ShraMan OS: Always Have and Always Will

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Hi everyone, I have been a silent reader on this forum but I absolutely loved all the fanfics that you guys write! I am writing this in the spirit of the show ending. Yes I am very sad that it's ending especially because I started watching the show very recently online and I binge watched all the episodes only to find out later that the show is ending. It's heart breaking but here is a take on how I would like the show to end or how I think the story would get a closure. I hope you all like it and please do comment if you think it's any good! So here goes:

Shravan is a complete wreck and no matter how much everyone tries to cover it uo with "oh they always fight so this is normal", now even they realized that it was not normal to behave this way. And if they could be so ruthless to each other in front of their respective families, how bad would they be when they are left alone. It became so bad that the elders of the families had gone to the point where they talk to Shravan and Suman about a divorce because at least that way they can find partners they actually like and live the rest of their lives happily.

Surprisingly Ramnath was the only one who knew that was not a solution, because that would shatter his son even more to see Suman with someone else. He would not be able to deal with the heartbreak and will go into an extremely dark place and a at a point from where there is no return. He decided then that his son's life that he thought he protected all these years came first and so he had to sort things out with Shravan and tell him the whole truth and apologise to Suman for whatever he said so that they can give this marriage a real chance afterall they both did love each other unconditionally.

Ramnath went ahead and told Sharavan everything. Starting from the misunderstanding about his mother to the deal he made with Suman. He decided that it was time he came clean about everything. Shravan after hearing this for the first couple of minutes didn't believe it. Firstly because how on earth could his father do this to him and secondly because he thought his father was lying just so he can live a happily married life. But after he pondered on all th past incidences that happened and the way Suman reacted to him and the fact that she told him that there was more to his mother's history he finally came to a point where he believed all that Ramnath said but was shattered to his very core. He always said that his father was the most important person in his life then how could he possibly have done this to him. He didn't blame himself for treating his mother that way because he was young and he only reacted to what he was told because he didn't know any better. How could he not believe Sumo though? Did this girl not once prove that she was willing to sacrifice her life to gain his trust? Then how did he not trust her back? But more importantly, how was he to face her after this and how was he to apologise. There can be no possible way of apologizing to her for all the torture he has put her through and for what? Because she was only listening to his dad and maintaining her distances from him and she was the one who jhad to sacrifice her love as well. All he knew was that he had to make things right. He had to bring her back to his life no matter how difficult it is. He has to change her mind about breaking off this marriage.

Suman on the other hand was on a severe dilemma. On one hand she was now free to to leave Shravan because her family now understood that in no way was she happy with this marriage and they had made a big mistake by forcing her to marry Shravan. All her family now wanted was for Sumo to be happy. They all appreciate all that Sumo has done for them over the years and now all they want is for her to be happy with a person of her choice but they were unaware of the fact that Shravan is her choice but the circumstances are all wrong. But what was Sumo to do? She could not possibly live with a guy who constantly finds way to put her down and to crush all her dreams and ambitions. She couldn't be with someone who constantly criticizes her for being different and independent where all her life she's been taught to be just that by her naanu. And to top it all off she will never forget that Shravan told Aditya the worst things about them and for all she knew he could've told that to others as well. No matter how hurt he was he had no right to treat her like that. She always tried to be responsible around their families but he never even bothered to do so. What is the point of this kind of love? She finally came to the decision of leaving Shravan and being independent all her life. She couldn't possible marry someone else but she couldn't stay with Shravan either. She knew she could do it because she's been a fighter all her life and she can take care of herself and her family.

Meanwhile The Tiwaris were to move to America after this whole fiasco was over and Anuj Tiwari found a suitable boy for Sumo as well who lives in America and this would have been the perfect situation for them so they can all go there together. Shravan finds out about this from Preeti and Pushkar and is furious! Sumo wasn't leaving him and going anywhere and she is definitely not marrying anyone else! She was his wife and she is just his. He heads to Tiwari villa to talk to them and to his wife who left his house and planning on leaving him soon too.

Shravan in Tiwari Villa -

Shravan: Namaste Nanaji

Naanu: Come in beta. It's good that you came. We all need to talk to you and sort out this situation. Suman is my grand daughter and the most important person in my life, but if anyone is remotely that important to me that would be you, and I cannot see either of you unhappy.

Shravan: I know that Nanaji. But before I talk to any of you I would like to talk to my wife. She's still my wife and I need to see her before you come to any decisions about us.

Naanu: Go ahead beta, she's in her room. Talk it out. This might also be a last chance for you to talk it out because things will change from today.

Shravan: We will see about that. Excuse me Nanaji, I'll go talk to her and come back in a bit.

Shravan heads to Sumo's room -

Shravan: Hi Sumo.

