Mil Jaate Hai Jo Bane, Ek Duje Ke Vaaste- Alternate ending - Completed - Page 28

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: devilaonmoon

(I think I reserved a post yesterday, 😕 but I can't seem to find it now. So, here's the comment.)
Yes you did, it's on page 29😆

Zoya! It was wonderful.
And thanks for not keeping it short, it's a good habit you've got, you must hold onto it. Loved reading the long chapter poured with so much emotions. 🤗
Aww really! Thank you so much ya!!!! I will keep that going...
In fact the next one will be a mammoth update!

Loved it when Shravan went out the room considering it would be difficult for her in the bathroom. It's these little thoughtful things he do for her every now and then, and recently increasingly so much - is what I love the most reading in a story. And you've got those included so much. Thanks for that! ❤️
You're ever so welcome!!!!!❤️ That will be seen often in future updates too!

The emotional scene between Nirmala and Shravan with two eves-dropper crying behind the pillars - was fabulous andmuch needed for the show even - which we never got. So, thanks again for writing such a lovely and such an essential scene. Also, Ramnath's road to redemption seems much acceptable here, I'm satisfied with the pace of it all.
I'm glad. I like how the writer in you sees all the technicalities! That's one major reason I await your comments, to see where it is that I'm going wrong or right...

Con't soon now. I'm very much excited to read how Ramnath's truth's going to be out in here.
Take care.
I can't wait either! I won't keep you waiting long!
Lots of love,
Lara.
Loads of love right back 🤗

@Bold
Lara❤️
Thank you so very much!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: orion23


Woh pata hai baitu..
Maine yeh nahi kaha ke pehle pagal nahi thi..
Maine kaha ab bilkul pagla gayi hai😆


Haye sachi🤗
Josh me Dekha nahi Maine bilkul 😆

PS.- tu Bakiyon ko reply Kar main to ainvayi vellapanti karti rehti hu 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
@Prii
Ho gaya reply karke😆
Aj ki mazdoori khatam😉
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: orion23

@Prii

Ho gaya reply karke😆
Aj ki mazdoori khatam😉


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Posted: 8 years ago
🤣
Dude!
Yeh best movie hai!
😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: notready.

Second part was amazing, Zoya! I had a full blown grin on my face during their cute banter in the beginning, especially when Shravan called her motu 😆
THIS is the Nirmala-Shravan convo I would have loved to see in the show. For her to realize the extent of her actions and how much they've hurt him his whole life instead of simplifying all of her actions and conveniently placing all of the blame on Ramnath. I also love that the Ramnath here decided to tell Shravan the truth without the help of pregnancy news (still remember the Maggi putra 😆)
Can't wait for the next part!

-Ayesha

Thank you so much Ayesh!
Your comment made me smile!
Maggi putra😉 Is going to stay with us for a very long time 😆
And I will try and update soon!!
😳
Thanks again🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: devilaonmoon

Res.

😎 Will unres soon...




Finally found it! 🤣
Thanks for helping the blind, Zoya. 😎
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: devilaonmoon




Finally found it! 🤣
Thanks for helping the blind, Zoya. 😎

The reason I remember is that I've checked that page a few times since yesterday to see if you unresed...😆
Your comments are important pour moi! 😃
And you're always welcome bro!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: orion23

The reason I remember is that I've checked that page a few times since yesterday to see if you unresed...😆
Your comments are important pour moi! 😃
And you're always welcome bro!


😭 (getting emotional)
❤️ yaa...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: devilaonmoon


😭 (getting emotional)
❤️ yaa...

Aww man!
That wasn't my intention...
Sowii..
Aa gale lag jaa🤗

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