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mogu_togu

@mogu_togu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#791

it was written so beautifully... love, sarcasm, laughter, thou ghtfulness,longing .. all in one update.. wasted ox, buffoon. 😆😆 i really liked the way they open to each other.. honest to the core...

wait is on for next update already..

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VrindaTewary21

@VrindaTewary21

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Posted: 8 years ago

#792

wow...loved it to the core...❤️ oh the wanted look on sumo's face😳😆man shravan can truly read har mind well... And not to forget Sumo's GUTTER BRAIN🤣 THE CHAPTER WAS FANTASTIC👍🏼 wondering what will happen next update soon and plz on wattpad also😊

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Arpi1234

@Arpi1234

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#793

Now all the misunderstanding is cleared between then as they talked to each other..
But at the same time sumo need some space to get forget about cheating that Shravan almost commited and give their relationship a chance...
It doesn't matter that you've been with other women before me, because that is clearly not the main issue here but the fact that you were so close to cheating on me out of an extraordinary lot of malice..." This is what hurts sumo, cheating by her husband whom she loves wholeheartdly and never thought in her dreams that he will break her trust but he did...
I sound like a man who've been in love with someone for so long, and subconsciously have been waiting for her." really sweetest poison 😃
"I hate the time when you hated me, I hate the fear that I felt knowing it. But not you, I can never hate you, even if I try to with all that I have."Wonderful lines 👏
I love you, but I love myself too. Therefore, I don't ever want to let any past, any fear or insecurity make me into something that I'll grow to hate someday hats off to you 👏 can't say much now..
It certainly will be difficult for sumo to send Shravan back to their House..
Let's see how she do this and thanks for pm..

Love
Smita

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Rawish

@Wish6999

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#794

Waiting... '"

When are you gonna update?

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#795

Originally posted by: Nik03
Res
****
Unres
First of all, Am truly Sorry Lara for unressing this late...You have even updated next one too n here I am ... 😕
Showwiii 🤢

Coming to upiii...!!
A tight 🤗 to you ya.
Brilliant one bro.. 👏

So Sumo had left for TK.
My heart goes out for Sumo...Isnt it the worst feeling for a woman?
A husband whom you loves like no other does something like this , even though in a fit of rage or hatred!!
But am glad that your Sumo is much more sensible here...Not taking a haste decision...She does need some space , for herself..for him n for them!!

Negativities must be ripped off from the depth of their roots and in the soonest possible time ..❤️
So true.!!

Preeti...Lil sensible here 😆
The bun in her lil sister's metamorphical oven was the proof of it ... 🤣

Must have been burglar blood running through their veins.. 🤣 🤣
Oh My My..!!
Lara this is incredible... 😆

Sumo's insecurities, her fear is justified here.It is natural to feel this way.

This Vivek...Job at PTC 😆
This Vivek...Something is weird...Or just my imagination??

Sumo in blood red saari...
Her mixed emotions..Her anticipation...Her worry, anxiety,...Beautifully penned down dear...❤️❤️

Shravan didnt came... 😕
Pushkie Pie... 😳
He knows his Bhaiya-bhabhi too well to miss anything.
You did hit the right spot bro... 😊
Shravan is indeed like a volcano...A blasting one!!
His isolation...😕

Kamini n her oh so perfect, sophisticated Carol... 😡
Oh My.!!...Sumo's insecurities... 🤢
Comparison with that cheepster...But it was her insecurity!
It was not a road covered with cheese n stars after all...Loved it!!

Ramnath Malhotra...Oh Man!!
He is soo sweet.I couldnt hate him in the show too...A very caring father he was.😊

Pushkar ...I sooo love him ❤️
Generous Woman... 🤣

I sooo damn loved how Sumo's thoughts wavered here by you buddy...Amazingly Penned down
What had Shravan ever seen in me?
What had Shtavan ever seen in that woman?...Soo Loved it bro 👏
Kamini ... 😆

That bone-chilling scream...I can imagine Shravan here sending shivers down my spine.
The Ghost of she-who-must-not-be-named...LMAO 🤣 🤣
Oh God Lara...How you do it girl...you write love, pain, suffering, fun n much more fun in just one upii!!
Just Love you ya .. 🤗
You are damn talanted... ⭐️

That SUMAN...Oh 😳
Shravan came...But Drunk...OMG!! 😆
In a family function...Brother's engagement... 😆

I was a virgin until you...Shit!!! 🤣 🤣
That was quite Bold though 😆
Sooo Loved the reactions... 😆
Ramnath Malhotra... 🤣
Kamini n Pushkar... 🤣 🤣

What a Blasting one Lara...Loved it to the core ❤️
Hell exited to read next chappi... 😳

Thanks for the pm dear 😊
Loads of Love n 🤗
Nikka sa Nik ❤️

Don't worry, Nik dear, I'm myself being a turtle too. 🤢

Thanks for the wonderful comment!

*Hugs and love!

