I am really sorry for unresing this so lateI really love how you have written this. I have so many favourite moments, but I feel I will take it away from the story if I talk about them... But I like how you mention that although Shravan gets closer to her to fluster her so she ends up telling him everything, he too gets affected by the proximity.
I Love all these small small moments. You have written them so well!!! Aur yeh Aditya, peechhe hi pad gaya hai. Kitne ishare chahiye bande ko before he finally realises Okay I need to stay away now. Lol!! You should have just shown him walking in on them while they were kissing😉😉😆
Sumo and Shravan's emotions are so well written. Her conflict and his need to know the truth and the attraction all brings this!!! Anjali this was AWESOME!!!
And you had a whole list of ideas penned in someone's post, so please write those😳 (And see how I remember😉)
Congrats on reaching over 20 OS's. I did not even realise that's how many you have written, I keep asking for more😳😆
Thank you for the PM😃😃
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