FF Bitter Sweet Symphony#Thread 3: Epilogue on#Thread4 link on pg1 - Page 45

Originally posted by: Castile2

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Hey Lara 😳

Hey!

Truly it was a night to remember...

I know.😳

We had this landmark update with the much awaited consummation and our stars won an award and the FAM saw them together after months...

Yesss!!!😃

Their tryst in the park! The poor eyes of those oldies😆

And you mixed the terrace, the swing and the stars and what we get is the dream romantic moment right there! 😳

Yep! Thanks!!!!!

I remembered ShraMan's dinner date on show and how Suman Madam had trashed the menu!! 🤣

And footsie!! Its good she didn't kick him hard the very first time she felt his legs under the table... 🤪

I just loved how you made them romance like carefree teens for once, something that they clearly couldn't when they were actual teens...

But oh well. Better late than never 😛 😉

Absolutely right you said. 👍🏼

"...being so lost in each other all the time." ❤️

Hey hey hey! I wanna ask you something... Do you like rollercoasters a lot? Cause your chapters are no less than a rollercoaster ride! 🤪

You guessed it right! I do love rollercoaster rides 🤗

Simmy, dear let the gal have some intimate moments first then tease her...oh darn! After the end of this chap you can!! 🤣

Suman. Whipped. Oh. 😳

I had thought this would be a very lighthearted and romantic update but somewhere in the back of my mind, I knew it can never be cause its you we are talking about Lara! 😆

hee hee...😳

But I like twists!! 😈

Mission Masalawala begins! Huh you go gal!!
Show that scoundrel Khurana who he messed with and who's the Boss 😎

Sumo's the boss.😎

The entire kidnapping act was a bit edgy and I thought something was going to go wrong but phew 😛

But but but...something else did went wrong 😕

The poor bear was kept in dark and I can't fathom the worry that he would have been in...!

Yes woman! Shravan would get a heart attack anyway living with you... That poor soul!!

But he won't have it any other way, won't he? 😳

Nope, he definitely wouldn't have it any other way. After all, this is the girl he fell in love with.❤️

And the confrontation, Shravan's worry and anger and disbelief... All of it was so palpable and nerve wracking dude.

And Suman's agony and guilt at keeps things from her husband...

I bet she would have been jubilant about this adventure of hers if Shravan knew about it!!😆

She would have been locked up in a room then with Shravan standing guard out the door.😆

From despair to gutterish to painfully romantic... You just know how to keep us all hooked!! ⭐️

"Just don't try to send me to a early grave with your adventures in the future. Always remember that there's nothing that scares me more than the fear of losing you."

Uff! God bless you my child! 🤣 🤪

No darling... Your husband would defo lock you up in a room. Uh-huh. No doubt.

"It can't be helped, Sumo. You're like my own personal devil, since always, giving me hell every now and then, making me want to destroy the whole damn world."

GOD!! This man is something!

*sighs dreamily

And the much much much awaited part...

Finally they are one in all true senses...

But hey you won't let it end so simply for us here, would you?! Nope!

For a know it all scholar like Suman Madam, not using protection was a rookie blunder!!

And you left us hanging there! Man how could you do this to us?!! 😲

I can't wait to see what happens next...please please update soon OK? Or else we'll have a heart attack anyway! 😆

High End Splits: Clearly, plans - grand or not, were not their forte after all. 🤣

Till then

Love
Cas 😊

Love you too, Cas!

P.S. Took me ages to complete this comment but don't blame me OK?! Its your fault and your update was so gripping and amazing, I read it multiple times instead of commenting! 😆 😛

Aww... you made me speechless here.

P.S. The Unknown Man Mystery. Scoundrel Khurana. Sakshi-Adi. Bad feeling bad feeling. Red light. Not good.

There'll definitely be a red light in the future, let's see...😉

Thanks a lot for the long and lovely comment!!!

*hugs and kisses...

- Lara.

Originally posted by: devilaonmoon

Originally posted by: orion23

Lara! I have never ever been at a literal loss of words. This moment goes down in history. I read the part, I reread the part and I reread it again till I finally had some words to put up here. See how late I am in commenting, it's all your doing. You blew me away with this one. So much so that I didn't want to comment till the comment was worthy of this piece. I still think no combination of words would suffice, but try I shall.

You're making me so emotional, Zoya.

Hearing such lovely praises from so talented writer like yourself, it feels awesome, yaar. ❤️

Firstly take massive hugs 🤗 🤗

*Hugs back tightly

The entire build up of A Night that would be Remembered, the wait was more than made up for. Goes without saying I read the Wattpad Version. And simply put, I loved it! I will however list out a few things that absolutely stood out in this masterpiece.

I always believe myself, all good things to those who wait. ShraMan got their's definitely. 😉

I'm glad to know you're satisfied with the build up to the night.

The initial giddy in love moments, the terrace swinging, the footsie at dinner it all made me blush like a puddle of goo. I love your ShraMan. I want a Shravan as envisioned by you. Each of us should have one of him.

I envision this Shravan twenty four seven! I want one too... 😳

If I was a happy unicorn a few moments earlier I became pensive when I got to the kidnapping part. I was always bothered with Khurana. The entire bit I was reading so fast, as though reading fast would get it over soon, I just had to know they got out unhurt. I was wrong in judging Vagga wasn't I. He did do the job plus one. Who's the handsome looking guy calling himself insane? No more surprises please Lara.

Don't underestimate the power of a masalawala. 😆

No more surprises - errr... 😕 but I love surprises! 😈

When Shravan's many missed calls and messages came to light, my heart felt for him. He would have died had she not answered the 34th time. His anger, you wrote it so well I could imagine Namik and his raging bull act. It was a treat. I wish he would have boomed a little longer. But the get out seemed to fit the bill just fine. I can't believe Vagga tried to brag, messing with the lion, he was lucky he lived. It did make me laugh though.

Haa haa... Now pray that Vagga doesn't come in front of Shravan again.😆 But hey... 😃 that would be something very interesting, right?

Shravan was right in worrying cause I have a bad feeling about this too. Lara my love, be kind. I know Khurana won't sit quite but don't be too harsh. I simply can't bare to see the two hurt.

I would rather stay quiet here.😳

Shravan in the shower was an amazingly written part and everything that followed managed to invoke too many feelings. It hit the right spot. I had to pause after each sentence. You slayed it. Very few writers have a knack to write mature without going overboard or graphic. You had the perfect hint of intensity, love and intimacy! I'll leave it at that.

Thanks a lot!

Obviously that scene took me the most time to write down. Needless to say I've rewritten it a few times until I could pen down that desired balance.

I am declaring this by far your best piece. Spellbinding.

I am yet to read a piece quite like this. Thank you for surpassing my expectations. This I will remember for a long, very long time. You do know your work is an inspiration to me right? You are an inspiration.

Can't wait for your next.

Nothing can feel this good than the feeling of knowing that you're inspiring someone.

You make me want to dive into screen and drag you out to hug the life out of you,Zoya!

Love and limitless admiration,

Zoya

Thanks a lot!

Your words are always so encouraging.

Love you so much.🤗