100th episode ka jashn mere OS ke sang!!

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Holla peeps!!! Today is the 100th episode of EDKV. Can you believe we have completed 100 episodes?? Ab is khushi ke mauke ek OS to banta hai boss
Sahibaan kadardaan dil tham ke baithiye pesh hai apke samne The breakup OS of the most romantic couple!! Arey nahi nahi not shraman , romance mila kya dekhne ko abhi ...ni na phir. Its our very famous, sizzling couple Ramini.

Enjoy this story with popcorn , do keep tissue paper near you. Arey bhai breakup OS hai wo bhi itni pyari jodi ka wont you shed tears?? I forgot to tell chappals aur tomatoes bhi sath rakhna, I assure you will need them to throw at me plzz flat ones han...heels gonna hurt a lot and no eggs. I am hardcore vegetarian.
Idea of this OS was Swathi's (pearl100)
Dedicated to our crazy fandom

Enough of my rant. Here you go...


DIL APNA PREET PARAYI




Ramnath was going to his room when he heard someone's sobs. His feet carried him in the direction of the voice. Kamini was sititng in her room shedding tears.

"Kya hua kamini, tum aise ro kyun rahi ho?" He asked getting concerned.

"Wo...wo...Bhaisaab aaj ...aaj Lalaji ne mujhe sabke samne danta." She said between her sobs.

BGM*O Ramji, bada dukh di na
Tere Lakhan ne bada dukh di na


Years have passed but he was still not used to her BHAISAAB.
" Dont worry I'll talk to shyam." He consoled her.

"Huh...Ab Lalaji se kya baat karenge. Jisse karni thi usse to ki nhi. Sara siyapaa to aap ne hi kiya hai bhaisaab"
She nodded and forced a smile.

"Agar mere puttar di zingadi kharab hui to bachega apka ladla shravan bhi nahi"she smirked

She was searching something in the living room when Shravan walked in.
"Kya hua chachi? Kuch dhundh rahi hain aap?" He asked

"Haan...nahi...jane do puttarji." She replied in incoherent sentences.
"Bataiye na chachi shayad main apki kuch help kar saku." He sounded genuine

"Wo main...wo cheque..." shravan was couldnt get her incomplete replies.
"Cheque??...kaisa cheque?"

"Arey wahi jo bhaisaab ne suman ko tumhe chodne ke liye diya tha. Par usne lauta diya." she said and did a happy dance in mind. Her plan was getting successful.
"Cheque...papa...ye sab aap kya keh rhi hain chachi?" He was confused

"Sorry puttarji mujhe kuch jaroori kam yad aa gya. Main chalti hu." She said and left
Leaving behind shravan in deep thoughts.

Ramnath was in his room going through the engagement pics. But his eyes were glued to one pic...kamini's. She looked beautiful in blue saree. He stared at the picture lovingly

Batana bhi nhi ata, chupana bhi nhi ata
Hume tumse mohabbat hai, jatana bhi nhi ata


He came out of trance at shravan's voice.

"Papa..aap sumo se mile they??"he sounded angry
But why was he angry?? What's the matter??

"Shravan aaj achanak suman..." Shravan cut him off
"Papa aaj nahi..I want my answers. Did you offer her a cheque to leave me??" He asked his voice an octave higher.
His tone intimidated Ramnath.
"Who told you about the check? " He asked meekly and wiped sweat formed on his forehead in his airconditioned room.
"That's not the point." Shravan stated.
"Shravan ...please...?" He pleaded
"Chachi."

His mind refused to believe what his ears heard.
"Kamini??How could she do this to him?

"Answer me papa did you or not??" Shravan was in no mood to give up.
"I did" he replied . He had lost the battle.
Shravan stormed out of his room. Ramnath followed him
"Shravan...shravan...kaha ja rhe ho??" He yelled

Shravan turned back gave him a disappointed look
"Apni Sumo ke pas."

Ramnath fell on the couch with a thud. Hot tears rolled down his cheeks

BGM* Sun raha hai na tu, Ro raha hun main*

He wiped his tears and marched towards kamini's room.

"Kamini...kamini..."he yelled
"Arey bhaisaab aapne kyun takleef ki mujhe bula liya hota. Kuch laun apke liye?? Coffee shoffee??" She said in sugar coated voice
"Bahut pee li coffee tumhari ...ab nahi." He said with a pained expression

"Hain???...Mujhse kuch galti hui kya bhaisaab?" She asked acting innocent.
"Tumne shravan ko wo cheque wali baat kyun batayi?? He barked
" Haww bhaisaab main kyun batane lagi bhala? Wo to shravan ne hi mujhe apni baaton me ulajha diya tha." She continued her drama

"Oh come on Kamini!!! You cant fool me with your stupid acts. Try this on Shyam." He didnt want to sound harsh but she was testing his patience.

