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astonm

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Posted: 9 years ago

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astonmwritings

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Posted: 9 years ago

Please buddy this account for PMs for EDKV related writings, and not my personal account!

XOXO,

Anjali

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PrincessAshVik

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Posted: 9 years ago

I am really sorry for unresing this so late

I really love how you have written this. I have so many favourite moments, but I feel I will take it away from the story if I talk about them... But I like how you mention that although Shravan gets closer to her to fluster her so she ends up telling him everything, he too gets affected by the proximity.

I Love all these small small moments. You have written them so well!!! Aur yeh Aditya, peechhe hi pad gaya hai. Kitne ishare chahiye bande ko before he finally realises Okay I need to stay away now. Lol!! You should have just shown him walking in on them while they were kissing😉😉😆

Sumo and Shravan's emotions are so well written. Her conflict and his need to know the truth and the attraction all brings this!!! Anjali this was AWESOME!!!

And you had a whole list of ideas penned in someone's post, so please write those😳 (And see how I remember😉)

Congrats on reaching over 20 OS's. I did not even realise that's how many you have written, I keep asking for more😳😆

Thank you for the PM😃😃

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silverleaves

@silverleaves

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Posted: 9 years ago

Loved it! Hope we somehow see something like this on the show soon!

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petrichorr

@petrichorr

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Posted: 9 years ago

OMG! Such a fantastic piece !

am glad I came across it! P

if we even get an iota of what youve so beautifully written, I will be happy!

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Crazypiya

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Posted: 9 years ago

Oh my my
Again a masterpiece
What can i say.. How can I appreciate.. Speechless yaar
U r the King of romantic genre.
Each n every scenes are so so realistic
Plzz do write more n more
A big hug for the pm