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Posted: 9 years ago
#81
Payal I am big big fan of yours!!
Girl your writing skills are damn amazing !!
I loved loved loved your part.

Unressed my part 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: Ammiey

Im so sorry behna !!!!

Actually my phone broke yesterday night😭😭
And im coming online through my mom's fone
Trust me my phone was much easier to handle
Through this one many typing mistakes occur
But what to do many expences have already arrived this month so my mom told me to wait until this month after that she'll get my fone repaired so its gonna be hectic guyzz for me😭
I was supposed to update my story yesterday night itself but now its a prob so i'll update it tomorrow that too in the afternoon after having lunch after then only i'll be able to join here
Btw priyam dii amazing continuation👏
And sahiba u wrote another awesome piece darling seriously
Aww u were looking for me 😳sorry dear i cant tell u guyz about my prob yesterday nothing is working my phone is not even opening let alone work😭
But i'll try joining the imaginary episode today😊
And behna see many helping hands have arrived now for us im so happy for u ... Oops sorry for us😉😊



Hey! How are u doing?
No problem dear! I'll try to write tonight. Very busy right now 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#83
Hey guyzz here i am !! Im so soo sorry all of u as i wasnt able to continue here earlier actually i was waiting for my story to get updated so!! Yesterday night it finally got updated so!! Here i am back in this beautiful my behna's world of weaving with so many wonderful and amazing writers !!
Ohh gosshh priyam dii what an ending you gave its like the last lines are for me..."soch ameesha kuch soch!!" Lol!
Ok then im starting my train of imaginations...


Continued...




Shravan held her tightly pulling her more close...she looked into his eyes and slowly carressed his cheek with her index fingeer of her right hand while her left one reted on his shoulder. He gently closed his eyes on the sensatiomn of the touch and seeing this she suppressed her silent giggle.

She pressed her lower lip in mischief and slowly moved both her hands back on his chest. Then suddenly feeling dizzy she fell on his chest still standing, unconcious and both her hands hung lifeless from both sides of his encircled arms .

Feeling her body getting heavier a frown of confusion grew between his eyebrows and he slowly opened his eyes looking down at her unconcious body.
His eys wemt wide with horror as if he has seen soke ghosts. He quickly grabbed her body before placing it on the bed. He started gently slapping her cheeks and kept whispering near her ear "sumo? Sumo??!! Sumo aakhe kholo na please!! Sumo!!"

But she dint budge at all !
He went to the washroom to get some water.

As soon as he left she slowly opened her right eye and then the other one too and finding her path clear she slowly put her legs down the bed and tip-toeing went outside the room.

When he returned with the water he found the bed empty and immediately a heavy curiousity took over him 'did she herself go out or somebody took her?' Was the tought coming in his mind. To find the answer he quickly went outside the room putting the glas filled with water on the bedside table.
He looked everywhere ,up, down and in every room except kitchen.

Then he thought 'kitchen!! Yesss!!'
And went straight into the kitchen only to find her arranging the materials came for the Brahmin Bhoj.

"Sumo! Ye kya mazak tha?" He asked a bit irritated
She looked at him and slowly came near him.
"Ye mazak nai tha ..."
"Toh...?" He asked , his voice now softened

She suppressed her chuckle and said
"Vo mera thora aakh band kr k letne ka mann kr rha tha aur tm toih serious hi ho gye!!" And she burst out laughing
"Achha bacchu bari hassi aa rhi hai na?...abhi ruko..." He neared her anmd she knew what was coming...TICKLING!! Again!!
So she ran around the house with shravan behind her laughing and warnimg each other when mamiji came..

"Ye kya ho rha hai?!" She shouted and both of them stood in attension position like some inocent kids and looking down with a sad and scary face "vo...mamiji hum..." Suman tried but mamiji cut her off in the middle
"Suman! Humne tumhe kaam diye hain na? Fir?? Jaa k use kro! Aur shravan beta tum suman ko disturb matt krna !!" She said with a stern voice amd suman yet again suppressed her laughter on watching shravan getting scolded by mamiji

"Smjhe dono?!" She again asked
Both of them innocently nodded shoulder to shoulder.
"Ab khare kya ho jao jaa k apna apna kaam kro!" She insisted again and both looking at each other went different ways...suman to kitchen and shravan out of the tiwari killa
After they were gone mamiji laughed at their scared faces "bacche hain abhi bhi!" She nodded like 'kuch nai ho skta inka'


