SS: SHARMAN - Silsila pyaar ka aur dard ka ' PART2 UPDATED'

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Dear friends, this is my flow of thoughts... i hope you all like this and this is my first writeup here ...




Adi leaves to confront sumo

he goes to her and asks

Sumo are you happy with this marriage?
Sumo in shock says " what kind of a question is that... and to let me tell you... ours is not a lovey dovey love marriage as there is no courtship and so on ... I respect nanu as he is the elderly guide in my life hence I agreed and you are a good educated and matured individual is what i fell so to keep up nanu's word and his wish I obliged.

Adi: So, its not for you ? right?
Sumo : Thats not important Adi, Nanu wanted this and he has chosen you and I heeded his words and to add to it... all the marriages in the world need not be necessarily love marriages... a relation in actual terms starts after marriage so why are so worried bothered and restless? relax dont put pressure on your brains and leave and she tends to move

Adi : He twists her hand and pins her to his body and re iterates again are you in love with me? Is your consent to this marriage is with full heart?

SUmo: Enough Adi, I respect you and I hate those men who cannot handle their self state with balance so please stop this nonsense and listen, I dont want to play any hide and seek games with anyone. I agreed to this marriage not be heart but by brains and under compulsion and let me make it very clear, I never loved you as i dont even know you properly like " your likes dislikes, your wishes, your nightmares, your choices I dont know a penny of all this yet I agreed to save my nanu and to fulfill his wish. However I promise once we get hooked you will get a responsible honest and a loyal wife in me.

Adi: Still like a hung over ball, is not ready to let her go ... he still tries to get to the heart of the nail, he asks thats not the answer to my question. you said you dont love me right? so whom do you love? DO you have feelings for someone else and is getting ready to marry me ?

Sumo: Okay so if you dont want to let this go off, let me put this straight yes I love some one who is very close to me. But its purely one sided. I never proposed the guy. so I dont think that should be a big block for you as I never had been intimate with the guy whom i worship in my thoughts dreams and fantasies. Now is this fine?

Adi: IS that Shravan malhotra whom you love?

Sumo: shocked with eyes wide open and throat jolting the unshed tears says I dont prefer to take anyones name outplease

Adi: YOu have to tell this sumo else I cannot take this and behaves rudely

Sumo: Frees herself forcibly and says now that s enough
Adi: You have to reveal that name and if not its cheating your grandfather and your friendship too with shravan

SUmo : in spit of anger blurts that yes yes I love shravan malhotra my one and only friend and damn it because of your love interest in me I couldnt even talk to my friend. Leave the freaking hell of him being my love, I couldnt even see straight in to his eyes as a friend. What have you done to me. but anyways. ... past is past now that I have revealed everything, please now leave and let me sleep

Adi: You have cheated on me suman... you cheated shravan, nanu everyone you are such a cheater ... you are playing games with the people around you who are genuinely concerned you dont have an ounce of individuality and self respect

Sumo couldnt take all the crap as she remembers shravans accusations on her character and gives a high voltage tight slap to adi and says : Enough adi Not an another word. is that clear?

A person from out side enters the room shocked looking at the confession and slapfest that just happened ...

Looking at him sumo and adi are shocked for once just to realize that its none other than Shravan malhotra


To be continued


Dear EKDV's, I just couldnt sit quite with the ongoing negative fest and hence have penned down my thoughts and thanks to farial for constantly encouraging me to pen down my thoughts on this track ...

if you like this piece of writing pls do hit like so that I will proceed further


love you all

Photofreak...
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photofreak thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Dear readers please care to share your views... that helps me in writing better... though am not a professional writer :-)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Man U said what we wana suman to say and sharvan to hear that's too good. And don't underestimate urself dear I have read ur writing and known for what 2 years now u really write good man
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Posted: 9 years ago
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What wouldnt i give to actually make suman say all of this on the show...but lets see what happens!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: farial100

Man U said what we wana suman to say and sharvan to hear that's too good. And don't underestimate urself dear I have read ur writing and known for what 2 years now u really write good man



aww fari, thanks buddy...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Flibbertigibet

What wouldnt i give to actually make suman say all of this on the show...but lets see what happens!



I just cant see any girl dumb and facing the crapfest and getting humiliated profusely being helpless be getting in a cliche hence I have given words to sumo here to voice her thoughts
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely pls continue...good break from all the negativity on screen
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb start...Do continue soon :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: avni01

Lovely pls continue...good break from all the negativity on screen



aww thanks dear ... will try and update it soon... with part 2
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: agrawalrk

Superb start...Do continue soon :)



thanks buddy...will update it soon...

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