Shraman TS-Karva Chauth(Ch 2-Pg13) - Page 11

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: vimikrao

It was worth waiting chap

Shravan's surprise was surprised me... He gifted her parents house as gift for karva chauth... Wow he is such a adorable...

Shravan kept fasting for Sumo... Yes he is right if Sumo is not what is the use of lambi umar...

Yes they bane Ek Duje Ke Vaaste

Keep writing

Thank You :)
IKR? Bina Sumo ke ka Shravan and the same is vice versa after all Shravan ka Sumo and Sumo ka Shravan *wink*
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Wiccamaya

emotional ... just like soft romantic song in moonlit night ... beautifully penned ...👏

Awww Thank You :)
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Posted: 8 years ago


Hehehe you really wanna know?!

It was very very silly and cliche!! 😆

But pls don't blame me OK?! I have an overactive imagination and when you said 'dramatic', all my cognitive processes had a field day!! 😛 😆

Well...I thought Shravan might go missing and Sumo might go all emo!! 😆
And you know the rest...

So just ignore that one bit! 😉 😆

Love
Cas
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: anonymousanju

mittu pehle to tell me how r u? ? perfectly fine na?? thanks so much for pm sweety... wat a chapter...so sweet, filled with love, fondness, care n just immense love... starting me how shravu dragged sumo n then how lovingly he kissed her palm where his name was written (hay m to blushing...itna handsome lovely husband) n then dialogs which I loved the most "hai Mai marjawan, " pagal ladki, "mard ko dard ni hota (its to hilarious one) "... n their tricks on each other they very well know...kaise sumo was calling him are sunte ho, aji suno ji .. loved her tone... n then shravu ka dialog anger wala ...lol...n their kiss (blushing)... n jb sumo got emotional surprise k bad tb I felt ki kahin sumo ka purana ghr to ni de dia n whoa I was right...aha how much he loves her n kitne ache se explain kia that materialistic things kya hai ...so true Jo khushi she felt after getting her old house as gift she'd never have felt after getting sari or Jewellery ... n then pushkie kitne ache se samjhaya ki kitna pyar krta shravu sumo se n how proud she was feeling...so cute pushkie... n then kaise bata kr gya that shravu too had kept fast n then puja k time how beautifully shravu described ...touched my heart...wat else a wife expect from her hubby...n their hug...that's the most beautiful thing of them... beautifully penned mittu ...so lovely...I truly loved it... pm me if u write more on shraman pls :) n sweety take care :)

OMG itta bada comment without soace,mein kya karoon Ab? (JK)
Thank You so much for this comment!
Gals you liked it.
Yes I would write more and yes I am better and will take care :)
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

A perfect gift...
Raw emotions...
Beautiful read! ...

Thank You! :)
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Namiksfan

Awieee mittu this was so so cute.definately a fluff ball!! Seriously loved it to the core specially the starting is sorry vala part...wholly it was amazing superb marvellous outstanding breathtaking and what not i am facing a short of words to say anything...just wanted to say keep writing and continue to make us happy..😃


Awww your comment definitely made my night!

So many adjectives WOAH!
Thank You so much. I am glad you liked it.

I sure will try my best to make you all happy :))
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: smart1010

Hello!!! Mitali aka Mitali styles from tt & our very own Mithuu.

It was such a beautiful chapter. Though I am out of my 'ShraMan withdrawal symptoms zone'. Still this chapter made me miss them. ShraMan will be special for me forever. I find it quite awks where shravan said her 'Suman Jaan' i never imagine him saying this cliche word to sumo :D Pushkar/Sumo convo is adorable & at the end Shravan's reason to fast is MASHALLAH!!!! ThnaQ for writing this one for us.

Much Love.
Stay positive & keep on writing more.
Mehwish aka your very own Mahi from tt.


Mera Mahi🤗
Thank You so much for coming here and leaving your comment.
I knew you would feel that way about 'jaan' but kya kare I lobe guys who call their girls that.Too flateing for me *blush*
Glad you liked it!

Love You ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Crazypiya

Such a wonderful ful piece of writing...
Hats off to your talent
I always wanted to see the karvachauth n diwali scene between tgem but the channel ruined my happiness..
And u gave it back to me...
A biggg huuuggg to you...
Awww shravan kept fast for her
And lastly pushkar..
Love u brooo for making her realise how much his bhaiyaa loved her


Awww thanks for your sweet words :)
Glad I could fulfill your wish.
Hugs back at you 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
Mittu t so beautiful adorable..
Love it yr...
👏 ❤️ 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: SleepyPsycho


OMG itta bada comment without soace,mein kya karoon Ab? (JK)
Thank You so much for this comment!
Gals you liked it.
Yes I would write more and yes I am better and will take care :)


ur welcome dear :).. lol always be prepared for my long comments ;) mujhe to long updates n comments ki adat h ..glad ur better... n yeah write more :) n don't forget to pm me :-p

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