Hey Mitali,I gave a quick glance on the whole. Story looks good. But, I am not a huge fan of ShraMan Stories because my view on Ek Duje Ke Vaaste is different. I already had a good view on EDKV show and ending because it ended on a good & logical note, where Mr.Dilip Jha, other Script Writers, and Namik as Shravan did a great job by closing the show very well. Hats off to them.
I saw Shravan and Suman Characters as Drama Characters, and EDKV as a Drama Show.
I don't combine EDKV and ShraMan Stories & write on them because Mr.Dilip Jha has already given a good script for EDKV. Generally, I don't touch on somebody's original creation as it is Mr.Dilip Jha's Dream Project and his creation should be respected without being modified & prolonged with ShraMan stories.I feel it's Plagiarism because one should not copy somebody's else script and their original characters should not be modified. Good Authors with a really good writing ability will not take somebody else's work & modify Characters according to their whims and fantasies. Rather, they would create new characters with new subject & good storyline.
Shravan and Suman are very Decent Characters in Mr.Dilip Jha's Storyline. So, I don't want to touch his storyline nor his characters because his Creation has to be respected and appreciated just the way it is rather than prolonging stories & spoiling the EDKV actual storyline. As I am an Author, I respect other Authors Original Creation, and I follow the Guidelines of Plagiarism since I learned it from my Schooling Days.
If you ask me about ShraMan Characters Reality Bites, I can discuss about that being an Analyst and Critic.
Sorry, I am not trying to be rude to you. It is my Ethics and Morals that I respect others Original creation as it is & I won't touch nor duplicate anybody's Original work unless they ask me to do so.
Mitali, I want to share one more thought. I saw some viewers asking for ShraMan's romance as they couldn't see ShraMan's romance and intimate scenes. They wanted more of that, but if you see when a good storyline has ended on a good and decent logical note with great ethics and morals, it is not proper to touch that work by adding all these high romance and vulgarity stories to the Subject. By writing these ShraMan stories and by mentioning Shravan and Suman in these stories will spoil the Beauty of their Original Characters. Doing so is also spoiling EDKV's Good Name as it is has been cherished by all. People should understand if they love EDKV, they should respect Mr.Dilip Jha's Original Work & Characters without touching them.😃 :)
P.S. - This post is not intended to be rude. Really nice of you and thank you for sending me this story. Sorry, I don't want to touch on Mr.Dilip Jha's Original Creation as I strongly follow RULES AND GUIDELINES OF PLAGIARISM.😃 :)
Edited by katdarling - 8 years ago
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