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Originally posted by: Jerry2308
Awesome. ..sumo ' s pov is beautifully written. .loved it
Thank you so much!! 😊
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Originally posted by: Jerry2308
Awesome. ..sumo ' s pov is beautifully written. .loved it
Originally posted by: anonymousanju
aanchal read both parts in one go...after reading both I was thanking God that I found it... before I start writing my heart out, I must warn you dear that my comments are too long...m so sorry for this coz when it comes to shraman I just let my feelings pour out completely... u left me speechless...it was so painful, emotional, heart touching, heart breaking...all filled with different emotions... first shravu ka point of view...he loved her since 17 ...more than a decade... tried his best to hate her but always ended loving her more n more each time... he said yes coz of ramu but it wasn't true completely...he always had wanted to marry her...there was always one girl in his life n that was sumo... he gave her that name...she always belonged to him...she was his sumo always... though she'd hurt him to maintain her image in school then again she pushed him back ...but couldn't he see the pain, the majboori of sumo... he once had said tumhe lgta hai jhut bol paogi mujhse...then why you failed to read her eyes when they always yearned for you...that always were filled with love for you... I wish he'd have used his lawyer mind once to find out the chaos... n didn't he think that she always cared for him...never even gave a shit to any other Guy...if he would've been chota shravu then he would've definitely understood her but this bada shravu is tedha... he's hurt too much ...especially by his two imp ladies that he considers all are same... he says he doesn't care but took responsibility of her marriage, decorated mandap with her fvrt color drapes n her fvrt tulips... n when adi tried to molest her, beat him up till blue n black.. n was repeatedly saying how dare you touch her as if he wouldn't have touched her after marriage... his heart screams sumo, yearns for her but mind says no...don't let urself fall for her again as heart isn't ready to break again...I wish he would've understood she's not the immature sumo who was his best friend back in school... n how could he forget his best friend was ready to jump off terrace to win his trust...always taunted her, but could never take anyone uttering a single word against her ... sumo's pov ...this girl had two dreams...to pay off debt of her mother n to confess her love to her best friend... she did hurt him back then but she died for him each n everyday... she waited for him even when there was no surety whether he'd ever be back or not... when he came back, she thought she'd say sorry, n will become his best friend again... but in reunion party, he did wat she did to him years ago...but again he helped her...didn't go ...stayed back for her...stood for her...again became besties ...everything was going smooth when one day he realised he never stop loving her...then he started avoiding her... she's ready to jump off the terrace to win his trust ... .n she made him meet his mother so that he could let go off all his bitterness for women...but he said he hates her... but in reality he regretted it... n when she met with that accident, he was there for her each n every moment...n when she got to know the truth she went to meet him to speak her heart out...everything became normal when ramu did beda garg ...she had to chose her family over him.. she did hurt him but thought he'd come back n confess his love ...instead he broke all ties..another chaos n she'd to marry that ass...she couldn't deny...n when that bas***d tried to molest her, he came for her rescue...n she ran to his arms as it was the safest place to hide for... he fought for her... beat that brat a lot...as he'd said I wont let you fall ever, he fulfilled once again his promise even after breaking all ties with her...then their marriage...she was damn happy n was ready to do everything possible to work out their relation ... she wanted a simple marriage... but he snatched away her one left dream from her... she was numb at court, ...she refused to that big fat wedding coz that ramu wanted that...he snatched away her life from her n why would she fulfil his wish...she had enough of him really... n when she came back to tiwari killa ...she was emotionless... her best friend, whom she loved ever n still does, broke her dream... n then to terrace wat she saw she was shocked...she called out for him as he's her life, which is true... no matter how much they hurt each other, can't let anything wrong happen with them even if it means to sacrifice their lives, they'll do that happily coz somewhere deep down they both knew they love each other, have always loved n will always love...they always belonged to each other... they'd every right on each other...both did mistakes...but the biggest mistake they did was that, they took their friendship n love for granted...n when you do so, you realise after losing it...they'd to open their hearts to each other but they never did...it was their mistake...biggest one... it was beautifully penned down...so beautiful n heart touching...loved to the core... waiting for next part sweetie...can't even wait to read how you conclude dear...update soon pls ...sending you a buddy...if possible do send me pm when you upload next part pls ...going to read your OS's ...
Here's the last part guys! I'm so sorry for the wait, November was hectic and I didn't get any time to write, but now I am back!! Also, in this story it was never my intention for Shravan to find out the whole truth, or for Suman to tell the whole truth because this was about their relationship and their love for each other which doesn't falter no matter what, however, I may write a sequel to this, which would be a cannon fic, about how I think Shravan should've found out the truth as I always thought, so let me know in the comments if you would like that!
