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Posted: 9 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: _Eternity_

Sumo bhaag gyi..big thanks to shravan malhotra.. 😆
Interesting update dear..
Continue soon..
Thnx for pm dear

thanks dear 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: Harshi_ta

Like ??? I just love it❤️

Bechare shrvn ko kitni baar sorry bolna pada 😆or sumo🤣🤣
Or sumo bhi na shrvn or vishvjit ki Jodi bana Rhi thi🤣
And than cartoon network🤣🤣🤣
Thank you sooo much for this update study ki tension phurr ho Gai😃
And than sumo ka bhagna😆
Now waiting for next part😉

😉 😆 thank you for the wonderful comments Harshi... Aage-2 dekho hota hai Kya 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: Jerry2308

Amazing update...really liked shraman fighting scene. ..thanks for the pm

thank you so much dear 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#94
wow
sumo ran away
so happy
awesome update
absolutely loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#95
What!!!! This is the surprise and more to come. Yeh kya kiya Suman ne ab kya hoga.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: pinky.padda

wow
sumo ran away
so happy
awesome update
absolutely loved it
continue soon

thanks 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: nileshni679

What!!!! This is the surprise and more to come. Yeh kya kiya Suman ne ab kya hoga.

thanks 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: smart1010

Please update soon.

Waiting anxiously.

it is on the way ...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#99

Chapter 6

Shravan was in the room and he was really very shocked with this news that Suman is not at home ... She is missing...

Shravan to him self- kahin Suman Sach mein tou nahi bhag gayi hai... Meri baaton ki vajah se tou nahi ... No-2 she can't do like this... Matlab Maine tou usko sirf apne doubts bataye the... But agar usne seriously le liya hoga unn baaton ko... Nahi Shravan Suman aisa nahi kar sakti ...haan woh thodi weird hai... Lekin Itni bevkoof Bhi nahi ke meri baaton ko serious maan ke ghar se bhag jayegi... Lekin Shravan pagal tou hai na woh... Oh God ab main pagal ho jaonga... Yeh saari baatein soch-2 ke... Mujhe lagta hai usne mazak kiya hoga... Yahin kahin chhupi hogi... Lekin mom tou keh rahi thi ke woh letter Chhod ke gayi hai...

Baaki Sab log bhi iss baat ko leke pareshan the ke jab ladke waalon ko Suman ke baare mein pata chalega tou woh kaise react kareinge ... Suman ke vapis aane ki koi hope Nazar nahi aa rahi thi... Shravan ke dad and Suman ke papa ladke waalon se baat karne Gaye huye the... Sabhi unke aane ka wait kar rahe the... Thodi der baad woh dono vapis aate hain and unke Saath hone waala dulha Vishavjit and uske dad Bhi the... Suman's family was shocked to see them in their home... Sab unse Nazar nahi mila pa rahe the... They were feeling guilty.

Vishavjit's dad- dekhiye hum yahan pe aap sab ko guilty feel karvane nahi aaye hain... So Plz do not feel like that... I can understand ... Aaj kall ke bache kuchh jiyada hi modern hai... Main iss mein Suman ka kamm humara fault jiyada Samjhta hoon... Hum logon ne Bhi jaladwazi ki thi... Dono ko Ek baar mill lene diya hota... Haan Suman ka kasoor itna hai ke usko hum Sab se baat karni chahiye thi... But ab jo ho giya so ho giya... Aaj raat ko shadi hai or hum sab ko koi way out nikalna hoga...

Itne mein Suman ke Dadu aate hain and apne dono haath jod ke- Dekhiye Singh sahib hum Bahut sharminda hai inn sab se...Aap Hume maaf kar dijiye

Itne mein Suman ki Taayi g bolti hain - bauji maaf kijiyega chhota muh badi baat Bol rahi hoon... Aap log chaho tou Roop ki shadi Vishavjit se karva sakte ho ... Izzat Bhi reh jayegi humari varna sab log aaj humse Kya-2 nahi poochheinge... Abhi tou humare beech hai baat jab sab ko pata chalegi tou kitni Badnami hogi...

Roop was so shocked after hearing her mother but she couldn't say anything ...

Sab log aaps mein baat karte hain and end mein yahi decide karte hain ke Vishavjit and Roop ki Sahdi ki jaaye...

