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Posted: 8 years ago
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I don't know what to call it, it is neither poetry nor prose. Somewhere in between. Nothing to do with the show but probably everything to do with the show 😉 , fits ShraMan or so I think 😆

Evening sky is prettier than usual
Everything is in place
An orange sunset
Grey and pink sky
Sagittarius smiles
The moon wanes
Fireflies flicker

Emptiness engulfs

Tell me
Am I allowed to mourn
A love that was
A lie(life) that is
And a dream
That may never be ?

Or has that
Also been bestowed
On luckier souls already ?

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wonderful!

A love that was
A lie that is
A dream that may never be!

Sums it up quite accurately
And as for the last two lines : its up to God & Destiny

Loved this!

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: nith125

I don't know what to call it, it is neither poetry nor prose. Somewhere in between. Nothing to do with the show but probably everything to do with the show 😉 , fits ShraMan or so I think 😆


Evening sky is prettier than usual
Everything is in place
An orange sunset
Grey and pink sky
Sagittarius smiles
The moon wanes
Fireflies flicker

Emptiness engulfs

Tell me
Am I allowed to mourn
A love that was
A lie(life) that is
And a dream
That may never be ?

Or has that
Also been bestowed
On luckier souls already ?



Lovely Nith. @ bold - my sentiments after watching tonight's episode. I could not watch Tuesday's! I am very annoyed and impatient with the CVs.


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Artist_Forever

Wonderful!


A love that was
A lie that is
A dream that may never be!

Sums it up quite accurately
And as for the last two lines : its up to God & Destiny

Loved this!


Thanks Mahi ! Shows how messed up I am na ?
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I love it. N i echo ur sentiments
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Infofan



Lovely Nith. @ bold - my sentiments after watching tonight's episode. I could not watch Tuesday's! I am very annoyed and impatient with the CVs.


Thank you ! I haven't even seen today's episode yet, I don't have the courage to be honest.
Lets see what happens anyways 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely nith125👏. This is so beautiful
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: shalz_123

I love it. N i echo ur sentiments

Thanks Shalz 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks Joyness !

Originally posted by: Ana_mika

This is beautiful Nith!

Thanks Anamika 😊

Originally posted by: avni01

Lovely nith125👏. This is so beautiful

Thanks Avni 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: nith125


Thanks Mahi ! Shows how messed up I am na ?

Not at all! I believe uncertainty and confusion is the adventure element of life 😉

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