Finding Ourselves: Part 3: Us
Shravan
I felt two soft hands cupping my face, the warmth radiating from them gave me an unknown sense of protection almost as if to reassure me that I would be safe no matter what. I groggily opened my eyes adjusting to the light coming from the light bulb in near my face. I tried to bring my arm up to shield my eyes from the bright light, but they didn't budge. I pulled them up harder and harder but to no avail. I tried to kick with my leg but they became limp. My eyes shot open, I saw my arms and legs had been tied to the wooden chair, "GET ME OUT OF HERE" I bellowed, moving vigorously to free myself.
"What's the hurry my dear bro? Hang out with me for some time,"
I looked up to see a man, almost as tall as me come out from the shadows, I instantly knew who it was.
"Aditya, do you think this is a joke? LET. ME. GO"
"No can do bro; I've got a lot of things to settle with you"
"You f**king filthy piece of shit, after what you did with Sumo, you are so lucky that Nana-ji stopped me before I could kill you"
"Oh yes, how could I forget your sab-kuch' if you didn't come to her defence, who would? After-all you're her best friend or should I say husband?"
"Oh, so is that what this is about?"
"Exactly, it's quite commendable how you first instigate me to turn against Suman, then beat me up emerging as the hero, and finally with such swiftness marry your Sumo' and not let anyone else know about your master plan. Well done Shravan. Well done!"
"First of all, I would've never thought even in my wildest dreams that you would try to molest my Sumo because of my words because no matter what I said, it does not give you the right to do that to any woman. Also you would've been married to her right now if you didn't have such a disgusting and disturbing brain. I married Suman because of my family and nothing else, do you get that? Now, if you're done with your stupid questions and accusations, I have promised Nana-ji that I will pick up Suman for her greh pravesh, so let me go!"
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Suman
I followed the car with Shravan which stopped at a warehouse near the outskirts of Delhi. My heartbeat starting increasing by the second, I knew something was wrong, very wrong. Or why else would someone kidnap Shravan? He has wronged no one but himself. I got the auto driver to drop me at a distance from his so the kidnappers don't catch me. Two bulky men, carried Shravan inside the warehouse with great difficulty. I slowly walked towards the warehouse, as quietly as I could without getting caught. Luckily it was unlocked and I stepped inside. In the middle of the warehouse there was an unconscious Shravan. His arms were tied to the arm rests of a brown wooden chair and his shins to the legs of the chair. There was a flickering light bulb attached to the ceiling, coming down close to his face. I ran up to him, cupping his face, shaking it gently, making him get up. He squinted his eyes, and as I was about to free him, I heard footsteps approaching us, I ran towards the corner of the warehouse and hid behind the cardboard boxes that were stacked.
I peeked to see who the footsteps belonged to. Seeing his face again made me freeze, the feel of his filthy hands touching my skin came back to me, consuming me. I closed my eyes to shake the thoughts away, the flashback of his face above mine came back, the way he had held my wrists tightly, the way he demanded, "kiss me Suman, if you can kiss him, why can't you kiss me," I jolted myself out of the flashback, I had to be strong for me, for Shravan. Fearing Aditya wasn't going to help me because I had done nothing wrong, Aditya needed to fear me, and that was exactly I had set out to do. I shook myself back to reality hearing everything. I became shocked, what was this sab kuch' they were talking about, what had Shravan said to Aditya that instigated him to molest me? And what was he on about that Shravan ruined his life? I knew this was not the time, yes, I needed to know, but Shravan came first now, I was going to bring my Shravan back no matter what.
As soon as Aditya left, I ran to him. "Sumo," I heard my name come out of his mouth as a whisper. I looked at him, taking him in, he had bruises below his lip, and on his cheek. His arms had rope burns on the exposed skin. His eyes were bloodshot and filled with worry. I ran to him latching on to him for dear life.
"I won't let anything happen to you, I won't leave you," I kept on saying continuously.
"Sumo, go from here, please, if something happens to you I won't be able to survive," He pleaded
"Nothing will happen to me, but if something happens to you, I will die instantly,"
"Don't talk like that,"
"Okay I won't, but I'm not leaving you alone,"
I proceeded to untie his arms and legs, we ran to the door in a hurry. "Not so fast, Suman and Shravan," I turned around slowly, gripping Shravan's hand.
***
Shravan
"Aditya. Let. Us. Go," I held onto Suman's hand, looking at her face which had become stoic. I knew at that very instant what was going through her mind, and just like last time, I wasn't going to let anything happen to her, no matter what she had done. The fact remained that she had come to rescue me and that's all that mattered.
