Poem:Emotions (Suman's POV Updated pg6) - Page 4

Please unres soon Palak and @angel_writer 😛

Oh man!!!
That's terrific Ramya... written so beautifully...
I could feel the emotions honestly... brilliant is the word here... 😳
My fav part :

These wounds on my hands, rendered in her defence
I choose to remain indifferent towards!
And nevertheless my anger shall not rest in peace
Until i've broken every bone of he who dares to harm her, piece by piece
And not just the two of these
My heart, guilt does seize
Because somewhere i too was responsible
For her state this miserable

Yaha mujhe Adi ki dhulai wala epi n uske baad ka sab yaad aa gaya 😭


Now I can't wait to read more of ur ShraMan works... PM me asap...!!

P.S. Are u a south indian...?? I am 😳

Originally posted by: Ishqbaaz

Oh man!!!
That's terrific Ramya... written so beautifully...
I could feel the emotions honestly... brilliant is the word here... 😳
My fav part :

These wounds on my hands, rendered in her defence
I choose to remain indifferent towards!
And nevertheless my anger shall not rest in peace
Until i've broken every bone of he who dares to harm her, piece by piece
And not just the two of these
My heart, guilt does seize
Because somewhere i too was responsible
For her state this miserable

Yaha mujhe Adi ki dhulai wala epi n uske baad ka sab yaad aa gaya 😭


Now I can't wait to read more of ur ShraMan works... PM me asap...!!

P.S. Are u a south indian...?? I am 😳

Thank you so much Amreen! 😳 🤗 Glad you liked it!!
Yup that Adi wala scene was what i was referring to here. Pm'ed. 😛 😉
Yup, i am a malayali. But i live in Rajasthan. Wow! You too! Where are you from?

Originally posted by: ramya06

Thank you so much Amreen! 😳 🤗 Glad you liked it!!
Yup that Adi wala scene was what i was referring to here. Pm'ed. 😛 😉
Yup, i am a malayali. But i live in Rajasthan. Wow! You too! Where are you from?

Yup.. i saw the pm... sorry my PM / hour quota finished... 🤣
Will reply after a couple of hours now whem IF permits...
And am a telugu... I live in Maharashtra.. Nagpur to be precise!! 😳

Originally posted by: Ishqbaaz

Yup.. i saw the pm... sorry my PM / hour quota finished... 🤣
Will reply after a couple of hours now whem IF permits...
And am a telugu... I live in Maharashtra.. Nagpur to be precise!! 😳

Oh, no problem dear, you can reply whenever time (and IF ) permits. 😛 Oh that's nice, so we have common south-indian connection. 😳 I read and commented on your ff. It was awesome!

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

very nice..

Thank you!😊

omg! this is awesome Rammy really awesome! aaj mujhe tumara yeh talent bhi pata chala! keep it up babes! nailed it!

Originally posted by: -Saishree-

omg! this is awesome Rammy really awesome! aaj mujhe tumara yeh talent bhi pata chala! keep it up babes! nailed it!

Thank you so much Sayu! 😳 🤗 Yup main hoon hi talented. 😳 😆 Just kidding, i know itna bhi accha nahi tha, but glad you liked it! 😃

Good evening all! So on popular demand, i'm posting a Suman's pov of this poem! 😃 😳 Just as simple as the previous one, again a hurried piece. Hoping you all like it just as you liked the previous one. 😉 😳

EMOTIONS
(SUMAN'S POV)


Why does our relation
Shift rapidly like the shades of a chameleon?
Like the two sides of the coin can love and hate
Co-exist and vary without a moment's wait?

From adolescence to the adult kind
Love and respect for you, was the only thing on my mind
Yet circumstances beg to differ
And become beyond me to infer

I know i have hurt you
And for that i don't need to step into your shoes
For i can see through you, inside out
But that has never forbidden you to fight

When misery has befallen me
You've never failed to stand by me,
Trials be of any decree
You shall always be there to set me free

Even then you say this ain't friendship
Of what type is this relationship?
Care and love does go in
But where has all the understanding been?

Whatever i did, i did out of love
For those to whom i am grateful more than the lord above
I can't see them in pain
As i cry heartbroken in vain

Please help me out of this
All this hatred that is his
Who shall ever be my very life
Will fortune make me his fortunate wife?

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Love
Ramya❤️

RES!