Tum Dena Saath Mera - A Shraman SS | Part 6 Pg 12 | Completed - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
#61
She placed her head on his lap and Shravan was caressing her head that part was bestest
Shraman wedding yippee
Lovely chapter
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62
So glad he's there to be her anchor during this terrible time...not sure if she'd be able to go through with the farce anymore now that Nanu is gone.
Though will she ever remember what she said to Ramu?

Fantastic update Mahi, can't wait to see what happens next!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63
Dont mind??

I love it Mahi.. Simple and sweet😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64
awww beautiful amazing loved it yaar!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65
Nice please update me next time :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66
amazing...
beautifully penned...
❤️ it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
Mahi
This is superb.. Waiting for next updates..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Roshni2015

Mahi

This is superb.. Waiting for next updates..


Was waiting for you Rosh😉
Thanks!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69
Suddenly, I'm feeling blank. Sorry people but it ends here. *facepalm*


Part 6



Later...

Ramnath was seated on his rocking chair. His truth was out in the open and he was scared. Scared coz Shravan hadn't talked to him ever since it happened and it was hitting him hard. Lights were dim in the Room and there was an eerie silence.

Suddenly, the door creaked open and he entered. Ramnath's face stiffened up, as if he'd seen a live ghost. Shravan's face was rather calm and 'not bothered'.

He had a bunch of papers in his hand and Ramnath's gifted pen.
"Mr. Malhotra...", he began. Ramnath's throat went dry.

"You have to sign some set of papers. And you've an option, similar to the set of choices you gave to Suman long back. One is our marriage agreement, and you'll be signing as a witness. The other is my resignation from Malhotra Firm. Which do you approve of?"

"Shravan..."
"Uh! Please Sir. No explanation."

Ramnath heavily lifted up the pen and signed the marriage document. Shravan got up and left, leaving behind his pen.

Ramnath was left behind today, due to his own selfish actions and deeds.

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After A Week

Another Baraat came, this time to the Tiwari Killa. Leading the Dulha's Ghodi was Aditya, dancing in happiness.

Manju once again welcomed the Malhotras. And this time also, Shravan got his teeka done from Dulhan's Maasi.
Once again, the mantras were chanted and rituals being done. The Kanyadaan, the Gatbandhan and the Pheras. The Mangalsutra and sindoor being put.

Yes, Shravan & Suman were getting married!

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Wafadaari ki vo rasmein nibhayenge hum tum kasmein
Ek bhi saans zindagi ki jab tak ho apne bas mein


Jab koi baat bigad jaaye jab koi mushkil pad jaaye
Tum dena saath mera o humnawaa...


Na koi hai na koi tha zindage mein tumhaare siva
Tum dena saath mera o humnawaa

Dil ko mere hua yakeen hum pehle bhi mile kahin
Silsila ye sadiyon ka koi aaj ki baat nahin

Jab koi baat bigad jaaye jab koi mushkil pad jaaye
Tum dena saath mera o humnawaa
Na koi hai na koi tha zindage mein tumhaare siva
Tum dena saath mera o humnawaa
Tum dena saath mera o humnawaa

...

THE END

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Really sorry guys, but I think it should end here. I hope you'll enjoyed this!😳

Love,
Mahi

Edited by Artist_Forever - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#70
Mahi... why did u end it without giving a proper suhag raat scene 😊

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