Kamini now pulled off her mask. She had enough.
"Aap mujhse puch rahe hain maine ye sab kyun kiya? I should ask you the same. Why did you spoil my son's life? You knew I dont like those tiwaris. Still you agreed to the marriage proposal. You sacrificed my son to save yours . I am way better than you I dont like that preeti still gave my consent for pushkar's happiness. But you ...you know how much shravan loves suman. But you keep your ego before your son's life , his happiness. I dont owe you an answer. One more thing I am done with his #MissionShraman'sSeparation." She walked with her head held high. She was enraged by his accusations.

"Kamini...kamini...suno to sahi." He said but she left without a second glance.

BGM* Dil aisa kisi ne mera toda, barbadi ki taraf aisa moda.*

He took his car keys and drove to Berry's Villa. He pressed the doorbell.
Berry waa suprised to see him at this hour.
"Ram...all good??" He asked
"Yeah...I need a drink."

"Bada sannata hai, I'll play some music." Berry said and tuned on the FM

Aaj maine breakup ki party rakh li hai.
Subah se ek botal daru bhi pee li hai


"Berry yar jale pe namak mat chidak...kuch aur baja." Ramnath said.
Berry kept changing the channels.

Jag soona soona lage-2
Koi rahe na jab apna

Berry in turn got a glare from ramnath

Mera dil jis dil le fida hai, wo bewafa hai, wo bewafa hai

Band kar yar chal ek aur drink bna ..is bar thodi strong banana." He said.
Tonight he just wanted to drink away his pain.

So how was it??? Are you scared of Overdose of Priyam?? Well dont be i dont have any is side effects *winks*. Do tell me what you think about this story. If you enjoyed the story do hit the like button and drop your comments. If not to intezar kis bat kya hai ...chappalein sasural thode le jani hain ...phenko ..phenko. plzz ignore the typos

Hope to meet you soon
Till then take care
Enjoy the celebrations
Priyam šŸ˜›

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Res
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Mahi beat me to it!!
Prii kya masst breakup hua hai!!!
Dil khush kar diya!
Ram ka dil hazar tukdon mai toot raha tha and I was having a laugh riot🤣
Sharavan gaya Sumo ke paas, kammo ne Ramu ko BPL diya toh woh gaya Berry ke paasšŸ˜†
Epic!
Thank you for thisšŸ¤—
Edited by orion23 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved it ! You guys are rocking these Ramini one shots 🤣 btw your song selection is on point šŸ‘šŸ¼
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LMAO
LMFAO🤣
Oh man!
I need a minute to recover from this laughing fit!
Priyam you're so genius I don't have words for youšŸ‘šŸ˜†
I never thought I could enjoy a non-ShraMan OS this much!!
The background music, the dialogues! Effing brilliant! šŸ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago
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🤣 oh god very song fit in very situation 🤣
Ye shrman is kam ramini is jada tha but superb h I really enjoy šŸ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago
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🤣 The songs 🤣 Hilarious Priyam. Kaash aisa sachme ho 🤣
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šŸ˜† šŸ˜† Super awesome..
kaash sach main Shravan would have come to know..pata nahi aur kitna wait karna padega humein..
Ramnath can now be a devdas in Kamini's pyaar and listen to break up songs and forget all about Shraman.. šŸ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Priyam di what an OS
Ramini breakup 🤣 kaash aysa sach main ho ...BTW it was fantastic šŸ¤—
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UnRes...🤣 woh red break up line is so hilarious 🤣
Priii šŸ¤—thank you for the OS is was after šŸ˜† Awesome awesome...yaar I'm fida over your sense of humor ...kya gaane chose kiya yaar ...dil garden garden hogaya hain...Loved reading it...was laughing through out the OS 🤣 mere khaleje pe thandak padi hai abb šŸ˜† you rock yaar ā­ļø...mast hai ...keep writing more yaar and keep entertaining us 🤣 Btw the love the pic you have chosen and that red line by God woh line is hilarious yaar 🤣 Thank you soo much for this OS and PM dear...Till then take care.
Edited by pearl100 - 9 years ago
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Priyam...🤣
OMG! This is was simply hilarious! 🤣
Ramnath .. 🤣 And ramini's photo, especially kamini! šŸ˜†
Agar sach mein aisa ho jaye...toh
I mean Ramnath will break for sure when he learns that kamini has been uniting Shraman. But in this manner, will be much better! 🤣 What if the real twist is that Ramnath always had a crush on kamini? šŸ˜†
Phir toh WWIII ho jayega Malhotra house mein. 🤣

Hilarious OS, once again!! 🤣
Edited by Deb_05 - 9 years ago

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