Imaginary episode #14

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Ameesha

@Ammiey

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Sorry guyzz i came late today ... I thought u people have finished it by now...

Do i still have place to write if yes then im doing

Res

Or else u people continue i'll just read them today 😳

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Shravan was standing like a stone he wasnt moving for him it was really like he had seen some ghosts and on the other hand suman and nirmala's shocked face were saying the same story of ghosts

Suman and nirmala looked at each other then back to shravan who was completely expressionless by now

Shravan wasnt able to understand or believe what he just heard or rather to be precise he dint want to believe those words which were sincere indeed as it was not for him to hear

So he dint know what expression to hold exactly

Nirmala just gave a 'control the situation control him' look and nodding in yes suman slowly getting up wiping her tears went near shravan

"Shravan... " saying so she was about to put a hand on his shoulder when he trembled back to prevent her from doing so

And suman looked sadly at her midway hung hand and then shravan's face

Shravan slowly looked at suman his eyes held many expression anger , heart broken , tears filled eyes he just wanted suman to realize what he wants to say and suman understood as well

She nodded understandingly and moved towards nirmala

"Aunty chaliye neeche" she said helping her get up

"Kya baat hai beta shravan thhik hai na? " asked a worried mother

"Haan aunty aap bass abhi mere saath neeche chaliye " then she whispers to nirmala "aunty shravan kuch der akela rehna chahta hai isiliye ... Plzz aunty " and nirmala smiled for two reasons one is that his son will now learn the truth and another one that no one can understand shravan to this depth as suman and nodding in positive she went along with suman downstairs

While vanishing in the staircase suman kept staring at his figure with moist eyes untill he was no more in the sight

Shravan stood freeze ... Deep in thoughts and immediately he let out his desperation in the form of a shout which turned into his wails of cry

He sat on his knees crying hard with a thud...

Edited by Ammiey - 9 years ago

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Mitali Gupta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

As soon as Shravan had heard the word Ramnath,he stopped by in his tracks and had his ears all to Suman who now sat talking to his mother.His interest grew when he she said that his father had done something,the same thing he had done with his mother.

There on the terrace Nirmala sat hugging Suman while she cried her heart out,leaving few sentences that she intended to speak incomplete.

"Suman beta,shaant ho jayo,aur bato Ram nee aisa kya kiya?"Nirmala said pulling Suman away from her and wiping her tears

"Voh aunty..."Suman hiccuped continuing her story.

While Suman dictated the whole story to Nirmala,Nirmala just sat listening holding onto Suman's hand.

"Ab aap he bataiye mein kya karti?Ek side Shravan hai joh mere duniya hai aur ek side mere family,jinki wajah see mere ek duniya hai,jinke wajah see mein zinda hoon" And saying so Suman broke into fresh tears

Their session was broken by a ringing phone bell and when looked towards the door,they were left shocked.There stood Shravan all stoned as if he had seen a ghost.

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zindgidilse

@zindgidilse

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: potterginny
So So sorry Ritu! Didn't check!

its ohk dear...

🤗 no need for sorry, even i m rofling 🤣 you too rofl 😉😆

Btw i posted a edited version of your nd mine comment..have a look 😉

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zindgidilse

@zindgidilse

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Ammiey
Sorry guyzz i came late today ... I thought u people have finished it by now...
Do i still have place to write if yes then im doing
Res
Or else u people continue i'll just read them today 😳

continue after@sleepypshcho aka mitthu.

She unred on pg 2

Ammy pls continue from where mitthu had left the story..😛

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zindgidilse

@zindgidilse

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

@yagneshri

Beginning of the episode was superb..nd i liked the nirmala's twist in the story.,that is mindblowing 👏i loved nirmala coming into picture.

And the later part of the storybylu wrote,was totally unexpected..superb

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zindgidilse

@zindgidilse

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

@mitthu

What a revealation..👏 ditto as i was imagining ...awesome

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Ameesha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: zindgidilse
continue after@sleepypshcho aka mitthu.
She unred on pg 2

Ammy pls continue from where mitthu had left the story..😛

Okie dokie did it ritu just check it on page 2 before mitali hope u guuzz like it its way too simple

And now give a wonferful ending

Im off to sleep good night all of u love u guyzz to the core ❤️🤗

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zindgidilse

@zindgidilse

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

@ammy

lovely and emotional...understanding btw sbraman is somethng we always cherish..loved it.👏

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zindgidilse

@zindgidilse

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Res for the end

Unres (incomplete)

After facing his own breakdown at the situation, he entered into the suman's room looking at worried faces of the ladies sitting on the bed waiting for him eagerly.

suman and nirmala was sitting there hands in hands providing comfort to each other. They saw sharavan coming towards them..

Both of them stands up to meet his eyes that were just redden due to crying...

Both of them waiting for him to say something..

"Maa" the only word left his mouth...but this time.. This word is more impact full than before the situation.

Suman and nirmala looked at him with smiling faces that they have achieved their destiny...

Nirmala hugged her son as an immediate reaction which a mother could give..and unlike their last encounter, shravan hugged her mother back...

ps : will continue tomorrow,.

Edited by zindgidilse - 9 years ago