Imaginary episode #14

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Hello edkvians and shramanians🤗

Its sunday night means its going to be imaginary episode #14 ...right 😉

here is the precap from yesterday imaginary episode#13:

suman says to shravan "i don't love you"😲

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you guys are shocked from the precap ,i know😆 i myself in shock 😆 the reason behind the precap is that sumo is still thinking about her promise to ramnath... so you (writers) have to make her confess her feelings to shravan that she also loves him...ab yeh kaise karna hai, yeh aap writers hi jaano 🤣

Ohk..try to include the precap in the imaginary episode #14.

So its already 10 pm IST.

note :

1) this episode will end by 11 pm IST.

2) if you put a res for writing episode, then you will have only 5 min to write (unres) your part of story after previous res is unresed by other writer.

3)anyone can participate.

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Unressed.

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"Dogi na mera saath?"
She was stupefied, unable to process what followed by the pyar karta hoon words. Judging by her faltering, quick breaths and the gulps, breathing sure seemed a task. Every part of her being was lit on fire by the touch shared by their entwined hands. Her eyes, however, were roaming all across his face, registering the million emotions flicking by- determination, pride, love, anticipation, nervous shadows, patience, relief and what not...
She had trouble moving her eyes away from it's original place, forget forming coherent thoughts.
"Sumo, main itna kuch keh gaya, tum kuch nahi kahogi?"

That patient, loving voice made her weep with painful joy. She wanted to jump and hug him tight and disappear into his arms so bad, but she held herself, her love for her family nudging her.
Staring at their hands on her lap for a moment, she looked at him, straight into his eyes and said in a small voice, "Main tumse pyaar nahi karti."
Confusion and concern marred his face at her voice and pain mirroring on her eyes,
"Sum.."

"Suman! Kaha chhip gayi? Yeh ladki bhi na, puri duniya ko sir pe bethaye phirti hai!" Nirmala's chirpy voice shook them out of their intimate cuccon.

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zindgidilse

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Where is everyone 🤔

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He froze right there in his mid sentence unable to complete his half spoken word "sum..." .

His heart wanted to believe on the voice but his mind was denying to believe...a million of voices of flashbacks of the woman hi hates were now echoing in his ears..unable to face the reality standing behind him..

Suman's whole concentration was now diverted from shravan to the woman standing infront of her..she was now all aware what is coming before them ., her eyes then glanced at shravan once again who is still frozen...suman can see the untold tension and tons of emotions on his face...she was also in the same state after all thinking about the hurt shravan sitting on his knees infront of him.

And the woman standing behind shravan is also now well aware of the situation in front of her whose back was facing him...his son...her all emotions gathered at a single place in her eyes inform of tear droplet about to come out from its place.

Edited by zindgidilse - 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Suman holds the courage, decided to handle the situation.

"shravan ..." nirmala said in her trembling voice.

nirmala's words brings him back out of his trance and he leaves a heavy breath from his mouth. Gathering his inner strength he stands up at his place leaving suman's hand looking straight into her (suman) eyes.

A anger takes place at his face and he turned to leave from there when "shravan " ... suman's voice stopped him in his mid way..

nirmala could not hold her tears and let them flow from her eyes seeing his son's face once again..a smile of happiness to see her son again made its place on her lips...her eyes fixed on his son's face... Shravan saw the tear flowing from her eyes but ignored turning his back once again towards her and faced suman and said "mujhe kuch kaam hai, baad mein milta hu tumse". ... saying so he was about to leave when nirmala said "main baad mein aati hu" and she left from there having tears in her eyes.

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potterginny

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Tearing away his eyes from his mother, he turned to the girl beside him. She seemed oblivious to his eyes, her face reflecting shock, confusion, realisation and a momentary spark which quickly doused off.
After an eternity, she turned to look at him, meeting his accusing eyes full of disbelief.
Weighed down with a heavy feeling of deja vu, she sighs resignedly and starts, "Shravan..."
He was out of the terrace before she could realize he had moved from where he stood.
Shattering all over again, she fell on the couch and starting shuddering with sobs. Nirmala sat beside her and pulled her head to her chest.
Gradually, the sobs turned into wails and then back to sobs, heaving and sniffles, eventually stopping.
"Suman beta?"
Listening to her motherly voice, she choked out, "Ramnath Uncle ne mere aur Shravan ke saath bhi wohi kiya jo aap maa-bete ke saath 10 saal pehle kiya tha."

Shravan, who was right outside the terrace door, in the attic, stopped by Daboo to help him find him a pile of something, shocked out.

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Posted: 9 years ago

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So So sorry Ritu! Didn't check!

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Mitali Gupta

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Can write a very small part today

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Written on PG2

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Damn 🤣 😆
But I love what you have written. ❤️

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Suman holds the courage, decided to handle the situation.

"shravan ..." nirmala said in her trembling voice.

nirmala's words brings him back out of his trance and he leaves a heavy breath from his mouth. Gathering his inner strength he stands up at his place leaving suman's hand looking straight into her (suman) eyes.

A anger takes place at his face and he turned to leave from there when "shravan " ... suman's voice stopped him in his mid way..

nirmala could not hold her tears and let them flow from her eyes seeing his son's face once again..a smile of happiness to see her son again made its place on her lips...her eyes fixed on his son's face... Shravan saw the tear flowing from her eyes but ignored and step forward fo leave the place.

"Shravan..."suman begin to say but
He was out of the terrace before she could realize he had moved from where he stood.
Shattering all over again, she fell on the couch and starting shuddering with sobs.

Nirmala sat beside her and pulled her head to her chest.
Gradually, the sobs turned into wails and then back to sobs, heaving and sniffles, eventually stopping.
"Suman beta?"
Listening to her motherly voice, she choked out, "Ramnath Uncle ne mere aur Shravan ke saath bhi wohi kiya jo aap maa-bete ke saath 10 saal pehle kiya tha."

Shravan, who was right outside the terrace door, in the attic, stopped by Daboo to help him find him a pile of something, shocked out.

Ps : i hv edited yagneshri nd my part of story where they clashed..hope you guys liked it.

@mitthu : write after this.

Edited by zindgidilse - 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago