Last wish || A Sharaman FF|| Part 17 (pg 9) Complete - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very emotional updates
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 5_

Night 5 AM

Sharavan_ Suddenly wakes up from sleep...

Something is wrong, terribly wrong but what ... Why my heart beat is so erratic ... I need to see Sumo.

Jolt... She is not mine anymore ... I need to see her now ... I can't see her with anyone else ... I won't let it happen ... she might be in pressure because of Nanu's health and main bhe to kaha nahi hai abhi and yesterday's episode ... kya hua jo usne Aditya se PCT ke papers le liye ... maine he to diye hai... main kal baat karta hoon. She loves me ... ... Sumo you love me naa... I am so afraid. I can't live without you. I fight with you. Try to throw you out of my life but I know you will not go anywhere... But if this time you will go ...you will go for forever. This thought is scary ... No you are mine. I need you to hug me ... ye raat khatam kyo nahi hoti ... Main abhi jata hoon.

This blue Shirt is your favorite naa... I will wear this only .. I will do whatever you say ... just stay with me ... these bloody tears ... They won't stop until I see you ... pagal ho gaya hoon ... naa main pagal hee tha tumhare liye

Kamini_ Arre Puttar ji inni subha kahan jaa rahe hoo ?

Chachi main Su... Nana Ji ko milne jaa raha hoon

Vadiya hai... Ek kaam aut kardo ... tumhari best friend ke shaadi fix ho gaye hai use mere taraf se ye saree gift kar dena.

His hand trembles to take the saree.

Drives fasts towards her home.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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it is awesome
read all chapters in one go
brilliant
loved the frst two episodes very much
feeling the pain of suman

and love dur style of writing chotu chapters

update soon
waiting

hope it is a story with happy end, ur name is little fearful
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Last wish should be most important wish
Edited by Wiccamaya - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Omg donot kill sumo...last wish title hain islie...nicely written
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow. Go girl your writings are kindaa new . Short updates sand very fast great. Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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lovely and emotional updates dear..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 6 _

Sharavan entering in Tiwari Kila living room..

Everyone except nana ji is sitting on dining table ... mama ji , nirmala, mamai jai , mausa ji and masi ji and Suman is serving tea...

Nirmala is shocked to see Sharavn ..

Ye Aurat kya kar rahi hai yahan... tum etni baigarat ho ke phi chali aaye ...

Aditya Tamiz se baat kar mere maa hai ye ...

Tere Maa ... Ohhh to too Ahuja ka beta hai ... Haan hoon par tamiz se baat kar

Nirmala ... Sharavan beta suno too

Tujse mujhe kuch nahi sunna ... Tere pass ek aur beta hai use suna... phone kar din main das baar aur meri sumo bhe cheen kar de de ..

Aditya rushed to hit Sharavn ... but Suman stops him in between ..

Adita dare to touch him ... I will kill you here only ...

Everyone is watching Suman's outburst

He has all the right to ask anything from his mother ... he is her real son... And don't you dare to touch my friend , mujse bura koe nahi hoga.

Sharavn watching her strangely ... Sumo chalo mujhe abhi baat karni hai tumse

Better you talk to nirmala Aunty first

No this time I need to talk to you only rest I will sort later ...

In Suman's room...

Tum Janti the kee Aditya se aurat ka beta hai...

Nahi ...Muje kal pata chala

Fir bhe tum esse shaadi karne ke liye ready hooo...

Nanu ke tabiyat kharab hai aur ye unke wish hai ...

Aur tumhari wish...

Ab meri koe wish nahi hai...

Ab nahi hai... Par pahle to thee na... bolo kya wish hai tumhari..

Maine kaha naa meri koe wish nahi hai...

Tumne phone kyo nahi kia ...

Tum sare rishte tod kar gaye the

Ye chot kab lagi tumko ..?

Kal

Sab kuch kal hee ho gaya ... Tum apne se paraye ho gaye

Suman stares at his face in surprise ..

Sumo tell me one thing ... why you always stand for me .. ... why you come searching for me in night .. I need answer?

I have no answers for your question...

I don't know about you but I Love you and whatever you will decide I will accept but I can't live without you. (And breaks down crying)

Suman hugs her ... now I can take your name

? ( arched brows)

Kal maine promise kia tha khud se kee main tumhara naam kabhi nahi loogi..

Sumo you love me naa ... Please bolo. I am really scared

Yes.. aur hamesha se karti hoon ... Sharavn but you have to promise me one thing ... kuch bhe ho .. kisi ke bhe sath ho you won't leave me ever

Promice ... and you will also never ever leave me and I am sorry for yesterday... I am really sorry.

Bahut pyari lag rahi ho sumo ... can I hug you tight.

hmmm

Downstairs _

Aditya _ I will check what going on ...

Nirmala _ no they are best friends and now I think more than that and you will not come in-between. Let them decide. I have never given my son anything but now I won't let anything come in-between both.

Note_ Gory times ahead just keep reading. This part shows that when you have fear of loosing someone for forever your true feeling resurfaced and your priorities change. But challenges and turbulent time is awaiting them. Lets see ...

Edited by Wiccamaya - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice ...my focus is on ShraMan convo
Dil maange more
Aditya how dare he
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome wiccamaya u r great👍🏼

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