Mil Jaate Hai Jo Bane, Ek Duje Ke Vaaste- Alternate ending - Completed - Page 2

I have veryyy high hopes on this ending from Zoya ...unlike our tooti Hui kismat...thank u for rewinding it.

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ZOYA :D
I loved your take on this.
Their friendship, how much ever they deny , is always there.
Could see that in Shravan's instant reaction on hearing about Aditya or Suman's care even though she was angry at him.

Loved the last para , spend life fighting with each other rather than making love to someone else.
That is them.<3

-God bless

P.S: I've sent you a buddy request. Can I get a PM too ? :) <3

Woah dude!! This was simply fabulous
The wonderful writers on this forum have beautifully filled the emptyness of Shraman's tale.

I was spellbound with your work. Your words created a virtual world.

The characters were beautifully captured. I loved Her Sumo-ness in action with Aditya. She simply wrote him off. And she was so defensive of Shravan. Hats off!!

Whining and Caring Shravan was wonderful. And loved the comebacks from Sassy Malhotra.

I was like 'Lado aur lado, ek dusre ka sir phod do but phir pyaar se dressing karna'!

Poor babies are so heart broken.

Hilarity ensued with the morning.
😆 😆 😆

That bathroom scene... Speechless!

Sumo was so adorable. Heart attack de diya Shravan ko. 🤣 Sach mei Sumo wrestler samajhti hai khudko.

And finally the dormant hormones of Shravan Malhotra rise.

Aww!! The care, the friendship still shines in the embers of their ego.

Lovely story. Do continue.

Superlike...would have loved to see on screen but koi baat nahi...you wrote so beautifully...just loved it Shraman just rocked

Finally !!! Saw our real Sumo who wouldn't believe Aditya just like that, and give him back with right amount for his misdoings.

Beautifully written Zoya 👏...could actually imagine these scenes virtually happening...even though they have constantly been fighting with each other, they have always cared for each other no matter what...pls update the next part soon 😊

OMG Sumo punched Shravan a heart attack!! 🤣

Was so waiting for an alternate ending...this was so nicely written... Loved the bathroom sequence...bed par kar doongi was 🤣 Its a good start... Both have a long way to go...and they'll get there eventually😊 Pls update soon...and yes do pm me too😊