ShraMan FF: Contradiction & Reality - Chap 16 on P. 31 & A/N on P.31

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Safire

@Safire

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#141

Brilliant job!!!

All those conversation parts between shraman and Nirmala/Ramnath have been superbly penned👏

Waiting to see what will be Shravan's decision after all this..

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deepoceaan

@deepoceaan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#142

Thanks dear

Getting updates after long time.

Nice one. Emotional too

At least ramnath admitted his mistakes. Curious to know Shravan ab kya karega? Will he return london or decided to stay here.

update soon

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Meera

@Jerry2308

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Posted: 8 years ago

#143

Brilliant update... Beautifully written..

Shraman's conversation was so emotional.. Shravan is thinking it's all his fault😭

Nirmala and ramnath's conversation was much needed.. They need to understand that they both are responsible for shravan's state..

Hope shravan agree to stay at least for Sumo's sake..

Plz continue soon

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deltadawn

@deltadawn

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#144

Oh my god. I can't believe it took me so long to come back here and check for an update.

And this is always worth it. coming here to read your story.

Shravan is in pieces by now and no words can pick them up and mend them. Only suman's actions from her eon can.

He is so vulnerable still.

Loved the way you described what was suman to Shravan. Had this conversation with a friend yesterday about why Shravan would love sumo so much and the answer is here.

She had so many shades. she was his support system, his creator and destroyer. Thats god almighty. and he cannot run from her ever because she is everything. she resides in every inch of his world and she manages it with an unknown force. He cannot separate her from his living life. Because he gave her these controls long back.

Kudos to you girl. Every time I come to this thread I cry. every word is chosen well and placed well and there are never any mistakes when you take this story forward. 👏

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pinky.padda

@pinky.padda

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#145

wow

that was amazing

absolutely loved it

continue soon

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reshmanair356

@reshmanair356

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#146

Hey I guess you are yet to mention the new update information in your title😊

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deltadawn

@deltadawn

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: reshmanair356
Hey I guess you are yet to mention the new update information in your title😊

Thanks Resh. I had missed chp 9 and 10!!

So this morning I reviewed chp 9 😳

Chp 10 -

If chp 9 was a bomb to me. Chp 10 just broke that record. I kept wondering when Nirmala would come into the picture and she finally does. and Ramnath Malhotra is an incurable virus of a man.😡 He wanted to prove himself innocent so he went to her and blamed her into guilt again? such people do exist so kudos to you for analysing him so well.

Shravan.. my heart breaks for him. 😭

The layers and layers that you have peeled to analyse that mans hurt is just overwhelming. Every action, every word ever said to him in the short span of the show. you have put forth his emotions in reaction to each one of them.

Itne depth me to CVs ne tak nahi socha hoga while writing the show. You did an honor to the thought process of Shravan Malhotra which we all have been picking over for a year now.

Phew.

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A.Hajnal

@A.Hajnal

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#148

Thank you for such unconditional support and for such overwhelming response... You guys are always kind to me in words, thank you for that... And thank you for your understanding and your patience... 🤗

Originally posted by: reshmanair356
Hey I guess you are yet to mention the new update information in your title😊

Thank you for reminding me! 😳

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HappyLibran1910

@HappyLibran1910

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#149

Hey A.Hajnal

This is such a brilliant piece of wrk .. I started it yesterday and cld not stop till I completed the entire 10chapters ... I'm amazed time and again abt how beautifully the writers in the forum have taken up the relationship between Shraman ... you my dear hve gone a step up 👍🏼

The detailed sketches of Shraman their insecurities and their beliefs And the questions which arise in their minds for themselves are jus too good ..

I simply loved the way way u hve described shravan's pain , Suman's vulnerability, finally the confrontation between Ramnath and Nirmala .. in the show I felt their never was a character so badly written .. coz she jus flitted in and out of the episodes without doing much .., when in reality her character shld hve been one of the most important pillars of this show :(( Khair if I actually start ranting abt the flaws it be neverending 😕 so leaving it aside

I'm glad u bought out the introspection of Suman n Ramnath as how their actions have affected shravan .. I'm glad Shravan Q both on y would they give up on him or take decisions for him :(( when they both claim to love him and did what best is for him ..
Cant wait see the story progression

. It feels grt to come across such talent :))

Also wanna thank Reshma Nair for suggesting me to read ur Stories >:D<]

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vimikrao

@vimikrao

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#150

Shravan's fear has reason he doesn't want to break again, as he said he is very easy way for Sumo for sacrifice sometimes for her image, for her self respect & for her family. She never thought of him, he is the person to sacrifice, as she can live without him. But now she is trying hard to stop him from leaving but only Nirmala can stop him if she says she didn't leave him for her happiness, she was forced to do that by Ramnath than he may somewhere understands...

Ramnath & Nirmal convo was much needed now Ramnath realised how he imprint women in his son's eyes. He won't trust any woman for him all the women are not trustworthy ppl...

Nice update & Thanks for PM

I m late sorry

Vinu

Edited by vimikrao - 8 years ago

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