FF Bitter Sweet Symphony#Thread 3: Epilogue on#Thread4 link on pg1 - Page 38

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: orion23

Lara!

Who the man?
You the man!
What an update!
Yeh toh latest news hai😆 - I'm the MAN !!!???
Thanks waise.😃

Okay so I had expected *ehem* *ehem* content but I'm glad you didn't give it!
Cause I love it this way more!!
Thanks again for supporting the courtship or dating.😳 Really feeling glad and relieved knowing of your approval.😃

So that kiss! Smouldering bro!
Shravan looked ☺️ is it?
Now that's one visual that ain't leaving my mind, ever!
*********☺️***********

They slept oh so cuddly with new promises ringing in..
Love!!!!

Sumo dangling laces in front of him, oh the starved man!
😆
He brought this on himself😉
True.😛

He made breakfast!
He's a keeper! I just keep falling more and more in love with your Shravan!!

Can't wait to see him wooing her
Dating
I hope you've enjoyed the blood moon as their first date? Waiting to hear your view about it. 😳 Your star and moon gazing idea got me there after all.

Oh man Khurana! Please don't let him hurt Sumo...
And I hope she tells Shravan, for if he gets to know later, it's funerals all the way!
Why do I love that funeral word?😈
But you never know, I especially love writing about an enraged Shravan.😉

Loved this part Lara!
Can't wait for the next...
Thanks!
I hope you love the next chapter.
Sorry for replying so late!😭

As for ideas to woo her, I know you'll rock them, but this tucch prani has a few:
- Star gazing
- Vacation
- Road side food fiesta
- Singing
- Constant dates
- Writing poetry
😃

Super sei uper ideas which will get mixed up and give birth to hybrid ideas. (Already applied one) 😉😉

Thanks a lot, Zoya!
You're one of the sweetest person in this forum. Really.
Love you.🤗

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: trayee

mission of charming sumo started...wah..grt..
update soon...cant wait to see our charmer mr. malhotra


YES, Mr. Malhotra's charming mode is on. 😎
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Posted: 8 years ago
Chapter 38 & 39 beautiful updates sorry for being late lateef 😳 Shravan making breakfast for Sumo aww so sweet abb jaisa bhi bana ho bande ne efforts toh daale that's what matters and now I am pighaloing chalo so we know now where Shakshi's brother is kept by the devil incarnate hope both the ladies get successful in their mission and I really really hope and pray this don't lead to Shraman in any danger Sumo I am really scared for you though troubles and danger will come their way but hope won't lead to any serious damage on a lighter note loved Sumo's gangster avatar and activities and what a deal she struck 😆 one month free food in PCT wonder how Shravan is gonna react after knowing this and the first date was beautiful
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lara..🤗
It is amazing like always..
ShraMan..
Courtship begins..aww..
Love it..❤️
Thnx for pm dear...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Unresed on page 50.
I'm terribly sorry for the delay...
❤️

About your reply ^
Aww man!
I loved the blood moon part..
I'm going to love all the ideas or their khichdi, anything from you is a treat!

You like the word funeral haan? I'm going to take that as a hint😆 Can't wait!!

About me being the sweetest person! Dude! I love you!
Thank you so much!
You are no less sweet yourself...

Patiently awaiting your review on my new update "Postcards From Our Future", you after all are a very important critic to me...
Among the few replies I actually wait for, you are very high on the list🤗
Edited by orion23 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago


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Posted: 8 years ago
Res
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Unress

Hey Lara 😳

Truly it was a night to remember...

We had this landmark update with the much awaited consummation and our stars won an award and the FAM saw them together after months...

Their tryst in the park! The poor eyes of those oldies😆

And you mixed the terrace, the swing and the stars and what we get is the dream romantic moment right there! 😳

I remembered ShraMan's dinner date on show and how Suman Madam had trashed the menu!! 🤣

And footsie!! Its good she didn't kick him hard the very first time she felt his legs under the table... 🤪

I just loved how you made them romance like carefree teens for once, something that they clearly couldn't when they were actual teens...

But oh well. Better late than never 😛 😉

"...being so lost in each other all the time." ❤️

Hey hey hey! I wanna ask you something... Do you like rollercoasters a lot? Cause your chapters are no less than a rollercoaster ride! 🤪

Simmy, dear let the gal have some intimate moments first then tease her...oh darn! After the end of this chap you can!! 🤣

Suman. Whipped. Oh. 😳

I had thought this would be a very lighthearted and romantic update but somewhere in the back of my mind, I knew it can never be cause its you we are talking about Lara! 😆

But I like twists!! 😈

Mission Masalawala begins! Huh you go gal!!
Show that scoundrel Khurana who he messed with and who's the Boss 😎

The entire kidnapping act was a bit edgy and I thought something was going to go wrong but phew 😛

But but but...something else did went wrong 😕

The poor bear was kept in dark and I can't fathom the worry that he would have been in...!

Yes woman! Shravan would get a heart attack anyway living with you... That poor soul!!

But he won't have it any other way, won't he? 😳

And the confrontation, Shravan's worry and anger and disbelief... All of it was so palpable and nerve wracking dude.

And Suman's agony and guilt at keeps things from her husband...

I bet she would have been jubilant about this adventure of hers if Shravan knew about it!!😆

From despair to gutterish to painfully romantic... You just know how to keep us all hooked!! ⭐️

"Just don't try to send me to a early grave with your adventures in the future. Always remember that there's nothing that scares me more than the fear of losing you."

Uff! God bless you my child! 🤣 🤪

No darling... Your husband would defo lock you up in a room. Uh-huh. No doubt.

"It can't be helped, Sumo. You're like my own personal devil, since always, giving me hell every now and then, making me want to destroy the whole damn world."

GOD!! This man is something!

And the much much much awaited part...

Finally they are one in all true senses...

But hey you won't let it end so simply for us here, would you?! Nope!

For a know it all scholar like Suman Madam, not using protection was a rookie blunder!!

And you left us hanging there! Man how could you do this to us?!! 😲

I can't wait to see what happens next...please please update soon OK? Or else we'll have a heart attack anyway! 😆

High End Splits: Clearly, plans - grand or not, were not their forte after all. 🤣

Till then

Love
Cas 😊

P.S. Took me ages to complete this comment but don't blame me OK?! Its your fault and your update was so gripping and amazing, I read it multiple times instead of commenting! 😆 😛

P.S. The Unknown Man Mystery. Scoundrel Khurana. Sakshi-Adi. Bad feeling bad feeling. Red light. Not good.
Edited by Castile2 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi Lara 😊
It was an amazing chapter dear!
The kidnapping, Shravan's outburst, dem consummating der marriage, evrythin was beyond awesome
Besharam chapter bhi tha thoda sa, haha 😛
Shravan had planned evrythin and yet he was so patient wen things didn't turn out d way he would hv liked. He's a darling 😳
But Sumo did not make him wait nymore and u did not keep us waiting nymore 😉
Thanks for d beautiful story, awaiting d next chapter.
Plz update soonish 😊

Lots of love,
Anum ❤️
Edited by anum20jamali - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
oh my god
read both versions
totally hot
absolutely loved It
continue soon
superb
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Posted: 8 years ago
Take a bow lady 👏
Read both versions and just loved how nicely you took forward the entire story...
The kidnapping and Sumo's initial way of explaining was so Khushi Kumari.. 😆

And then everything after that was all you.. you bring Shravan alive in front of my eyes with each expression and his total exasperation at his wife's behavior..

last part was 😳 long awaited by all and much more than expected.

👍🏼

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