Poem:Emotions (Suman's POV Updated pg6) - Page 6

Ramya🤗

Amazing ramya..
Last two paragraphs love them..❤️
Brilliant dear..
Thnx for pm...

"I know i have hurt you
And for that i don't need to step
into your shoes
For i can see through you, inside
out
But that has never forbidden you
to fight
When misery has befallen me
You've never failed to stand by
me,
Trials be of any decree
You shall always be there to set
me free"- These and the last paragraph is my favourite. That summed up the whole poem I guess 😆 It's amazing. Really fabulous. You just striked the right chords with every line. AMAZING. P.S- Can you write two more Shravan and Sumo poem taking their life as a whole as the centre. Not the relationship between the two. I tried one but it didn't came out that good. Reading these two from you, I m sure you would do justice to it 😊

Originally posted by: Ana_mika

Ramya🤗

This is brilliant.

I so loved it.❤️

The last two paragraphs are my personal favorite!

You've done an absolutely amazing job yet again.

Thank you for penning down Sumo's POV.

Keep writing!

Thank you so much Ana! 😳 😳 🤗

Originally posted by: _Eternity_

Amazing ramya..
Last two paragraphs love them..❤️
Brilliant dear..
Thnx for pm...

Thanks a lot Ranju! 😳 You're welcome dear! 😊

Originally posted by: Perpetuity

"I know i have hurt you
And for that i don't need to step
into your shoes
For i can see through you, inside
out
But that has never forbidden you
to fight
When misery has befallen me
You've never failed to stand by
me,
Trials be of any decree
You shall always be there to set
me free"- These and the last paragraph is my favourite. That summed up the whole poem I guess 😆 It's amazing. Really fabulous. You just striked the right chords with every line. AMAZING. P.S- Can you write two more Shravan and Sumo poem taking their life as a whole as the centre. Not the relationship between the two. I tried one but it didn't came out that good. Reading these two from you, I m sure you would do justice to it 😊

Thanks a ton Resh! 😳 🤗 Hmm,lagta hai tu mujhe poet banake chodegi. 😆 😛 But i'll try to write as per your request dear. 😃 😉

Nailed it Di!

Originally posted by: Artist_Forever

Nailed it Di!

Gosh this was Perfect! Beyond it actually!

❤️

Last line was my fav!

Thank you dear! 😳 😳

Yo Ramya!

I actually don't have words to express here - What I feel at the moment?