FF Bitter Sweet Symphony#Thread 3: Epilogue on#Thread4 link on pg1 - Page 14

Originally posted by: aayra24

Loving the way Sumo gets flustered every time Shravan is near her...their dialogues are so much fun...I just couldn't stop grinning..

why do I think something is fishy??...the Halloween party ... witch theme and the party being arranged by kamini

Great going girl... already want the next chapter *facepalm*

Originally posted by: evaviego

I am having a severe cold and was planning to go to bed at 10.

But then you said u were about to update and i so i waited till 12...!!

and after reading.. I felt.. IT WAS SO WORTH THE WAIT .. ❤️

Oh! 😭 I'm sorry to keep you waiting for that long.

But I'm glad that in the end it made you happy.

*hugs🤗

The way u dealt with the pre nup agreement.. Amazing.. 👏

In the last chap i thought ab toh gaya sab.. sab khatam..

and in this one i realised this only brought them closer

Yep, this only brought them closer.

Some chaos, that is why, are necessary.😉

Just love the way you write and how the story is moving forward... ❤️

and ofcourse Sumo's Self talks/ thoughts.. This is something i love the most in your story..

Superb Update Lara 🤗

Aw..., thanks!

Rewriting a chap 4 times... Man... So much pain for just one chap... 😲

I'm trying to give my level best efforts. And trust me, it's so worth it while I read the comments from my lovely readers, see the response... and - I'm like - I would write and rewrite a chapter a dozen times to receive so much love and happiness.😳❤️

But you did a tremendous job 👍🏼

Originally posted by: manisha771

You don't know Lara how eagerly I was waiting for ur updates.

This is so damn good. Loved the parts where shravan climed up the window and cleared everything and then Shraman having breakfast 😆

Is preeker marriage on the cards??

Will be waiting for the nxt update...

Originally posted by: arshuaar

amazing...
loved it...

Originally posted by: BhataktiAtma.

Okay who sent those papers and why I am having not so bad feelings for this Halloween Coven themed tea party 😕 anyways buwahaha Shravan barely got saved from that vase attack from Sumo be ready Shravan this is what your future is gonna be when wifey will be pissed at you🤣 but good misunderstanding has been cleared off :)

Originally posted by: krutish22

Dear Lara
U r really great writer
Love ur writing skill
Always waiting for ur update
Update soon

Originally posted by: Joyness

Just loved it...now shravan going to cross bridges . ...

Originally posted by: Safire

Nice writing!! Glad that one misunderstanding got cleared easily!!! And alas shravan tho baal baal Bach gaya sumo ke vase throwing se!!! He will have to be extra careful in the future😲 i loved the convo between sumo and preethi at the end of the chapter!!! In a nutshell a very wonderful chapter👏

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

good going..👏

Originally posted by: _Eternity_

Lara.. 🤗
Awesome chapter like always.. 👏
U know what I was also scared like sumo who at this hour.. 😆 ..
Sumo my husband will come out of bathroom and shra I am that husband of yours ah Damn funny..but love that scene..and then vase out of Window..window ne hi saath dia shra ka jab ki woh hi kehta tha close that window.. 😆 ..beautiful scene..
Finally the prenuptial agreement mu cleared and now they are little bit more close and sleeping together without finding excuses..
Morning scene sumo.choking ..blasted cologne blasted husband..then shra's turn to choke..sweet scene..
About party still am not positive about that...
Continue soon dear..
Thnx for pm dear..