Last wish || A Sharaman FF|| Part 17 (pg 9) Complete

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Precap - After Sharavan's outburst at PCT and Nana J's heart attack Suman reluctantly agrees to marry Aditya.

Suman's room

Why I cant feel anything no pain, no anger, no remorse ... one moment and everythignis just gone like that ...yes, just like that. Mumma & papa both wrapped in white cloth and they took them away ... Bas aaise he bina kuch kahe ... kuch bole ... my throat is burning, my eyes are dry and my vision is blank. Nanu is my last anchor ... or its just matter of time... I have again lost everything. Is this is time to finish game on my own terms ...

To Be Continued ...

Part 1 - Pg 1

Part 2 - Pg 1

Part 3 - Pg 2

part 4 - Pg 2

Part 5 - Pg 3

Part 6 - Pg 4

Part 7 - Pg 5

Part 8 - Pg 6

Part 9 - Pg 6

Part 10 - Pg 6

Part 11 - Pg 7

Part 12 - Pg 7

Part 13 - Pg 7

Part 14 - Pg 8

Part 15 - Pg 9

part 16 - Pg 9

Part 17 - Pg 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 1-

Suman Beta babu Ji bula rahe hai...

Ji Nanu !

Beta tu khush to hai naa es shaadi se..

Nanu, aap khush hai to main bhe khush hoon... Nanu Main dargah ja rahi hoon...

Haan bacche jaa ..

Aditya_ main car nikalata hoon

Nahi main akeli jaaogi.. Please

On the way ... Walking without slippers ( quite a few kilometers)

I have never asked anything from you till date ... I will ask today ... I will not cry and I wont let your name slip from my lips. Why everything is so quite ... why no one is one streets ... why I am alone ...

Pagal hai kya ladki ! abhi accident hoga .. kahan dekh kar chal rahi hai ...

Harrat Nizamuddin Aulia Dargah ... beautiful evening , raining heavily ... Dargah glittering like millions of fireflies are gathered and creating beautiful contrast with clouded grey sky. Fragrance of Mogra & rose petals making whole atmosphere divine ...

Suman_ (Fully drenched but eyes still dry ... both soles covered in blood & mud)

Baba this is my last visit ... I will not come back ever ... just cut my umbilical cord today from everyone this is all I want from you. I want you to make my heart bleed as much as you want but ek karam ... bas ek khwshish meri poori kar de ... bas main kabhi kamjor naa padoo. Main kabhi bhe uska naam na loon jo mera nahi hai.

Background -Kawaalls performing Kawalli in front of Kwaja ... its surreal ... Koe hosh nahi...

Strikes her forehead of jaali of dargah... Bleeding profusely.

Main aaj se tumhare sammne bhe nahi roogei ... bas tum mare aansoo sukha do... aaj se main aapni sari khawhishe yahi chorti hoon.. main kabhi peeche nahi mud kar dekhoogi. ... sirf aage dekhoogi... ... apne end ke taraf ... mare maa mera wait kar rahi hai... main uske god main sar rakh kar hee roougi. I promice my self. I have buried my soul here and I will never come back to claim it again ...

Note: I will write for both Sharavan and Suman... its difficult

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow. You made me cry. Pls update as soon as possible 👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
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A heart ranching scenario. Update soon.
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Part 2-

Suman infront of Tiwari Kila

Aditya_ Bahut der ho gaye ... we were worried. Your phone is also switched off ... you ok? Aree your are bleeding..

It's nothing. Tell me Nanu theek hai..

Haan abhi doctor aaye the ... kah rahe the improvement hai . Bahut khoon nikal raha hai kya hua...

Dead end tha dikha nahi...

Tum nange pair gaye the dargah ... ... kyo Sumo ?

Please call me Suman ...

Accha but look at your feet ... pagal ho kya... chalo main dava lagata hoon

(flashback - her feet is bleeding and sharavn is taking care and rubbing ointment)

Main laga loongi... Don't worry.