But Shravan was thinking about Suman usko samjh mein nahi aa raha tha ke akhir woh gayi kahan... Usne Ek-do baar apne and Suman ke parents se baat karni chahi but woh sab Bahut jiyada gusse the Suman se iss liye woh uska naam Bhi Sunna nahi chahte the...

So finally Roop and Vishavjit ki shadi ho jaati hai... Her mom was so happy ke uski beti ki shadi Ek NRI ladke se ho gayi hai... Baaki sab thoda khush iss liye the Kionki abhi tak logon ko Suman ke baare mein pata nahi chala tha... But woh sab Suman ko leke Bahut jiyada gusse mein the...

Suman's Dadu - aaj se iss ghar mein Suman ka naam koi nahi lega ... Samjhe aap log koi usko yaad Bhi nahi karega Aur na hi dondhne ki koshish karega... Marr gayi hai woh hum sab ke liye...

Suman ke mom dad was quite and her mom was crying but she was unable to say anything infront of her father in law.

Shravan ko kahin na kahin yehi lag raha tha ke inn sab ka responsible wohi hai...

Next Day

Shravan to his dad- dad main soch raha tha ke main aaj ki flight se Mumbai vapis chala jaaon... Aap log chaloge Mumbai ?

Ramnath-nahi beta tum jao hum log Delhi se hi jaayeinge Waise Bhi tumse milna tha woh tou mil liya ... Main thode din yaha Balli ke pass rukna Chahta hoon Bahut pareshan hai woh...

Shravan - theek hai dad ... Main mom se milke aata hoon...

Shravan got evening flight and he reached Mumbai and took a taxi to his Apartment. After an hour he reached at his apartment. But he was so sad jo Bhi kuchh Chandigarh mein huya tha ... He was still thinking about Suman itne mein door bell hoti hai... He opened the door and he was so shocked and surprised to see Suman infront of him.

Shravan shockingly -TUM?????? Yahan Kya kar rahi ho tum... Tumko pata Bhi hai kall Kya huya tumhare ghar pe Sab log kitne pareshan the...

She was smiling at him - arre aap andar tou aane do g mujhe aapki Mumbai mein ghar aaye mehman ke sath aise baat karte hain g...

She didn't wait for His reply and entered in the house. But Shravan very angry...

Shravan gusse se- but tum yahan kaise pahunchi... ?????

Suman- kall hi aa gayi thi g main tou yahan... Kall raat hotel mein ruki ...Haye kitne mehnge hain g aapki Mumbai mein yeh hotels ...

Shravan- Lekin tumko mere ghar ka address kahan se mila...

Suman - lao g gall karte ho aap... Aapko pata g jab Maine na bhaagne ka plan banaya tha tou Maine na soch liya tha ke Mumbai hi jaya jaaye Kionki Ek yahi Shehar hai yahan pe humara koi relative nahi hai... Punjab ya firr Dilli jaati na g tu pakka pakdi jaati... Iss liye Maine na g aapke suitcase pe na aapke ghar ka address dekha tou wohin se le liya g... Pata hai g aaj afternoon se hi aapke ghar ke saamne baithi hoon aapka wait kar rahi hoon abhi tou aake main aapke door ke saamne baithi thi ... Lekin aapne tou dekha hi nahi g...

Shravan - WHATTT ??? Suman tum pagal ho ...main abhi tumhare ghar waalon ko phone karta hoon ke tum yahan Mumbai mein ho ...

Suman- nahi aap aisa kuchh nahi karoge... Varna theek nahi hoga... Haanji Bol deti hoon g main...

Shravan - achha Kya karogi tum ... Kya achha nahi hoga?????

Suman- main sab ko Bol doongi ke aapki vajah se hi main ghar se bhaagi thi...

Shravan - O excuse me ... Maine Kya kiya hai????

Suman gave him a surprised look- Wah G Wah Kya kiya hai ... Bhool Gaye aap... Itna bada doubt kisne daala mere Dimag mein... Boliye-2

Shravan - aww woh ... Woh main Rey was finding words ...

Suman - woh main woh main Kya ... Soojh nahi raha kuchh hainji...

Shravan - whatever Lekin main phone karke rahonga tumhare ghar waalon ko...

