FF Bitter Sweet Symphony#Thread 3: Epilogue on#Thread4 link on pg1 - Page 94

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Nitequeen

First of all let me tell you that...

U hd given us ample time for the fact that...
This story is gonna end soon...
To sink in...
Bt truth is...




IT DIDN'T...

Think of it as the next step of their relationship. Not as an ending but just the beginning of their ever after.




Coming to the story...
Yr endings r mostly nail biting...

They're, aren't they? 😉

Am nt sure who is in more trouble... Shravan ki sumo or the ##*#@ Khurana ????
This is a question I very much like.👏👏😃



As always eagerly waiting for the next chapter...
I'll updt as soon as I'm done writing.
This specific chapter needs so much care.


PS : Cud u pls try to streach it to few more chappie ???
Err... 😕 there will be an epilogue afterwards. Also, I'm not saying no to
a bonus chapter or two. 😳 However, can't give you my word yet.
(A secret - recently, I've been thinking about how Shraman will be like going through midlife crisis.😃)




Kya Karen... Dil hai ke Manta nahi...

And when you talk about your dils, it gets hard for lara to restrain herself from giving in.❤️

Love you so much, dear!
Take care till the next updt.

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: deltadawn

I am more a mess of emotions right now than a mix.

You dedicated the chapter to me 😃 thank you so much my IF JKR.🤗
Tightest hugs.
Your comments and love for the bitter sweet Shravan touched my heart.
❤️


My phone and IF are royal pains today so Res for the rest of my of my comment.
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unress
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So this is how I am a mess of emotions...

Lara I already had my fare share of roller coaster rides the day you put up this update and then this last one made me feel like I am never going to come out of the 90 degree drop you have created in here.

I love roller coasters, especially the crazy drops.😃


It was so beautiful, your description of the smaller things. which we sometimes fail to notice as love. of course its love. Its care. brushing off the dust from her dress first, fixing his hair first 😊 I prefer this kind so standing in a puddle of mush here.

Aww... me too.😳

Don't you have it already? I love Nanu ❤️
He's ❤️

Winding up quickly aren't you. This is my favorite story on shraman and I am sad about it ending although I do see you have kept all the points opened for a master finish. How to say... the feeling is bittersweet 😊

Same here, honey, same here.
And I'm glad you caught those points, those loose threads.

Speaking of Masters... somebody seems to have a bigger crush on Vikas Khanna than Sumo 😆
Ahem...😃 Chupe rustam!

Khurana makes a Joker style entry and that scared me . I am hoping all will end well. I trust Shravan 😊 and Sumo (I call your Sumo Maha Kaali btw) too.

Maha Kali. Wow!
Let's see what awaits now.😉

Thank you so much once again for such a beautiful story and your words which can weave magic, bring thrills and chills with precision.👏

Thank you so much!😳
Lots of love.❤️
Take care till next updt. Tada!

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Posted: 8 years ago
I know that I have been MIA for the last few chapters but I have been reading them and enjoying to the hilt. Pasta made such cute entrance and loved the logic of his namin..I love masala dosa so thank goodness no one gifted me a pup😛
The proposal and what followed was really beautiful, but I don't know why , I wasn't able to shake off the feeling of doom and finally you proved me right 😃

She's pregnant, her phone is dead and Khurana is smiling menacingly...enough to run a chill down our spine..actually sat numb for a couple of minutes after I reached that end😊

So my question to you is, do you believe in happily ever after?

Author of the moment, can't you tell me, do I end up happy?😆
Edited by reshmanair356 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Aww you update so fast
Suman and Shravan getting married again .. It's a fresh start for them
Suman meeting her idol was so sweet... Vivek was stealing food from suman ... I was laughing when I read that I could just imagine suman chasing him.
Uhoh khurana is back... Left us in a cliff hanger
Thanks for the pm update soon



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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: devilaonmoon


Hey, Spandana!
First of all, take my tightest of hugs 🤗🤗🤗
Can't explain how happy I'm after reading your comment.

You've read all 50 chapter in three days! 😲😃
And knowing that you've enjoyed the story so much..., it's really heart melting, dear. Thanks!

About thread 1 and 2 being locked - yes, I know , and I'm working on unlocking them. Can't edit my own story! And I'm yet to get a reply from the Mod I sent the request to. I'm trying to be patient here, but IF needs to work on this issue. Where are the Mods when we need them?

