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orion23

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Brilliant update Lara!

It was so at the edge and you were on the top of your game throughout!

Suman wasn't the only one that felt varied degrees of fear! I did with her...

At one point I thought Nahiii!

Okay I'll elaborate, cause I love doing that 😆

I absolutely loved how you portrayed Suman's fear! It was so real!

Each time that leech did something repulsive I had goosebumps all over!!

Full points for a highly imaginative true to reality piece of writing!

Khurana! Assh**e!

He had the nerve!

When I read Nakhrili started without a glitch I had a feeling she was up to something..

Call it divine intervention or her mother's blessings, her car saved her life!

The whole car bit was brilliant! I didn't feel like I was reading.. It was more like I was watching it unfold first hand 👏

She saw the Mansion!

Even when he isn't with her, he is!

This right turn changed everything, moved everything in the right direction!

Kudos for your thinking!

I would have absolutely adored seeing the fear on that bas**rd's face!

It was all worth it!

His plunge to death, one less devil!

Brilliant stuff Lara!

I will party at this funeral...

I especially loved the fact that Suman didn't need Shravan to save her!

He was with her in heart, he was her strength, he didn't need to be physically present cause Sumo can save Sumo!

I can't wait to see how Shravan is, he must be dying of fear..

Pasta the witness.. hmm.. what do you have for us there haan?

I'm so happy there is more to this!

I on't tell you what I want or what I expect ...

Cause you will surpass it anyway!

You've been an inspiration Lara..

More on that, on the last chapter...

But for now,

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

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Posted: 8 years ago

#952

Originally posted by: orion23
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Impressive speed!😃

Congrats on being the first one, zoyaaa!!!🥳

Edited by devilaonmoon - 8 years ago

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orion23

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Posted: 8 years ago

#953

Originally posted by: devilaonmoon

Impressive speed!😃
Congrats on being the first one, zoyaaa!!!🥳

Sab kismat ka khel hai pushpa😆

Thank You!

I will unres tomorrow...

It's amazing!

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@devilaonmoon

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Posted: 8 years ago

#954

Originally posted by: orion23

Sab kismat ka khel hai pushpa😆
Thank You!
I will unres tomorrow...
It's amazing!

Ah... Kismat connection.

I love it.🤗

Thanks.

Will be waiting for tomorrow. 😃

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phoenix_edkv

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Posted: 8 years ago

#955

Claraaa !!!!!!!!!!

Thank you so so so so so so so so so so so so so sooo much for blessing us with another chapter. I was so sad thinking that this is the last one.

And the biggest sorry for being a terrible idiot, I didn't comment on a lot of chapters, but my love, believe me, I read every chapter, not once, lots of times, I even told my schoolmates to read on wattpad. I'm sorry *puppy face* (not cuter than Pasta though)

I already read the chapter, but will comment tomorrow, it's almost 12 na.

Love you loads

Madhu <3

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CarpeDiem_365

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Posted: 8 years ago

#956

"The devil whispered in my ear, You're not strong enough to withstand the storm.' Today I whispered in the devil's ear, I am the storm.'

I am glad you let her fight this battle !! Your Sumo is the hero of the story !!

Khurrana!! a much needed closure! !

And the Knights !! They can be with you in spirit,,not necessarily be in person !!

Pasta! !❤️

Finally I can breath easy! ! Last one had scared me out of my wits !!

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deltadawn

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Posted: 8 years ago

#957

My day off and hubby pings me to "read something good while you are sitting idle" and what do I see!!

An update from Lara herself. What else can be a better read 😃

Mahakali needs no savior She lived up to the name I gave her. Delta is dancing here

Although this was not the case when I started reading because the mind keeps falling into horrible horrible conclusions of how a story will turn around a bend.

But this one took the right road and the right "Right" turn 😆 Thank god for Nails 😉 and a very very weird mind on that girl you have created. She was a survivor and she showed it even now.

Great update kehne ki level pe hum hain nahi. We live off these gems.😊 Two more and then sadness will prevail the same as I felt on Oct 7 😭

Guess who is a Wattpad silent re-reader 😳

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@devilaonmoon

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Posted: 8 years ago

#958

Originally posted by: phoenix_edkv
Claraaa !!!!!!!!!!

Thank you so so so so so so so so so so so so so sooo much for blessing us with another chapter. I was so sad thinking that this is the last one.
And the biggest sorry for being a terrible idiot, I didn't comment on a lot of chapters, but my love, believe me, I read every chapter, not once, lots of times, I even told my schoolmates to read on wattpad. I'm sorry *puppy face* (not cuter than Pasta though)
I already read the chapter, but will comment tomorrow, it's almost 12 na.

Love you loads
Madhu <3