"No, I need my answers first,"
"What answers?" Suman asked sternly
"Offcourse Suman, did Shravan not tell you?"
"What are you going on about Aditya?"
The earth beneath my feet slid, my hands became sweaty, after all these months I finally saw a ray of hope for us and because of my stupidity, I was going to lose her again. I closed my eyes, preparing myself for what Aditya was going to say.
"Aah, Suman, how oblivious you are to the truth of your husband. But I shall tell you whatever I did to you was not my fault, I did what I did because Shravan had told me that you guys had a relationship like that of a husband-wife and that of lovers. That you guys had no boundaries and had done everything. It wasn't my fault; I did what Shravan expected me to do."
"Shut up Aditya!" bellowed Suman, "It has taken me a lot of strength to stand in front of you only because of what you had done. Whatever you did, cannot be excused by what Shravan had said and I can tell you for a fact that when Shravan had said what he did, would never be to hurt me. What he said was wrong, and that's between me and him, but what you did to me was a crime. Leave us alone Aditya, and don't ever come back otherwise what I end up doing, is not in my hands." Suman let go of my hand and we left from there.
I sat in the driver's seat and Suman sat in the passenger seat, not saying a word. I looked towards her, her face was expressionless, and I couldn't take it anymore, I drove for a bit and parked the car to the side of the road.
"Sumo..." I said her name hesitantly.
"Hmmm," She gave me a distant expression,
"What happened?"
"Really Shravan? You're asking me what happened? You said so much shit about our relationship to him, you let people judge the purity of our friendship and yet you have the audacity to ask me what happened? Listen Shravan, I knew we have our differences, we have our problems, and I had hope that we would be able to get out of this despite whatever happened, but every day it's like you are hell-bent on hurting me and my faith in you is fading. Shravan, I thought my actions were enough, but clearly they weren't. I don't know how to show you anymore so I'm just going to say it, I love you Shravan, and I know you used to love me but after what happened with Aditya, although you may still have feelings for me they're filled with hate and I cannot take it anymore. I cannot take your taunts anymore Shravan, it hurts so so so much."
My mind was racing at 300km/hr, she cared, she cared about everything I said to her, she cared about me. She loved me! My love wasn't one-sided; my instinct was right. But why did she agree to marry Aditya, and how can she think I hate her. My love has been incubated within me for 10 years, it wouldn't die so easily and I was going to let her know. Enough was enough, I almost lost her twice, I wasn't going to take my chances.
"Sumo, I love you! And not from now, since I was 17. I was scared then, but not anymore, it scares me more to lose you, and a part of me knows, through my vindictiveness I may have lost you, but Sumo, I will try every day to bring you back. Sumo, I'm not going to give up on us. Whatever I had said to Aditya was because I let Nirmala Ahuja and Aditya get in my head. It was wrong, I know, but I had had enough. She told me to leave my best friend's wedding. She thought I was a threat to your happily wedded life, and I was just so angry that how can this woman, who ditched me 10 years ago, come back and tell me to stay away from my best friend. It was unfair, and then to make matters worse Aditya kept on coming to me, asking me if me and you had something between us, and he wasn't taking no for an answer. I saw him trying to pressurise you to admit something was between us, so I thought I'll just tell him what he wanted to hear to bother him, I didn't know he would try to hurt you instead, I am sorry Sumo, I am so so sorry," I closed my eyes with my head bent down. The guilt was eating me up and I couldn't look at her in the eye. Suddenly, I felt a warm hand on my cheek, I slowly opened my eyes and saw Sumo look at me, with a tear fall from her eye, and a soft smile on her face.
"Shravan, I'm sorry too, I knew you told me to stay away from Aditya and I didn't, you had warned me about him and I also made you feel unwanted in my life. I was helpless, and I knew you were hurting every single day because of me..." tears started to fill her eyes and I brought my hands up to cup her face, wiping the tears right off.
"It's okay, we still found each other in the end right, and that's all that matters," at that moment I realised, no matter how much distance there may be between us, in the end, we will always find a way to get to each other, and in that journey, we will find our self. I gave her a weak smile through my tears, holding her hand in mine and drove to her house, to start a new journey, which I knew was going to be the toughest one yet.
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That's all from me! I hope you liked this TS as a whole, and let me know in the comments how you found this part, also drop a like if you liked it!
Thankyou so so so much, your support means the world to me,
Until next time,
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Aanchal
P.S. I am writing an OS which should be finished by the latest, next weekend, so keep the lookout for that!
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