ShraMan FF: Contradiction & Reality - Chap 16 on P. 31 & A/N on P.31

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Meera

@Jerry2308

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Posted: 8 years ago

#121

Awesome update...The quote is so apt for this chapter

Shravan's pain Nd hurt is very well described...

Shraman's conversation is so much emotional

Hope he makes right decision

Thanks for the PM

Plz Continue soon

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1095142

Hibernated

Posted: 8 years ago

#122

me being the chatterbox i am has felt at loss of words except for the ZO di times, and thats the same thing here too, you know it seems its out of habbit that you have posted one of these brilliant pieces, but question is how?????

anyways keep them coming, reaallly sooon😛

love

arpita

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Nik03

@Nik03

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Posted: 8 years ago

#123

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Am speechless dear... A masterpiece it is..👏
You have made Shravan say things what I wanted him to say in exactly same way as you have written...Thank you dear for writing it!!❤️
You have represented the REAL Shravan!!...The broken, tired, defeated, hurted beyond limits and most importantly dissapointed soul!!...Not with others only but with himself much more...Everyone had given up on him and now he had given up on himself... 😭 ...How much can a person be more torn than him?!!
Even though I loved, adored every nook n corner of this writeup but what touched me much more are...
Tum bhi Nirmala Ahuja nikli, Suman Tiwari, I cease to exist for you too,in the same way,I cease to exist for her, only because Ramnath Malhotra wanted it that way...Soo loved it dear...❤️

Its soo true that only Suman Tiwari can bring him back, only she had that power on him...She is the only one whom Shravan had given that power over his own being, his entire being!!

Sooo loved it ❤️ ❤️
Take a bow dear... 👏

Thanks for the pm n plzzz do cont soon 😊
Loads n Loads of Love n 🤗
Nik

Edited by Nik03 - 8 years ago

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Sai Prasanthi

@Prasanthi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#124

Worth the wait. It was quite emotional to read on. Now, waiting to see what will he do...

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priety.priti

@priety.priti

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Posted: 8 years ago

#125

its a masterpiece...i am speechless 👏

Please update next part soon

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vimikrao

@vimikrao

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Posted: 8 years ago

#126

U have given words for Shravan's feelings, may be if show had turned like this the CVs might also created Shravan's character something like this because he was the one person suffered more than anyone, everybody taken him for granted be his father or Sumo or whoever it is... He need a time to gather himself, may be once of all he wants forget everything...

Will he once again give chance to her...

I didn't get the PM this time but I sent buddy request its still in pending list... Its ok no issues...

Vinu

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pinky.padda

@pinky.padda

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Posted: 8 years ago

#127

amazing update

absolutely loved it

continue soon

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Akriti12

@Akriti12

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Posted: 8 years ago

#128

Hey dear,A very happy new year to u...😊

now coming to the update, truly amazing and worth waiting..👏

you left me speechless every time with your sheer perfection in writing..👏👏

The best part is how each and every character of story is communicating with each other and being vocal about their thoughts and feelings at this stage.

ShraMan's converstion is so so heart wrenching.

Shravan's dialogues are so to the point,loved how you mentioned that bathroom event..

and also the one in which he asked sumo how the two strong women knelt down before his father..

loving this shravan and also his subtle love for sumo..😊

eagerly waiting for shravan's next move..😊

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Spandana

@sptrno

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Posted: 8 years ago

#129

Awww dear this was sooo emotional beautiful heart-touching wonderful...u create magic with words leaving us spellbound & speechless everytime...sooo loved it...Thank u so so much dear...

Lots of love hugs,

Spandana

Edited by sptrno - 8 years ago