🤗

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#796

Originally posted by: Niceson
Lara...every time I read ur story u make me remember why I like ur story n wait for ur update ...I know many people have complimented on ur writing skill so its not new for you but i would like to say it again YOU ARE AN AMAZING WRITER ...even though this chap was serious on its own way the last part was quite hilarious the part where shravan confessed to sumo that he was a virgin before he met her and also ramnath's reaction ...every great thing has to come to an end eventually but i am sure you will end this story in the most absolute fitting way this story deserves ...dont stop writing on shraman after you finish this FF plzzz...wow first time i ve written this much of a big post 😆

Aw, dear, thanks a lot for saying such lovely things and having the trust in me!😳

Love you so much.

❤️

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#797

Originally posted by: Nitequeen
Don't want to be too pushy or demanding...
Par kya Karen Dil hai ke Manta nahi...
Pls pls pls update soon...
You must be getting bored of listening to yr praises...
But truly speaking...What a fabulous writer u r...
Love the way u hv knitted this story...
Making me fall in love with yr writing as the story slowly unfolds...
Ws a lil heartbroken when u mentioned abt da story advancing towards its end... Bt am sure u'll b ready with another one...
Happy writing...

Hey, thanks! 🤗

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#798

Originally posted by: BhataktiAtma.
Hi Lara long time no? 😳 But better late than never catched up last few chapters and have to say loved it every single one of them.
40-46
Ahem so Sumo madam successful managed to rescue Adi and as well as got a free gift for herself who turned out as the only son of her favourite chef and idol. Ok dude is crazy but I love him bas🤣 and jealous Shravan was cute something i wanted to see in the show but what got was an jealous, insecure and insensitive jerk. 😡 Khurana was defeated too easily agree with Shravan there. I mean he is a devil and devil's don't go down so easily. It's hard to believe.
Then Pushkar Peda managed to create a complete new dish with Pretty Preeti. Terrific 🤣 oh boy the office scene boss brothers running away with one of bosses wife running behind them with a hammer in her hand buwahaha 🤣 employees must have good fun watching this drama then comes a flying hammer breaking the glass of a window but even after that poor Pushkar didn't managed to come out unscathed he did ended up having a black eye courtesy Shravan much to giants delight 🤣
And then next victim to Sumo's assault poor Vagga well wrong timing buddy to mention about loopholes to the wife cities finest lawyer with whom even lawyer sahab himself wouldn't dare to mess 😆 Kameeni aunty k toh kya kehne full of poison as usual and Shravan boy glad u stopped before you reached to the point of no return but even having those thought left me with mixed feelings about Sumo leaving you on one hand I feel sorry for you and on the other hand glad that finally Sumo had enough of it and left even if for a short while to return back to you. Well you kind of deserve it. Kameeni aunty back to her antics mentioning Carol as wedding planner and all praises she had for her flopped terribly by her own son Ramnath he is such an amazing father in law here were as in show toh he used to behave like an evil saas and last bit Shravan 🤣

Thanks, dear! 🤗

About Ramnath, I'm glad you like his non-evil saas version in the story. 😃

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

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+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#799

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Dedicating this chapter to - Sadia.Ritu 🤗

Chapter 48

Removed

We're very... very close to the end of Bitter Sweet Symphony. I began writing a short story, went with the flow while writing, and see now we've reached chapter 50 almost. Unbelievable! 😲

Did you enjoy reading this chapter? What was your fav part / scene / dialogue? Do tell me about your view. 😃

I want to finish today's author's note with the blurb of Bitter Sweet Symphony for the Wattpad version. If you haven't read it already, here it is...

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~A clash of battered ego, and love.~

~A friendship, broken by reasons hurtful, only to be rediscovered when they meet again and grow it into a far more beautiful something. But only after bleeding throughout an excruciating journey of bitterness and redemption.~

Shravan and Suman shared a past, and friendship when they were in high-school. But along the way Suman changed into a cold and vile teenager and delivered Shravan the kind of grief that changed him radically. From that moment on, the pain Shravan had lived with made him hunger for revenge. He thirsted to apply on Suman the same amount of pain she drowned him with. And he succeeded, when he returned ten years after. But Suman was a changed woman now as well, who'd made it one of her life's goals to gain forgiveness from the friend that she'd failed years ago.

They are both villains in this story rather than heroes, redeeming themselves all along.

Misunderstandings and clashing egos, revenge and pain, hastily made wrong decisions and consequences take them both somewhere - where they are destined to be.

This is their bitter sweet tale of letting go; growing up; and maybe along the way - falling in, at last, inevitably in love.

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Don't forget to like and comment, please! 😳

Take care till the next upload,

Lots of love,

Lara.

P.S.1. PMs will be sent to those who've liked and commented on the last chapter.

P.S.2. I'm extremely sorry for not being able to reply all of your comments. But know that I've read them all. And I thought you would like more if I updt the next chapter straight away without delaying two more days while I reply to each and every comment. Are you angry? Can I be forgiven?

*Showing puppy face - the one Shravan gifted Suman. 😊

Edited by devilaonmoon - 8 years ago

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