Mil Jaate Hai Jo Bane, Ek Duje Ke Vaaste- Alternate ending - Completed

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Posted: 8 years ago

#261

Lovely update zoya .. ❤️

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orion23

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Posted: 8 years ago

#262

Originally posted by: arshuaar
sorry for late comments...
beautifully penned...
no words...
thank you for the wonderful update...
loved it...
amazing...
...emotional too...
.. Shravan...😭
thanx for PM...😊

It's okay ya...

Thank you so very much!

And you're welcome!!

😃

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orion23

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Posted: 8 years ago

#263

Originally posted by: Perpetuity
Res.
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Unres.
WOW! WOW! WOW! Yeh baht baht baht jyada nonu tha. Shravan's convo with nimmo 😭 It's heart breaking. So many years of pain. He has put his heart out for nimmo to count the pieces she and everyone has made of it. You penned it so so beautifully.
Haan yaar! Sahi boli tu.. Let everyone see what they have done to him
Just amazing. Agr show mein iska 1 % v dikha dete to yeh halat na hoti humare show ki 😔
#Sab Kismat Ka Khel Hai Pushpa😆
It's fab zoyi. You always do an amazing job while penning down Shravan's emotions. Every dialogue stabbed a dagger in my heart. It's so bloody emotional. Thanks so much for this yaar. Dil k armaan ab isse hi pure krne hai. But who's complaining. It's so much better that it can't even be compared to what we got.
Thank you so much Resh!!!
Love love love ya 🤗
Love ya too🤗

@Bold

Kamal hai, iss baar PM karke yaad nahi dilana pada merko😆

Thanks hon!!

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orion23

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Posted: 8 years ago

#264

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
Awesome..

Thank you😛

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orion23

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Posted: 8 years ago

#265

Originally posted by: -rhythm-
Lovely update zoya .. ❤️

Thanks Rhythm ❤️

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Shivangi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#266

Hey Zoya!!!

Sorry I m late...

My job is trying to eat me alive...

M speechless girl

I really am...

👏

I really don't know what to say the updates are mind bogglingly awesome...they really are..

Wait for the next update

Love

Shivangi

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

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Posted: 8 years ago

#267

(I think I reserved a post yesterday, 😕 but I can't seem to find it now. So, here's the comment.)

Zoya! It was wonderful.

And thanks for not keeping it short, it's a good habit you've got, you must hold onto it. Loved reading the long chapter poured with so much emotions. 🤗

Loved it when Shravan went out the room considering it would be difficult for her in the bathroom. It's these little thoughtful things he do for her every now and then, and recently increasingly so much - is what I love the most reading in a story. And you've got those included so much. Thanks for that! ❤️

The emotional scene between Nirmala and Shravan with two eves-dropper crying behind the pillars - was fabulous andmuch needed for the show even - which we never got. So, thanks again for writing such a lovely and such an essential scene. Also, Ramnath's road to redemption seems much acceptable here, I'm satisfied with the pace of it all.

Con't soon now. I'm very much excited to read how Ramnath's truth's going to be out in here.

Take care.

Lots of love,

Lara.

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sapphire3

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Posted: 8 years ago

#268

Originally posted by: orion23

Prii bas sar pe chada tu...
Pagla gayi hai bilkul😆

@bold Haww meri itni beizzati
What do you mean by Pagla gayi hai?
Main pehle se pagal thi 🤣 🤣

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orion23

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Posted: 8 years ago

#269

Originally posted by: sapphire3

@bold Haww meri itni beizzati
What do you mean by Pagla gayi hai?
Main pehle se pagal thi 🤣 🤣

Woh pata hai baitu..

Maine yeh nahi kaha ke pehle pagal nahi thi..

Maine kaha ab bilkul pagla gayi hai😆

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orion23

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Posted: 8 years ago

#270

Originally posted by: Vishakha2092
Hey Zoya!!!
Hey Shivangi!!!
Sorry I m late...
Oh you're not late at all! 😳
My job is trying to eat me alive...
Aww ya!
M speechless girl
I really am...
👏
I really don't know what to say the updates are mind bogglingly awesome...they really are..
Wait for the next update
Thank you so very much!!!
Love
Shivangi