Ok guyzz to the bharpayi i did this longer one and yeah important note: meri behna (shikha) abhi nani ghar mein hai jahan internet nai kaam kr rha thhik se toh she'll try coming online and commenting on your posts but she'll be fully active from next week when she'll be returning home


Ok now continue ...
Priyam dii as promised im back!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#84
If no one want to continue here??
Sahiba priyam di where are u guyzz ??
If anyone wants to continue plz write further... Mera net k saath prob hai but still lets take this to the end but if no one will do then akele kaise krnge?? Behna b abi nai aa skti i told u guyz
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Posted: 9 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: Ammiey

If no one want to continue here??

Sahiba priyam di where are u guyzz ??
If anyone wants to continue plz write further... Mera net k saath prob hai but still lets take this to the end but if no one will do then akele kaise krnge?? Behna b abi nai aa skti i told u guyz



Hey! I have work for 5 hours now. I'll continue when I return 👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amy superb continuation 👏
Loved it
I'll continue after sahiba 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi guys! I'm sorry I couldn't continue that day as I had promised. First I was very busy and secondly, I was too lazy to imagine anything. 😆 So, here it goes,


Suman sat on Preeti's bed watching her little sister getting ready for haldi. She herself was wearing a beautiful white sari with yellow border to match the color of haldi. A small smile played on her lips seeing Preeti so happy for her marriage. She couldn't help but think about the day when she will be getting ready for her own wedding functions. She remembered all that happened in the past few days. From the time she started avoiding Shravan to yesterday when they both were bickering like before. How did she get this lucky? she wondered. She blushed remembering all the times they kissed, the way he looks at her, and how his touch ignites a fire inside her. She jerked back to reality on hearing Preeti's voice.

"Dii!! Kahan khoye huye ho aap?"

"Haan? Wo kuch nahi Preeti. Main to soch rahi thi tu kitni khush hai. Teri khushi ko kisi ki nazar na lage." she covered up visibly embarrassed.

"Di aap Shravan ke baare mein soch rahe the na?" Preeti teased. Suman's cheeks colored on their own accord. Why am I blushing like an idiot and wo bhi bas uska naam sunke...she thought.

"Nahi main us Qutub Minar ke baare mein kyun sochungi. Vaise bhi wo itna lamba hai ke meri soch mein bhi poora nhi aata." she laughed at her own joke.

"Acha boht hogya jhooth Di. I know you two are dating." Preeti smirked looking at her big sister. Her Suman di knew everything except how to lie.

"Yeh tumse kisne kaha?"

"Pushkar ne, aur kaun batayega."

"Yeh Pushkar ko to main chodungi nhi. Uske pet mein kabhi koi baat nhi tikti."

"Nahi di, wo sangeet waale din jab wo Ramnath uncle ka truth Shravan ko bata raha tha mujhe tabhi pata chal gya tha. Vaise main aap ke liye boht khush hoon di."

"Main bhi boht khush hoon"

"Haan wo to aapke chehre pe dikh rha hai."

"Acha ab chup kar aur chal, haldi ki rasam shuru karni hai" The smile never left her face.

Preeti's haldi ceremony happened smoothly with all the young ones playfully applying color on each other. Suman didn't let anyone color her with haldi even though her maasi insisted that if she does, she will soon find a handsome groom for herself. How could she tell her beloved maasi that she had already found her man, who will definitely become her groom one day.

On the other hand, Malhotras were waiting for the haldi to arrive from Tiwari killa. Shravan couldn't wait to see his Sumo. He had his eyes glued to the main door when she entered, clad in a beautiful white and yellow sari. She looked breathtaking. Suman's eyes also fell on Shravan who was so shamelessly gawking at her. Ramnath didn't miss this and knew he had lost this battle.

"Namaste! Yeh main haldi lekar aayi hoon", Suman ignored Shravan and he pouted like a little kid.

"Acha boht meherbani hai tumhari..mujhe to laga tha tum log bhool gye ho ke Pushkar ko bhi haldi lagegi."

"Nahi chachi aise kaise bhool sakti hoon main apne jeeju ko", Suman said looking at Pushkar who was grinning like a fool.

"Sumo please! Tumhare mooh se itni respect achhi nahi lagti." he laughed..."Aur waise bhi jeeju mat kaho, kyunki ab to main tumhara dewar hoon." he added in a whisper. Sumo being Sumo smacked him on his arm and handed the haldi bowl to Kamini chachi.

