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Posted: 8 years ago
RES
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Dekha forumwalon maine kaha tha na
mere Malik ayenge, jarur ayenge

When you pinged me I was watching a movie. I immediately switched off my lappy , that caught attention of my hawk eyed lady bond. She was like what's more interesting than your movie . I was like Case history of a patient 🤣 🤣
I talk more nonsense than Chomu 🥱
Okay no need to yawn.
Let's come to the update ...
Sumo still had nightmares

"Yes you heard me. Don't look so dumbfounded. You still believe you had some part to play in all of that which happened. Your cooked up stories after all were the impetus weren't they?"

Ouch!! That was below the belt
She'd hurt him really bad . I'd expected this kind of reaction


But this man only knows to love her ❤️
She thinks he no longer wants her 😲



"It's the fact that they know you all too well, better than you know yourself, so when the time comes they can throw you down, much much below the ground but when required they can lift you up and be your wings too. Sumo, the roots have got to stay below the ground never to see the sun so that the leaves can live. The leaves always have to bear the brunt of the weather so the roots can sustain. You see what I'm saying?"

👏 👏 👏
Bro you are awesome !!

Shravan is better than any shrink . Reading stories to her , treasure hunt❤️
Postcards from future !!!!!
The places you chose, cute letters, awesome edits
The whole concept is wow!
What I loved the most is the closing of these letters .
Romantically inclined , warmly intimate, pharonised, sunbathed, musically, not so strong , maybe fat, slightly miffed, physically compatible, hopeful in love shraman
Sorry for listing out things you already know but I loved all of it ❤️
Everytime I think this is it . You can't write better than this , you always surprise me .
Not maska maaring , you know I hate butter, cheese etc 😆

We both need to make peace with our demons. I won't say we should bury them; cause that which is buried can be unearthed. I won't say we need to slay them, cause they may be demons but are ours. Making peace is a more positive approach. God knows I have a lot many demons in my closet as you do yours. Give me your demons and I'll give you mine. We can work this out together.

Doctor Zoya sounds good haan? You should take up psychology .
No rolling eyes please. I know it's not what you dream to be . But if you are thinking of giving it a try. I'll be your first patient. My craziness knows no bounds 🤣
Please help me . My mom would be so happy to have a normal daughter 😆
Ek number update!!
But new year pe toh everything should be new na . Toh ye update toh purani ho gyi. Naya milega kya?

Love you loads 🤗

PS.- Are these hotties enough? Kuch reh gaya ho toh you know I'll be back
Edited by sapphire3 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Res!! 😊
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Unres
First of all...I love u zoya n i love ur writeups!! 🤗
U just made my day... 😊
I loved n enjoyed it throughly!!
Though i loved whole part but still i'll mention some parts n try hard not to write the whole part all over again... 😆

Sumo had nightmare...but Shravan is always there for her!!...n the way he consoled sumo was too good dear...
Sumo as usual in her anger hurted him...why sumo???
ShraMan's emotional talk was amazing!!

"When the time comes, they can throw you down, much much below the ground but when required they can lift you up and be your wings too....Ahh!!...It was tooo cute...
Sumo is right that none can be a better doc for her than Shravan himself...!!


Shravan left no stone unturned in Suno's therepy...He's just love!!

Aww!!! Shravan said he's not hopelessly in love with sumo, he is madly in love with her with lots of hope in it!!!...Sumo is soo lucky!!!

Postcards from future...its soo unique thought dear!!
Though u have already mentioned it but to me it'll be incomplete without mentioning them...

*Dubrovnik,Croatia-Cheers! ShraMan
*Orlando,United States of America-Love ShraMan
*London,United Kingdom-Romantically inclined, ShraMan
*Geneva,Switzerland-Warmly intimate ,ShraMan
*Dehradoon,India-Musically ShraMan
*Cairo ,Egypt-Pharonized ShraMan
*Mumbai,India-Not so strong,maybe fat,ShraMan
*Oahu,Hawaii-Sunbathed ShraMan
*Delhi,Mumbai-Slightly miffed

*Gym,Delhi,India-Physically compatible ShraMan
*Edinburgh,Scotland-HopeFULL in love ,Shravan, Sumo ka Shravan

They were too good dear...I jost loveeed them!!
N the someday future was the cutest...!!
I really liked Shravan's talk about demons...All this makes him more lovable...!!
The ending was perfact!!!


How can someone write that well???...You just slayed it!!!!
Hats off to u dear!!!...This is my fav for now coz i know u'll write even better in future!! 😊
All in all this is just ❤️

Do write more n this time soonish n thanks for the PM !!
Loads of Love n 🤗

Nik
Edited by Nik03 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Res
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Unress
*panting heavily cause of running*

Heey Zoya!

