ShraMan SS: Curious (Note/Part 2: Page 3) - Page 4

Originally posted by: pearl.white

What a lovely take on the show!!
Loved your set-up. Shravan hearing it all from such an unrelated party was a brilliant idean It shook his beliefs and then the he saw (as in really noticed ) her for the first time in weeks. And the letter was a masterstroke!! ⭐️

Aw, thank you! :) so glad you liked it :D

Originally posted by: Brainbox1999

I LOVE THIS!! Please keep updating, you're just TOO good! :D

Thanks so much! :)

Originally posted by: pearl.white

Part 2
It was hauntingly beautiful. I loved your take on Sumo. Her grief, her being shattered, her inability to feel Shravan's house as her home was described so intricately. love hurts, right!!

And this was the realisation that I wanted from Shravan. Seeing her so broken, something dies within him. His soul-scorching guilt and grief was devastating!!

And that one moment... which they have stolen from the abyss of time!! 💔 Yeh ek pal...ek raat ek duje ki baaho mei!! Sigh!!

Tomorrow when sanity would return; there would be more issues to deal with, more hatches to bury, more stakes to burn but this priceless moment would remain eternal.

I'm so glad you mentioned that because I'd so badly wanted them to show Shravan himself coming across the memory box and then that horrible guilt (especially over what he said to Aditya). Sucks that we couldn't see it in the show though. :(
I'm so glad you liked it :) thanks for reading!

Originally posted by: pinky.padda

wow

absolutely brilliant

totally loved it

continue soon

superb

Thank you :)

Originally posted by: Sunain

Woaw tht was a hard one to digest...really feel bad for shraman..
very wel written!!!
Hope to see some good moments soon..continue soon 😉

Thank you! :)

Originally posted by: memories_im

loving it! :)

Beautifully written!

Thanks so much :)

Originally posted by: Ishqbaaz

Love... what have u done!!!!!
This was something that moistened my eyes. 😭
There wasn't much they spoke... no accusations hurled... no apologies given... it was silent yet it spoke a thousand words!! The way ur Shravan has vent out his guilt, pain and frustration is way better than anything ❤️
The way he hugged her like a baby... the 'Sumo' rantings and the realisations of his wrongs... and the best thing.. the sweet little kiss on the palm... trust me the love that was conveyed by that kiss sometimes cannot be conveyed by a thousand kisses 😳
U r phenomenal 👏
Keep writing babe 😃

Awww, thanks so much! :) I really was hoping for an impactful moment like this in the show without any dialogues, just a hug that conveyed how much they both still needed each other. I'm glad you liked it, thanks for reading! :)

Originally posted by: SleepyPsycho

Hey!

What a beautiful piece you have written😳

I absolutely loved it,I loved how you chose to bring back the Ravi Sinah and open up all what Sumo had said.Such a unique and fresh idea it is and you have equally done justice to it by connecting it to Shravan finally knowing about Sumo's truth! Way to good.

The second part was again mind blowing.I could feel all the emotions building up in me specially when he called out the word 'Sumo' again and again repeatedly.Also Sumo's pain was simply yet impact fully written.Bravo!!

You did an amazing job.

Hope we have more updates to it coming up soon.

I wanted to write about the Sinha-PCT bit for a while now and was even hoping we'd see it on the show. Unfortunately it didn't happen but I'm glad you liked my version of it :) thank you so much! :)

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb

WOW
I am glad you decided to continue this it's amazing !

Thank you! :)

Originally posted by: nuttynuts

Brilliant! That was so intense and so real! Can't wait for the next part!

Thank you! :)