Suman: (Shocked to see him there) What are you doing here?

Shravan: I need to talk to you Sumo. I would have asked you to come out with me for a coffee and make it Shravan day but I know you wouldn't come with me and so I want to talk to you here. Please don't ask me to leave. I beg of you give me one chance to talk. (Tears in his eyes)

Sumo: (Surprised that he is acting this way) What is it Mr. Malhotra? I believe you have heard about our families agreeing for a divorce? You must be ecstatic at this point. Did you come here to share your happiness with me?

Shravan: No because I am not going to divorce you.

Sumo: Excuse me? Who are you to decide that? And besides what possible reasons could you have to not divorce me? I mean now you don't even have to pretend to like me.

Shravan: I don't know where to begin but I'll start with this. I love you Sumo. I always have and I always will no matter what the situation. And I know you love me too. Papa told me everything.

Sumo: Oh did he now? So what do you want me to do? Because it doesn't matter if I love you or not, What matters to me is that you have hurt me. Not once or twice but screwed me over a million times. What about all that? Here to say sorry for that? Because it will not change all those times you made my life miserable.

Shravan: I know that what I did was unforgivable Sumo and I had no right to be that way. I never thought my father would do this to me. Never did I ever thing that the person who is the most important person in my life would betray me like this. And I cannot tell you how ashamed I am of what I told Aditya! I swear on you sumo I didn't day anything to anyone else. I guess I just told him that so he would call this marriage off. I couldn't see any other ways to stop you from leaving me. But I had no idea that bas***d would do this to you.

Sumo: (tears on her eyes trying to take all of this in)

Shravan: Sumo all the issues I had with you being independent, they are not real! I love you because of the person that you are. You have always been independent and the way you are with your family I wish I could be half as caring to my loved ones. Sumo I fell in love you back then because I appreciated the person that you are. You single handedly take care of all issues in your life and I know you don't need anyone's help. I don't want to help you Sumo, I just wanna be there with you. I just want to support you through your all. I have gotten everything much easier in my life whereas you had to struggle for all that you have and that is what made me fall in love with you all over again. I might talk big but I am not one without you. I never was. The revenge I took on you, on that party, it was all because I could not forget any of our memories. I might have moved on from the bad memories but I never moved on from you Sumo. No matter how much I tried to tell myself that all I have in my mind is friendship and nothing else, you and I both know that was never true. I love you. I always have and I always will. No matter what you decide today there is no changing that. You once told me that you don't just forget your love, then Hoe do I believe that you forgot yours? You love me just the same if not more. And that fact that you love me despite of me being the biggest jerk in the world proves that its eternal for the both of us.

Sumo: (tears and little smile forming on her lips. She never thought Shravan would confess this way. She never expected him to be all crazy romantic and go on his knees and he didn't but that is who is was. He was never all that and she loved him that way. Just like he loved her despite her being a little arrogant and having ego issues all the time! If they couldn't make it work who could?)

Shravan: Sumoo!! I have given the biggest speech my life and I am also in tears. I am never in tears for anyone other than people I love! Like absolutely LOVE! So please say something!

Sumo: I love you... (Smiles)

Shravan: (Runs and hugs her) I love you too! Please be my wife always. Don't leave me!

Sumo: Go down on your knees and propose like a normal person. And then properly marry me and then we shall see about forever!

Shrvan: (Goes down on is knees) Miss Suman Tiwari who is actually already Mrs Malhotra, will you please do the honors of marryingme.. again?

Sumo: Ok this is weird. I never thought you'd actually go down on your knees.

Shravan: Things I do for you my love. So is that a yes? My knees hurt a little.

Sumo: Ok fine if that'll make you happy (smirks)

He comes up and they kiss for the first time. It's not something they ever experienced before and it felt just right! They couldn't believe they were actually together. They finally stop to breathe.

Shravan: Woah that was... uhh.. that was something..

Sumo: That was just the beginning. (winks)

Shravan: Oh wow.. Ok.. Well.. You and I are here and the bed is right here.. Should we just go for it?

Sumo: Yeah why not? Let's do it.. We are technically married so let's do this!

Shravan: Are you serious?

Sumo: Don't be an idiot Shravan! My family is waiting for us outside! I am not having sex with you while they wait for us! Dumbass!

Shravan: (Little disappointed) Accha let's go pagaal! Also I need your help!

Sumo: What help?

Shravan: We need to bring Maa back home. I have waited for this for way too long. She has to be there with us on our big day! You'll help me right?

Sumo: Of course I'll help you! That's a stupid question!

Shravan: Oh and what's with this America wala rishta that came for you.. Were planning to get married before even divorcing me?