Suman - theek hai kijiye-2 main Bhi unko yeh Bol doongi ke aapne mujhse kaha tha ke aap mujhse Pyar karte ho Aur main iss shadi se bhaag ke Mumbai aa jaon...

Shravan-KYAAA????? Tum Jhooth bologi Maine aisa kuchh nahi kaha...Lekin tum kuchh Bhi bolo main tumhare ghar phone karonga... Main unko bata Ke rahonga

Shravan apne phone se Suman ke ghar ka no. Dial karta hai...

Suman - achha speaker pe rakhiye na mujhe Bhi sab ki awaz Sunni hai... Plz-2

Shravan put his phone on speaker ... Her dad pick the phone ... Suman become sad after hearing her dad's voice.

Her dad- hello ...

Shravan - Ji uncle main Shravan Bol raha hoon...

Her dad- haan beta pahunch Gaye tum theek se...

Shravan - haanji pahunch giya ... Sab log theek hain na ghar pe...

Shravan baat karte-2 Suman ko dekh raha tha... Jo Bahut hi sad lag rahi thi and about to cry thi...

Her dad- haan beta bas theek hi hain sab... Normal hone ki koshish kar rahe hain ... Don't worry ho jayega Sab theek dheere-2 ...

Shravan unko Suman ke baare mein batane waala hota hai---- uncle woh Suman ... Lekin Suman ke dad beech mein hi uski baat kaat dete hain...

Her dad thoda gusse se- maaf karna beta Lekin uss ka naam Bhi mat Lena aage se kabhi Bhi ... Marr chuki hai woh humare liye...

Suman yeh baat sunke shocked ho jaati hai and she starts crying ...

Shravan ko Bhi bura lagta hai Aur woh sorry keh ke phone band kar deta hai... And Suman ke pass aata hai jo ke Ro rahi thi... He put his hand on her shoulder she hugged Shravan and start crying again. Shravan ko samjh mein nahi aa raha tha ke woh Kya Kare ... He also hugged her back ...

Suman - Bahut buri hoon main Sach mein kitna hurt kiya Maine sab ko... Sab mujhse nafrat karte hain ... Mere papa mujhse itna Pyar karte the aaj unho ne keh diya ke main marr gayi hoon unke liye...

He broke the hug and cupped her face- aww chup ho jao Suman Plz... Dekho woh gusse mein hain tou aisa bola unhone... Thode dino mein Sab theek ho jayega... Firr Tum unse baat kar Lena ...but Plz chup ho jao... Don't cry Tum buri nhi ho Sach mein trust me ...

Woh Shravan ki taraf dekhti hai- Lekin yeh sab aapki hi vajah se hi huya hai g... Na aap woh baatein karte Na main aapki baaton mein aati Aur na hi main ghar se bhagti or na hi mere ghar waale mujhse naraz hote... Sab aapki vajah se huya ... Aap Ke uper trust hi kiya tha Maine ...

Shravan-Lekin Maine tumhe nahi kaha tha ke tum shadi ke roz ghar se bhaag jao ... Samjhi tum... So you can't blame me alone...

Suman - haan nahi kaha tha Lekin aap hi ki baaton se mere Dimag mein doubt aaya ... And main bhaag gyi ...

Shravan - very gud Suman Shergill ab saara ilzam mujh pe... Agar main tumko kahon ke jao kisi train ke saamne kood jao tou tum kood jaogi... Badi aayi...

Suman - Itni Bhi bevkoof nahi hai Suman Shergill ... Samjhe aap...

Shravan slowly - haan usse kahin jiyada ho...

Lekin woh sun Leti hai- Kya kaha g aapne... ???? Sun liya Maine ... Fir attitude and gusse se- Aap ko na jo samjhna hai g aap samjho... Lekin ab tou aapko iss bevkoof ko har roz bardashat karna hoga... Kionki jab takk meri problem solve nahi ho jaati na main yahin rukne waali hoon ... Kionki aapki vajah se hi sab huya hai... Tou mujhe bataye ke mera room kaun sa hai...

Shravan usko ko dekh raha tha and soch raha tha ke ajeeb Ladki hai... Lekin he was satisfied that she was fine... And he has a smile on his face ...

So guys here you go ... Ab dekhte hain ke aage-2 Kya hoga... Suman is going to stay with Shravan and what will happen next ... :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
Very much excited to see what will happen next
Sumo in Mumbai👍🏼

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