Mil Jaate Hai Jo Bane, Ek Duje Ke Vaaste- Alternate ending - Completed - Page 25

Originally posted by: an_chau

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Zoya, this was everything and more I was hoping for! This ending plays out many of the scenarios I had literally tormenting me 😆 since the end of the show... that Shravan-Nirmala convo was LOVE, girl... Your piece is giving me the closure that was denied by the cvs 😕

Stretch it out, please, soul sister!

😛

Originally posted by: pal655

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Well comparatively I am new to IF . And after joining i came to know about few names one was zoya and now I see why. Your are an amazing writer . Kudos to you 👏
Baap re! Itna bada bana diya iss tucch praani ko.. Mai kuch nahi ya, bas sabne avaiy sar pe chada rakha hai😆
I am so much relieved after this story. I was not happy the way CVs in edkv has put all the blame and apologizing part for shravan. He was the one most hurt too but no one got that. Thank god you came out as our saviour.
I was more saving myself... I couldn't handle that ending that was dished out...
I really wish your were the dialogue writer and the CVs too. This edkv os much better than what we got.
Thank you so much! That's a mammoth compliment!


Thanks for writing this

Thanks for commenting...

This is going very good..thanks orion for closing all the loops. Liked the nirmala part.

Originally posted by: orion23

Anu🤗

Thank you so very much!!!

I'll stretch out the last two remaining chapters as much as I can..

This being finite I don't wish to continue it beyond requirement..

But I will try my best to give it the closure it deserves..

I know you guys want a lot of happy memories for these two, and that I will deliver, partly here, loads of fluff in Mrs and Mr Malhotra series...

Promise..

But it's getting taxing for me to continue two things...

Padhai bhi hai na...

Hope you understand😃

But I will not disappoint you!

No problem buddy!! It's amazing that you can write such amazing stuff, with regular updates, given your other commitments!
Hum to bhukkad hai like Shravan 😆 , issliye magnte rehte hain!!! You take your time, and write as and when you feel like. Cuz bina pressure ke likhegi to aise amazing pieces padhne ki Mike he!!!
Love, Anu

Whoa...this was heavy girl...Shravans emotions, his insecurities, his pain was so raw...😭 Nirmala, ramu n sumo needed to realise the state he was in. Brilliant maa-beta convo. Pls update the next part soon and Thanks for the pm😊

Zoya, i have no words..this 2nd part is so damn good 👏...wish ki cvs iska 1% bhi dikha sakte 😡

Originally posted by: avni01

This is going very good..thanks orion for closing all the loops. Liked the nirmala part.

@Anu 🤗

Originally posted by: Faith28

Whoa...this was heavy girl...Shravans emotions, his insecurities, his pain was so raw...😭 Nirmala, ramu n sumo needed to realise the state he was in. Brilliant maa-beta convo. Pls update the next part soon and Thanks for the pm😊

Originally posted by: jesi15

Beautiful written zoya

Plz continue