Anyway..., 😃 you want more parts of Bitter Sweet. There'll be an epilogue and perhaps one or more bonus chapters in the future. In the meantime I'm editing the story, and you'll find extra scenes in the beginning on the Wattpad version of the story.

Writing professionally??? 😳😳😳
Well, I won't lie, I dream of it.
Maybe someday, after I learn more and be wiser... 😉 will you buy my book if I publish then? 😃

Lots of love,❤️
Lara.

Hey,


First of all, I'm so sorry for the late reply dear


Awww you are super amazingly talented so you deserve all the love & appreciation hun...ofcourse not just me but all EDKVIANS will buy your book with PRIDE afterall We all are EDKV Family & also you are such A BUNDLE OF EXTRAORDINARYTALENT!!


Eagerly waiting for future chapters of BitterSweet Symphony & still hoping you will give us some bonus chapters!! Greedy us na We all want you to write forever on Our Beloved EK DUJE KE VAASTE SHRAMAN!!!


Hopefully Mods will do the needful soon dear...


Once again Thanks a lot for this Wonderful story!!


Lots of love hugs,
Spandana



Edited by sptrno - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Dear Lara,

This story has been like an amazing, mesmerizing n fascinating journey...and like every journey it also has to come to an end...n I know that u will give a very befitting end to this wonderful story of urs...

khurana is back...n he had to...otherwise how cud he b finished...I know our 6'4" hero will definitely b thr to save d love of his life...but nevertheless it will b interesting to c how ur Shravan does it... 😊

looking forward to ur next update as always..

rgds

Anuradha
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Posted: 8 years ago
RES
Iss baar hadd ho gayi! Too late!
But I will unres by this evening! Promise!
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Lara🤗
First things first, take hugs!
Amazing amazing chapter!
Loved it!

I was at the edge of my seat in the end...
I had read this a while back but couldn't drop a comment, apologies!

The whole initial bit, spellbinding!
Shravan is such a jaan! I love him!
Tidying her and everything...
He has not one bad gene in his body!

I love you is always a fitting answer ❤️
For me, your writing is romance!
All encompassing...
It's so genuine I want to cry

Table moments! These two are so adorable!
I love Nanu, he's the boss!
"But is it not already in yours?" 🤣 #Swagster

Incorrigible, shameless bull ☺️
I love this!

Also, I have been meaning to say this for a while, I think Suman is pregnant!
I really believe she is!
Can't wait to see!

Wedding preparations
She's still planning on returning the money!
I'm happy...
Cause this is different, it's about respect.
Sure Shravan would lose it, but he'd understand...

That was some way if starting the car!
I laughed too hard at it!
With this treatment, I'm surprised nakhrili still works 😆

So she finally met Vikas Khanna! Dream come true Haan! Vivek is a clown! I like the fact that he'd been stealing food! And his father enjoyed it!!
Compliments toh theek hai, he would have liked Suman to be married to vivek 😆
Baap beta dono bach gaye, Shravan hota toh bharta bana deta🤣

I just got to know? That khurrana ran off! Damn it! I got creeps! I can't wait to see what's in store!

Also, this being the last part... is bitter sweet in its own stride... I have a lot to say about this piece... but I'll write that on the last chapter!

Love you!
Zoya!
Edited by orion23 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Javeria3991

Oh Shit!!!! Oh Shit!!! Khurana is back. When I read the chapter name, I thought about the devil in Shravan and Suman life and I completely forget about him.

Harming suman, khurana is doing the worst mistake of life because mess with anyone who is loved by shravan. He has signed his death warrant.
One moment suman and shravan were so happy and now their happiness is ruin and time is testing them again. And I know they face this and come out of it successfully.
Can't wait to read next chapter.


I know the chapter name can be deceiving and the real reason behind it -
a surprise entry of the devil himself. 😈 (evil laugh)

Edited by devilaonmoon - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Faith28

I loved loved loved it...😳 The re wedding thing is 👍🏼 Eagerly waiting...but why this creepo khurrana ki re entry😡 Hope shravi reaches on time😕


Thanks a lot dear!😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: mogu_togu

omg... the update turned scary as it was ending... it started so romantic... i am really worried for suman and the baby... all the signs are there for suman to be p...

pls pls pls dont let anything happen to them...


Ending was scary... mission accomplished. 😃

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