Sumo: Huh? What America wala rishta? I think you've totally lost it now Shravan! Stop your nonsense and let's go tell everyone that I will be living with the most irritating human being on this planet for the rest of my life because I am that crazy!

They go out where The Tiwari family is waiting and Malhotra have also come to finalise a decision.

Shravan: We have decided on something. It is something we knew for the whole time but were too much of idiots to admit. We do love each other and we have never loved anyone other than each other. We are not ending this. Not now and not ever.

Everyone is ecstatic with this decision

Naanu: Suman beta, You have thought about this haven't you? You are not just doing this for me right?

Sumo: I love him Naanu. I don't thinkthere will ever be a time when we don't fight but that will always be because we think we have a right on each other's lives. I don't want to leave him.. like he said.. Not now and not ever. But there is one thing though. He did promise that he will marry me properly so only then will I go back with him. (smirks)

Shravan: Wait what? What do you mean go back with me? I said I will marry you properly but what does that have to do with you staying back? I mean we are married already so why can't you just come home with me.

Sumo: Omg Shravan don't argue about this! We discussed this already and you promised that we are going to do this the right way!

Shravan: Yes but I never said you can stay here now! I am not living a moment more of my life without you do you get that! Now don't be so stubborn!

Sumo: I am not being stubborn you're acting like a kid!!

And there they went on and on about this and the family members really wondered if they would ever stop fighting with each other. But also for the first time in their lives they truly believed that they loved each other unconditionally and they couldn't possible be with anyone else!

So there you go guys! That was a long one! Please let me know what you thought of it and definitely leave your likes and feedback!

Cheers!😃

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Posted: 8 years ago
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That was super cute! Loved it
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome !!
Ramu confessing without much drama, and shraman getting together were realistic.

So this can be done in the show as well, if they wanted to make it short...

Keep writing..Good work
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ShraMan back in their element. Nice one!
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amazing
absolutely loved it
totally brilliant
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You are an excellent writer and it was wonderful presentation
But sorry, Just Shravan apologized not Sumo, it would have been great if you can write a small scene where they both apologize to each other as Teen Sumo suggested...
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Simply amazing...
Shraman aur un ki nok jhok... ❤️
Loved it..
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This was so cute!
I love how they are bickering even in the end..
Do keep writing!
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read it just now n I must say wat an os it was...amazing...the show ended...though I still am not ready to believe it...but the time 10pm badly reminds me of that... life seems a void without edkv ...I don't know when I got so engrossed in it so badly may be from the first time I watched it I guess...enough of my nonsense now... about os God finally ramu opened his sin mouth...hate him for ruining shraman life...n divorce, marrying another Guy...f**king shit ...thanks God nothing of these craps happened... shravu finally joined all links...sometimes I really doubt is he a London return n Oxford graduated lawyer...but alas he's...really had been an ass all the times... n the confession...it was so real, heart touching...loved it completely... n he knelt on his knees...aww that was lovely...how innocent he seemed when he confessed...n their hug n first kiss. .God m blushing...n bed, sex...haha that was hilarious...n they ended up fighting again ...God they're so obvious...never gonna change...no matter even if they become old, they'd still fight like two year old kid... n how cutely he said I am not living Even a second without you...that was amazing.. n ur first os ...God didn't feel like it was ur first os loved it...sending u a buddy ...if in future you write any os, ss, ff or anything on shraman just pm me ...thanks...
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Originally posted by: anonymousanju

read it just now n I must say wat an os it was...amazing...the show ended...though I still am not ready to believe it...but the time 10pm badly reminds me of that... life seems a void without edkv ...I don't know when I got so engrossed in it so badly may be from the first time I watched it I guess...enough of my nonsense now... about os God finally ramu opened his sin mouth...hate him for ruining shraman life...n divorce, marrying another Guy...f**king shit ...thanks God nothing of these craps happened... shravu finally joined all links...sometimes I really doubt is he a London return n Oxford graduated lawyer...but alas he's...really had been an ass all the times... n the confession...it was so real, heart touching...loved it completely... n he knelt on his knees...aww that was lovely...how innocent he seemed when he confessed...n their hug n first kiss. .God m blushing...n bed, sex...haha that was hilarious...n they ended up fighting again ...God they're so obvious...never gonna change...no matter even if they become old, they'd still fight like two year old kid... n how cutely he said I am not living Even a second without you...that was amazing.. n ur first os ...God didn't feel like it was ur first os loved it...sending u a buddy ...if in future you write any os, ss, ff or anything on shraman just pm me ...thanks...


I'm so glad you liked it.. I wanted to keep the spirit of their relationship so i kept their little bickering till the end... but i really wanted it to end like this in a sweet note! Thank you so much for appreciating it!! :D

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