For a moment there I thought you wouldn't be posting for Mrs. & Mr. Shravan Malhotra but we get an update as a new year gift!

First things first: Kudos man for this amazing, out-of-the box concept.. 👍🏼

Till the show ended, I kept feeling that the writers had treated Sumo's molestation very lightly.

The trauma that a woman faces in cases of physical assault is often sever and is like an open wound that takes more than time to heal. It leaves a life long impact on the survivor...

Suman's fears regarding the entire thing, her frustration because of not being able to overcome it and her anguish over the entire councilor idea is palpable.

And yes. Best friends do know us quite well. They can throw and burry us deep in the pit and can also be the rock in the times when we need them.

Again you meticulously showed Shravan's agony on seeing his Sumo so weak, tortured and vulnerable.

She cries. He brakes. She hits where it hurts the most. He bleeds.

But they support each other. They are each others end game, don't you think so?

For any person suffering from any psychological trauma, the family's support comes first and always proves to be the most effective of tools in recovery. You showed that very well here.

Though if the family only starts being councilors then we poor souls will lose our future jobs!! 😆

+++

Now the postcards! ❤️

I don't have words to describe this one! Just superb dude and so cool!

All the postcards were beyond beautiful...

You always put a lot of effort in all your works and it shows too. Same goes for this one too!

And Shravan's notion of I-look-demented-when-I-smile reminds me of Namik! He once mentioned once that he looks like a dumb goofball when he smiles for camera!! 😆

The best postcard for me: Someday, Future

Zoya a 🤗 from me for this mesmerizing piece!

Keep writing while not making us wait so long too... 😆

Will be looking forward to the next update!

Till then

Love
Cas ❤️
Edited by Castile2 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Beautiful time travel!!
All about 'Us'...!

Beginning was like...




Ending rather new beginning was like...




Dream destinations ! !😳 bang on selection...!!

Dehradun got me like... Main bhi Dehradun mein thi!! with certain someone...!!😉 #FANtasies!

Anddd the gym...🤬 thought!



The last postcard was picture perfect!! LOVE to die for!





Together Forever! ! #ShraMan! !

Beautifully written! ! Loved the graphics! !

Edited by CarpeDiem_ - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Zoya, I was about to ask u for not writing any ShraMan stuff in recent times. But, I'm happy that I got this particular one 😃
Definition of having your best friend as your life partner, its best and worst part was excellent 👏
Mr. Darcy's mention 😉
Postcards were so damn cute 😛
Adorable ShraMan 😳
Enjoyed reading it!!!
PS : agli baar jyada time mat lena...forum thanda pad jaata hai.


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: girlgunjan

Zoya, I was about to ask u for not writing any ShraMan stuff in recent times. But, I'm happy that I got this particular one 😃

Happy to be of use😛
Definition of having your best friend as your life partner, its best and worst part was excellent 👏
I know right!!!
Mr. Darcy's mention 😉
That man is love
Postcards were so damn cute 😛
Thank you so much! I was anxious about those...
Adorable ShraMan 😳
Enjoyed reading it!!!
Yeyyy
PS : agli baar jyada time mat lena...forum thanda pad jaata hai.
Aww man.. That's sweet of you to say! Itna bhi thanda nahi hota hoga I sure 😆
Ab PMs kam aate hai mujhe

@Bold Thank you so very much!!!
😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
Oh zoya every time I read any piece from you the very first thought that comes in my mind is, this is the best piece i read on this forum but then you post something like this which is beyond my expectations. This piece is really unique and best too. Your writing skills shows how mature you're as a person.
I genuinely believe that this piece is just awesome and mr.darcy's mention i know,i know.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Brilliant.. Shravan's POV about having ur best friend as ur life partner is beautiful... Shraman' s role play is ❤️
Nd their postcard from future are bliss..Love the fact that shravan has taken care of every minor detail while writing these postcards for Sumo... Beautifully written..
Thank u for the new year gift..
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Posted: 8 years ago
read it ..zoya Mai kya kru Tera man ur just amazing. .. comment krungi later as u know mere comments kitne lambe hote :-p . . will read it again as I loved it.. love u yar for such an amazing OS's :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi Zoya,
Man...are you for real?😵 How can one write such a masterpiece?

Running out of words to express what I feel...amazing, wonderful, excellent etc etc...

Thank you for keeping our wonderful jodi alive...🤗

Dil nahi bara...please write more...


👏👏👏

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