Everyone applied haldi to Pushkar including Sumo, who smeared the paste all over his face. After the ceremony, Shravan texted Sumo to come to his room. She sneaked to his room making sure no one saw her. She had been to his room before multiple times, that too in front of his family members but it felt different now. She entered the room to find no one inside when she felt something wet across her cheeks and a hand circled around her waist from behind. Her breath hitched and her heart picked up double pace. She didn't need to guess who it was. He was the only person who could make her feel this way in mere seconds.

"You look beautiful in this sari, Sumo!", his hands caressing her bare waist.

"Shravan, tumne mera saare face pe haldi laga di.", she tried to sound upset but failed miserably.

"Maine to suna hai ke jo unmarried ladke ya ladki par haldi lag jaye, unki bhi jaldi shaadi ho jati hai.", he said now standing in front of her with hands folded in front of his chest.

"Wow! Fir to tumne boht acha kiya Shravan. Ab mujhe jaldi koi ladka mil jayegi jis se main shadi kar paungi.", she said dreamily but failed to notice the change of expression on her boyfriend's face. He held her arm and gently pulled her to him. She looked into his possessive eyes.

"Don't you dare Sumo! Mere saath aisa mazak mat kiya karo.", he pouted. Suman just smiled. She didn't know Shravan could get jealous by no one in particular.

"Acha mujhe maaf kardo Qutub Minar! Vaise iss Sherwani mein to tum Qutub Minar se bhi lambe lag rahe ho...aur boht handsome bhi" she snaked both her arms playfully around his neck.

"Ab main apna face saaf kar ke aati hoon" her face had started to itch due to the paste. She started walking towards the bathroom when Shravan held her hand.

"Dekh to lo tum kitni sundar lag rahi ho..", Suman blushed when his next sentence made her eyes wide.."bilkul madhu makhi ki tarah".."Shravan!!!" He ran inside the closet and she followed him. He had his back against the mirror when he saw her taking slow steps towards him. Shravan always teased her and then faced her wrath but today, Sumo had something else in mind. He closed his eyes feeling her so close. Sumo stood on her toes and slid her left cheek against his, thus smearing the yellow colored paste on his face. She did the same with his other cheek. She stepped back a little and could feel the atmosphere heat up around them. Shravan pinned her against the mirror and closed the gap between themselves.

Suman could feel his one hand caressing her cheek ever so lightly and his other hand was drawing circles on her waist. She had her eyes closed but she knew his face was very close to her's.

"Sumo open your eyes!" She did only to be lost in his deep orbs. Shravan couldn't wait any more and took her lips into his. Suman sighed against his lips and gave him the chance to deepen the kiss. They kissed like never before and broke apart only when they ran out of breath. Shravan didn't stop though. He took some haldi off her face and gently ran his hand on her exposed stomach. She moaned against his chest and her hold on his collar tightened. He wanted to color her in his color. He did the same on her arms and hands. He was about to apply the paste on her neck, but dipped his head there instead. He trailed his lips down her neck. Sumo arched her back giving him all the access. She had started to unbutton his sherwani when her phone rang. They came back to their senses.

"Ji mamiji! Bas aa rahi hoon. Wo khana khane mein der ho gayi." She was facing the mirror. Shravan came and stood behind her. They looked like it was their haldi ceremony.

"I can't wait for the day your family brings haldi for me on our haldi ceremony" He kissed her cheek gently. She just blushed and ran out of his room. He stood their looking at himself in the mirror.


PS: Damn! that got extremely long. I didn't mean to make it that long. This is what happens when you write on Shraman. Your imaginations don't wanna stop 😆

Edited by Sahiba_07 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ohh godd sahiba!!! This was something amazing which makes u wonder what will happen next!!!
👏👏👏
Jab it ended i was like aage?? Kyu khatam hua!! 😭
I totally agree with u on long posts logic same is the case with me
Now!! Priyam dii ur turn as promised!! 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ammiey

Ohh godd sahiba!!! This was something amazing which makes u wonder what will happen next!!!

👏👏👏
Jab it ended i was like aage?? Kyu khatam hua!!😭
I totally agree with u on long posts logic same is the case with me
Now!! Priyam dii ur turn as promised!! 😳



Thanks 😳
Now you guys let your imaginations run wild 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sahiba mindblowing 👏 👏
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