n suman to janti v ni is bare m ...n shravu ka reply Mai v ek lawyer hu ...I was like whoa...really ...tb why didn't you understand the relation between pushman (sumo n pushkie) ...how he said pushkie n varun bhaia to ni to bacha Mai n man he was blushing... n then sumo ka thought dharti maa mujhe panah de do...rofl... n shravu to kch zyada hi fast nikla papa k lie tea n mere lie breakfast ...n one thing I forgot to mention in last part too. , how he was saying stop biting that...stop doing that...lol...as if he'll kiss her deeply...(waiting for this vaise badly ;) ) ...n kitchen m shravu k words mujhpe v dhyan de do...m hungry n sumo ka reply yeah n she lied that she had breakfast...n then in kitchen 3 things...I'm habituated to do my works...ur family not worker...n everyone loves u...maybe someone more than everyone ...m how sumo took name of everyone except him n how he cornered her n asked for an answer n on stairs too, how he cornered her... n how frequently he said that I too wanted to visit beach as I'll be free in half n hour n sumo ka expression lol...worth watching...n then his request wear blue n in conference hall I wish she'd have said gf n would be wife but alas friend :( n he was pointing towards her but lied...badmash.. n how he was staring her from corner of his eyes...n then how he said will be back n she too left n I knew it he'll search for her n will be hell angry on her...bina kaand kchni ho skta ...n how he didn't let her complete her sentence n said khud glti kro n ro n Mai tmhe ni chodke jaunga...n held her hand n at beach sumo's words stop looking at them like that n his reply wat ...hilarious it was n how he said u too wear bikini n she said m not like ur gf's n his reply I didnt have any...she must be dancing in joy...n then in water, how he was mesmerized by her beauty...held her from falling n second time kitna badmash hai how he let her fall...n then awkwardness of sumo how very well he understood...n shravu look at me n don't scream I knew it he would carry her in bridal style n yay he did...n how sumo said sb dkhre n his reply its not India...no one cares ...seriously sumo no one cares so enjoy...n then he took her to bikini shop lol...n his reaction after seeing her...so sexy...badmash ho gya hai ladka ;) n then how he felt her awkwardness n opened her hairs...wow good going Mr malhotra...n then again sb dkhre...n his reply ni koini dkhra n before she could answer you ended...this is not fair piya :( at least reply to likh deti :-p waiting for next part badly...pls update soon...I just love long updates ...n thanks for pm...waiting for next pm...loved it...it was so so beautiful...n sorry for such a long comment I guess kch zyada hi long ho gya maybe more than ur update ;( update soon sweety...waiting for more shraman moments...m glad finally they're opening up to each other ..:)

hi piya

Wowww just read chappy 8 and 9! It's simply 👏 really looking forward to it. Please pm me if possible!

Originally posted by: Namiksfan

This is soo bad u can not do this with me😭😭 cliff hanger? ?? Chapter ended without an answer?😭

But coming to the chapter it was height of awesomeness and i am facing a short of words to describe This..

Also thanks for a soo big chappy i like long chapters ..so basically the length was amazing..

What to say you area superb marvellous outstanding breathtaking and what not ...👏

Thanks for the pm

And we need a update soon and a big one (oh! Greedy me ..but couldn't resist when you are soo gud)😆😉

Also me first yayy😆😉

Originally posted by: anukulgr8

chod diya phirse..nt again yaar...cliffhanger😭😭answer toh likh deti na...😭as always chappy was awesome...👏n long of course...😃aakhir shravan koh realise ho hi gaya...aab sumo se bhi confess karvayega...par chipku ko mat lana yaar..😳..ShraMan scenes were so adorable...Kudos man...now cheeti cheeti update karna...warna meih to cliff se gir jaungi...😆