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nancyrio90

@nancyrio90

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Now this is what I can so adoringly call a "massive hurricane feel" writing!! I dont know how u manage it every time to be so neat and crisp that its feels like I have watched it rather than read it!.so vivid!

I am not exaggerating but my head is in frenzy and almost spinning with the sheer magic u have created with ur writing!!

One word to sum it all Transcendent!!👏

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sapphire3

@sapphire3

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Omg Anjali what a story...Hats off 👏
It was hot, cute,funny ... all emotions on point
I loved the playful flirty shravan ❤️
And that tum jyada achxha laddoo bna rhe ho dialogue cracked me up 🤣
I so so so loved aditya's chop 🤣
I like his character but still it felt so good 😆 😆
Thank u thank u sooo much for this os
Your pm is enough to make my day
Thanks darling 🤗

-------PRIYAM-------

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preciousruby

@preciousruby

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

I loved loved loved the first part n was wondering if you would write an update to this one.. Was super happy to see your PM..

What u write is magical !! M a big fan..

Awesome work as always..

Wish we could see something on these lines in the show.. i know wishful thinking :)

tks.

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Preeti

@Preeti.xo

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Amazing!
Shravan's so jealous that he can't leave sumo alone!
Aditya is aditya but hes also a catalyst for these two lovere! Can't wait for their misunderstandings to be cleared!
Can't wait for more of your updates.

P.s. Can't wait to read more fluff!

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lizchand

@lizchand

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Thank you 😛. Your writings as always are a treat. Love them, love them and love them. The cvs are busy trying to give us twists n turns but u are the Saviour of the longing hearts.

Thanx for the pm and keep writing❤️

A fan,

Liz

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WhyAmIHereAgain

@WhyAmIHereAgain

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Anjali...promise me u will treat us with amazng stories every morn... aaah such a treat it was to read this piece first thing in the morn... thank u so much for this... 😳

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KostinsQueen

@KostinsQueen

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#27

First of all Lemme BREATHE

Anjali 🤗

This is so intense, romantic, beautiful, fantastic & what not .

I'm dying to see this Shravan ☺️

I desperately wish this to haopen in the show too .

Okay , our KMH realized that he came in between ShraMan, Good for him .

Anjali , u r such a talented writer , I just love the way you build the story & exactly portraying the feelings of the character.

This forum is blessed to have you , Thanks a lot for writing.

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-Shilpaa-

@-Shilpaa-

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

O M G !!!

Yet another masterpiece..

Needless to say, this one was too good!

And it was not just ShraMan who had a hard time breathing☺️

Why can't our shravan do something like this on the show???

Why can't you be the ghost writer for EDKV? 😉

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Flibbertigibbet

@Flibbertigibbet

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#29

This was mindblowing! Loved every bit! Thanks for thr pm! Your writings keep.me going!

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Ankita

@Fly_high

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#30

As usual beautiful piece of work and Aditya buddy you did walked into already established love story and fell in love with a gift who is already in love with her best friend

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