Aditya _ Maa she is behaving strangely. You have seen her feet and forehead?

Don't worry she is troubled because of Tiwari Ji's health.

On Terrace_

I will have to stop to come to here as well ... kya fark padta hai jab sab kuch chooth gaya too .. ye bhe sahi.

I will take pain, humiliation, death and tears in gift... How I want to run till my death ... RUN AWAY... JUST RUN ...

Note : very difficult to write ... so much of pain

Edited by Wiccamaya - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 3_

Pushkar on phone _

Bhaiya, Aditya ne Suman ke liye rishta bheja hai

Sumo ne mana kar diya naa...

Nahi Bhaiya ...

Bhaiya Bhaiya ... Kya hua aap kuch bol kyo nahi rahe hai..

Phone got disconnected.

Sharavan's room ..

I am not angry ... I am not hurt ... ... But my hands are shivering ... I am tired that's it. Mujhe kya fark padta hai ... mera koe rishta nahi es matlabi ladki... Why the hell these tears ... Mil kar aata hoon poochta hoon kisse poocha hai haan karne ke liye.

Mujhe Kya accha hai dono ek jaise hai opportunist ... kyo sochegi mere liye ... ... main to wait karne ke liye hoon ... sare haan aditya ke sare naa mere ... but sumo ...no Suman this time you won't get satisfaction of seeing my endless wait for you. Trust me this time ... I will not call you any more ... I am deleting your number no I am blocking your number.

Thoda wait karta hoon ... Vo sms karegi kahne ke liye ke ye joke hai...

Keeps checking phone ... Crying . Sham se raat ho gaye tumne sms nahi kia ... bhool gaye mujko etni jaldi ... Theek kahte hai papa tum mare liye nahi ho.

Ek baar dekh loon tumko nahi to mar jaoonga... Tum ek baar sms kr do, phone kar do... Accha Shaadi kar rahi ho yahi batane ke leye call kar lo... mujhe jalne ke liye hee phone kar lo Sumo... bahut akela hoon abhi aa jao .

Sleeps crying !

Note : Why these two kind of emotions ... Because in such condition only your beloved can console you and you are angry same time. You want to see that person even just to confront him or her.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing story
Too much Pain 😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks for all the comments ... 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 4_

Tiwari Kila_

Mujhe neend kahan ... kal tak tum the aaj sirf main hoon alone... 10 saal pahle gaye the to mare pass wait karne ka option tha ... ab sare raste band hai ... sab ek sath choot jayega ... tum, nanu, ghar..ye shahar sab kuch.

Main to shuru se bojh hoon sabke liye ... sare galti mere hai. No this is my parents mistake ... jo log apne bacche peeche chor kar mar jate hai un baccho ka kabhi koe nahi hota ... .. main bojh hoon, main hee galat hoon...Sr.. Aree tumhara to naam bhe main nahi le sakti... How I will live with aditya... I won't be able to let him touch me ... You will see my dead body. I don't have strength to endure this ... ...

Malhotra house_

Vandy_ Mummy Jiii apko pata hai ... Suman Ke marriage fix ho gaye ... Aditya se. Ab aap kya karege

Vandy Puttar marriage fix hue hai ... ho to nahi gaye ... Too pressure naa de apne dimag par main karti hoon kuch. Bhai Sahab ko main aaise he nahi karne doongi Singhania ke beti se Sharvan ke shaadi.

Vandy ye Aditya abhi tak aaya nahi ?

Mummy Ji vo apni mom ke sath stay kar raha hai aaj.

Aur Sharavan ?

Vo to apne room main hai Sham se bahar he nahi aaya ...

Ye bhe aivain dono ladne ke siva kuch nahi karte ... mujhe he kuch karna padega.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Pls Kamini do something warns hum mar jayenge. Too much pain. Well I can see this coming in the show as well. Pls continue. Good story.

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