Shraman TS || My Promise || Part3:Pg24 (09/03) (Completed!)

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arshuaar

@arshuaar

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#71

awesome...
loved it...
.. hope everything will sort out soon...
egarly waiting for next update...
thank you for the wonderful writing...

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trayee biswas

@trayee

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#72

its sooo sooo sooo nice yaar...loved it...the way u pennd it...u jst naild it dear..pls keep it up..

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1095142

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

#73

Yeh preeti's outburst. Although it happened in the show but was very rushed. But in ur story it feels subtle and surreal. Amazing update ,post soon👍🏼

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neverlandspirit

@neverlandspirit

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#74

Oh ,my god!!!

I am soo hooked on tis story! I love everything about it

So you need to update soon, k?

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Frosty_Moon

@Frosty_Moon

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#75

Awesome update abhi..
👏

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mariajamal

@mariajamal

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#76

mind blowing both part...plz cont...

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Ameesha

@Ammiey

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#77

Abhu my pudding!!!

Ok if mahi darling has taken cupcake then im taking pudding for u n just like darling word is reserved for my mahi darling... Pudding will be reserved for u my baby!!

Aww wait a minute u wrote this for me???

Like seriously???

I know u wrote this for all the writers specially mahi darling but then u added my name there... U found me a wonderful writer?? Seriously??

Well im flattered! 😳

Love u infinity my sugar! 🤗

Tell u what?? This is a truth a sheer truth that you're gonna beat every writer here ... I mean seriously this???

You're writing skills are just hooking one i mean after reading your piece i was like why this much???? Then??? What next???

How i wished it was a complete story so that i can read without waiting for next chappys... But then sabr ka fal meetha hota hai... 😆

So... I'll wait 😃

But dont make us wait for long ok? 😛

I read both parts in a go... Sorry couldnt read it before... So sorry i really had no idea and...

Wait a minute... Have u read my stories?? I dint send u a pm... Wait i'll do that now without further delay ... I'll send u pm of both my works! Plz do read n review 😳 will be looking forward to your comment!

My love just remember this one thing that whenever u need me for anything abhu just pm me once n i'll be there! Promise!

And yeah no need to call me "di" as me n mahi are of same age n i saw u're calling her di but still if u wish u can i'll not stop u but theres really no need we are friends now... And u can call me whatever u feel like... Just like i gave u nick name pudding u can give me too btw my real name's ameesha! ❤️

Thankyou so much my pudding for the pm!

Love

Ameesha ⭐️

Edited by Ammiey - 9 years ago

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Abhilasha Malhotra

@TheLadyMcQueer

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: pearl.white
The story moved ahead brilliantly. Loved Preeti blasting off Ramu along with Pushku and Shravu( Such bhole-bhale Mumma's and Papa's boys.. Urghh!!)

Run Shravan run... There goes your life!! After all he has put her through, I wonder what will make her go back to him!! Hmm... So I am ready for fireworks...

Please update soon!!

Wonderful chapter.

Thanks a bunch for your words of appreciation.

Yes he will surely run a lot in Next Update.

Be Ready.

I will try to update ASAP.

Teaser will be up soon.