ShraMan SS: Curious (Note/Part 2: Page 3) - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow
absolutely brilliant
totally loved it
continue soon
superb
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
Woaw tht was a hard one to digest...really feel bad for shraman..
very wel written!!!
Hope to see some good moments soon..continue soon 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you so much for your lovely feedback everyone! :) I'll reply to comments individually once I have a bit more free time but just wanted to say I appreciate the response :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Love... what have u done!!!!!
This was something that moistened my eyes. 😭
There wasn't much they spoke... no accusations hurled... no apologies given... it was silent yet it spoke a thousand words!! The way ur Shravan has vent out his guilt, pain and frustration is way better than anything ❤️
The way he hugged her like a baby... the 'Sumo' rantings and the realisations of his wrongs... and the best thing.. the sweet little kiss on the palm... trust me the love that was conveyed by that kiss sometimes cannot be conveyed by a thousand kisses 😳
U r phenomenal 👏
Keep writing babe 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey!
What a beautiful piece you have written 😳
I absolutely loved it,I loved how you chose to bring back the Ravi Sinah and open up all what Sumo had said.Such a unique and fresh idea it is and you have equally done justice to it by connecting it to Shravan finally knowing about Sumo's truth! Way to good.

The second part was again mind blowing.I could feel all the emotions building up in me specially when he called out the word 'Sumo' again and again repeatedly.Also Sumo's pain was simply yet impact fully written.Bravo!!
You did an amazing job.
Hope we have more updates to it coming up soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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WOW
I am glad you decided to continue this it's amazing !
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
Brilliant! That was so intense and so real! Can't wait for the next part!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
Read both part today
Beautifully written
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: Joyness

Lovy update

..loved it



Thank you! :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ishraland

Such a beautyyy! Loved it..

Ahh! Even I can sleep peacefully now...😳#solace
Looking forward to read more!😊



Thank you so much :)

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