Shraman TS || My Promise || Part3:Pg24 (09/03) (Completed!) - Page 10

Originally posted by: trayee

its sooo sooo sooo nice yaar...loved it...the way u pennd it...u jst naild it dear..pls keep it up..

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

interesting..

Originally posted by: ArpitaSingh1806

Yeh preeti's outburst. Although it happened in the show but was very rushed. But in ur story it feels subtle and surreal. Amazing update ,post soon👍🏼

Originally posted by: neverlandspirit

Oh ,my god!!!

I am soo hooked on tis story! I love everything about it

So you need to update soon, k?

Originally posted by: _Eternity_

Awesome update abhi..
👏

Originally posted by: abcd00

Awesome part

Update soon

eagerly waiting

Originally posted by: mariajamal

mind blowing both part...plz cont...

Originally posted by: Ammiey

Abhu my pudding!!!

Ok if mahi darling has taken cupcake then im taking pudding for u n just like darling word is reserved for my mahi darling... Pudding will be reserved for u my baby!!

Pudding is such a cute name Di!

Thanks a ton!

Aww wait a minute u wrote this for me???

Like seriously???

I know u wrote this for all the writers specially mahi darling but then u added my name there... U found me a wonderful writer?? Seriously??

Yes, it for every wonderful writer in this forum!

You are really wonderful!

Well im flattered! 😳

Love u infinity my sugar! 🤗

People had told me earlier too that I flatter them but I really wonder do I?

Love you too Di!

Tell u what?? This is a truth a sheer truth that you're gonna beat every writer here ... I mean seriously this??? Di yeah kuch jyada ho gya😆.

You're writing skills are just hooking one i mean after reading your piece i was like why this much???? Then??? What next??? Sorry, for that. But time doesn't permit me out.

How i wished it was a complete story so that i can read without waiting for next chappys... But then sabr ka fal meetha hota hai... 😆 Yes, Off-course!

So... I'll wait 😃

But dont make us wait for long ok? 😛 Will try to update ASAP!

I read both parts in a go... Sorry couldnt read it before... So sorry i really had no idea and...

Wait a minute... Have u read my stories?? I dint send u a pm... Wait i'll do that now without further delay ... I'll send u pm of both my works! Plz do read n review 😳 will be looking forward to your comment! Will read and review your works soon!

My love just remember this one thing that whenever u need me for anything abhu just pm me once n i'll be there! Promise! Promise to you too Di!

And yeah no need to call me "di" as me n mahi are of same age n i saw u're calling her di but still if u wish u can i'll not stop u but theres really no need we are friends now... And u can call me whatever u feel like... Just like i gave u nick name pudding u can give me too btw my real name's ameesha! ❤️ Di, it's something that I have already answered 😛!

Thankyou so much my pudding for the pm! That's only the problem! I read your PM and tried to PM you but it shows "Error-Invalid Request". I will see If I can do that in bulk!

Love

Ameesha ⭐️

Love to you too!

Your Pudding😃

TEASER (Part:3)

"Does she even know how to drive?"

"Who gave her the driving license?"

"Is she in any mood to stop?"

"Can she just bring the speed down?"

"Why can't something happen to that khatara' to bring down the speed?"

"Have she lost all the brain she had?"

"What is she upto now?"

He had just put a questionnaire to himself.

While he was busy in solving this questionnaire his wife again took a turn and he followed her.

From 3 hours, he was driving like a maniac, following his wife who was in no mood to stop or slow down the speed. Keeping up with her was getting difficult for him since the road was too new to him and he was unaware of the turns. But his wife and her car seems to know all of them. It was too dark but her car moving at the speed of thunderbolt. Her car was going straight earlier but now it was making zig-zag pattern on the road which scared him to the core.

"What if something happens to her??? Is she fine????" was the biggest question mark for him .

He soon found that they were nearing Delhi by a random milestone on the road which again his professionally skilled driver wife was to hit upon.

They were going to cover the journey of 8 hours in just 4 hours! But they still had a long journey to cover which would bring their life to a turn from where none of them can go back. No one know it's good or bad. It all depends upon time. Yes, time which can destroy or make someone life in the spur of a second.

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PS : Part-3 will be coming soon...