Mil Jaate Hai Jo Bane, Ek Duje Ke Vaaste- Alternate ending - Completed - Page 24

Originally posted by: sapphire3

I demand a season 2 of EDKV BUT...writer tu hogi uski 😳

Originally posted by: nuttynuts

Fabulous update!

Loved the intense fury and sorrow release as Shravan sobbed. I could totally imagine seeing this on TV.

And Sumo and Ramu listening to the convo kinda cracked me up. I ended up picturing a lot of pillars, and every family member hiding behind a pillar each. 😆 Okay, I'm being such a killjoy 🥱

I didn't clarify that now did I?

At the entrance of the home, there were pillars, Sumo was standing behind one of those and Shravan - Nirmala were standing in the lawn while Ramnath was at the window opening into the lawn...

Yay! Sumo is back! Can't wait to see her stand up for him. This is gonna be interesting.

Waiting for more. Thanks for the PM!

Cheers!

Nuts

Originally posted by: PprEDKV

OMG Zoya 👏

This is just a way too awesome to handle. I m still crying 😭😭. I wish we could have seen this in the show. Yar jao Dilip jha's ko apna assistant banao plz 😉.

Kuch bhi avayi😆

This made me to comment 😆. The pain of shravan u just expressed was beyond amazing yar. I just loved it. And u perfectly gave justice to every character- Ramnath, sumo, nimmo and specially my shravu 😳. The healing that sumo could do was perfectly and positively shown by u 👏. These CVs need to read this 😡. But anyway leave this CVs I will think I watched this ending 😉.

Aww babe, thank you...

PS - I thought I will not read this bcoz if I will read my whole imagination would go in ShraMan and I could not study properly but Kya Karne raha Nahi Gaya😆.

Arey! Exam pe dhyaan de! All the bset!!

Love u Zoya 🤗.

Love you too!

Plz update jaldi jaldi 😊

I shall try!

Originally posted by: orion23

Thanks so much Nuts..

@Bold, solution to your query😆

Originally posted by: Safire

Wow!I cried while I read the story, your writing is awesome👏keep writing!

Originally posted by: yashimalhotra

i have said it pehle and i'm gonna say it phirse...you are a great writer

you caught the emotions brilliantly and wrote so beautifully

i felt and all the emotions and it got me a little teary too

awesome yaar

read both the chapters together and i love it so much

sorry wasn't able to read and comment earlier

thanks for the pm

update soon

Originally posted by: evaviego

Zoyaaa... Kaha tha na maine they should have hired you.. You proved me right again 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉

Dude! Bas kar yar😆

Jaldi khatam karna tha toh ese bhi toh kia ja sakta tha atleast logical and in flow toh lagta..

Point!!!

Anyways i just loved the chapter.. it was hilarious and emotional at the same time..

Glad!

Loved the way Ramnath's mindset has changed.. Loved the sumo shravan convo.. loved the nirmala shravan confrontation... loved everything yaar...

Thanks ya!

And haan...we definitely dont mind more than 1 diabetes wale chapters... its never enough you know na... 😆

Nahi ji.. Mujhe usse zyada likhne ka time nahi milega🤣 Sorry!

Eagerly waiting for the next one.. 😊

Me too!

Originally posted by: kennashreign

Zoyaaa!!! This was amazing. I loved it. Shravan and Suman are ❤️. Poor guy, everyone has given him so much pain. I hope things get better for him.

Continue soon.

Originally posted by: castile

Res
...
Unres
Do I have words to express my feelings after reading this beautifully written update that no doubt each and everyone of us here wanted to see live on our screens?
I can try but so sorry my ability to express and my vocabulary is pretty limited...
Aww hon!
The whole chapter for me went from...
😒

😆
😳
😕
😭
Itne emotions😆
The whole chapter was mind blowingly awesome 👏
Every emotion seamlessly and magically woven together ❤️
Thank you so much!
Shravan's hand on Sumo's head, comforting her was
(That's me and my bae 😳 )

That's me and my future bae in my head😆
ShraMan's banter 😆 😳
Shravan- 'Aaj keh diya hai dobara mat kehna...'
And ofcourse 'Motu zyada apna lagta hai' 🤗
And Ram finally realizing that his son's happiness lies with his Sumo...(where is the wise-sage-with-a-halo-on-top-emoji? I can't communicate without emoticons!!)

Hahahah!
And yes I had expected Sumo to call him Papa from Day 1 without any prompting... 👍🏼
Shravan is such a cute man-child! I wanna give him a bear hug where he finds it difficult to breath!! 🤗

Don't we all😉
"Haaw! Papa! Aapki bahu mujh pe domestic abuse kar rahi hai aur aap bol rahe ho continue! Ek din hua shaadi ko aur party badal li!" 🤣
Domestic abuse?! Seriously?!! 🤪

Hahahah!
And then of course Mama Malhotra had to make an appearance
But it is necessary... All three of them had to see what their individual actions have done to Shravan. How bad they have hurt him, the depth and the damage had to be barred in front of them in its rawness...
The whole Nirmala-Shravan convo was just so achingly raw that I could feel something breaking right then 💔
Cut to ShraMan at night...
'Pakka?' 😭 🥺

This is how it should have progressed but yes #PhootiKismat
But man you are one amazing writer and I dare anyone contradict me here!! And no I am not trying to flatter you! Nope that's just not my domain...

Bohot shukriya aapka!
Waiting for the next update and we trust you to balance out the sad and the fluff stuff...!

P.S. So sorry for the late as well as long @$$ comment! Hehehe