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Posted: 9 years ago
#51
U got 105 marks out of 100!!
5 marks extra for the P word...🀣
Kya yaar seriously??!πŸ˜†
N the morning after the con night,
Sab dekh liya hai???!!!!Naughty shaughty!πŸ˜‰

Anyways,πŸ˜†
hum continue karte hain, tab tak jab tak hamari etc(end of thinking capacity) nahi ho jaatiπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: Nimik

U got 105 marks out of 100!!

5 marks extra for the P word...🀣
Kya yaar seriously??!πŸ˜†
N the morning after the con night,
Sab dekh liya hai???!!!!Naughty shaughty!πŸ˜‰

Anyways,πŸ˜†
hum continue karte hain, tab tak jab tak hamari etc(end of thinking capacity) nahi ho jaatiπŸ˜ƒ



Omg i'm so honoured gurudevi!!! My teacher gave me extra marks yippie!!! πŸ₯³
Luv u behna!!!
Hehe I was thinking hard what to add to make it hatke but could come up with this only πŸ˜›
Though I know its a bit common 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53
Its lovely behna!!πŸ€—
I want u to write one more part plzz
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: Nimik

Its lovely behna!!πŸ€—

I want u to write one more part plzz



Aye aye captain!! πŸ˜‰
But first i'm going to update chapter 3 of my ss after that i'll write one more part of this 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: sabk

Can I write too? 😳



Yeah dear you're so very welcome!!
As its shikha's (nimik's) post but since she's my behna I can also say this
Plzz do write it'll get a bit horing if only two people write again n again as they will get tired!! πŸ˜†
Plzz ...u write then i'll do 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: Ammiey



Yeah dear you're so very welcome!!
As its shikha's (nimik's) post but since she's my behna I can also say this
Plzz do write it'll get a bit horing if only two people write again n again as they will get tired!! πŸ˜†
Plzz ...u write then i'll do 😳



Thanks πŸ˜›
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
Ramnath was tensed to see them behave so normally. He was seething in anger and was ready to confront Sumo when Kamini came to discuss something with him regarding the wedding.
Ramnath in his mind..,"I will talk to Suman in the evening but Kamini is more important at this moment" πŸ˜†
They both leave for his room to talk.
On the other hand, Pushkar who was crossing the hall saw his bhayia and Sumo talking freely after ages. He was so happy to see his bhayia and Sumo happy after so long.

Pushkar: "Bhayia mujhe mehndi me jana allowed nahin hai aur aap wahan enjoy kar rhe ho".. making puppy face
Shravan: (laughing)..,"Chote ab tu to dulha hai, par mai to Sumo ki help kar sakta hoon na kyuki uske haathon me bhi mehndi lagi hai. Tu bhi chup chup ke Preeti ki help kar lena"
They both laugh

Shravan entered the kitchen to see a beautiful sight in front of him. Suman was trying to pick up a glass of water using her arms and her hair would'nt stop bothering her. He took a step towards her and stood right behind her.

Shravan: (whispering in her ear from behind) "Need some help?"
Suman was startled and was about to drop the glass but a hand caught it before it could leave her arms. Her heart started beating faster than it usually did. He slowly turned her around and made her drink the water while holding her hair back in place. He himself took a sip from the same glass and put it aside.

"Koi paani peete hue itna khoobsurat kaise lag skta hai?", Shravan exclaimed admiring her beauty.
Sumo blushed and her eyes landed on the drop of water that was lingering on his lower lip.
"Tumse zyada nahi", and with that she stood on her heels and licked that drop away followed by her capturing his lips in the first ever kiss that was initiated by her. Shravan couldn't be happier than that. It was a short kiss. They couldn't stop staring at each other.

Shravan: "Damn girl, tum mujhe hamesha aise hi suprise karti rehna"
Sumo: "Itne bade bade sapne mat dekho (smirking) yeh to bas tumhari help ke badle mein chhota sa inaam tha"
Shravan: "Acha to tum kab meri koi help karogi so that mein tumhe is se bhi bada inaam de paaun" (in the most husky voice ever)
Sumo blushed hard understanding the meaning of his words which made him chuckle
Sumo: "Shut up lambu! Aur ab mujhe jane do. Preeti mera wait kar rhi hogi"
Shravan: "Ok jao maine kab roka hai but meri help jaldi karna"
Suman left after stomping on his foot and he laughed.
πŸ˜†


PS: This is my first time writing anything so sorry if it wasn't up to the mark 😳
Edited by Sahiba_07 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58
Amazingg!!! πŸ‘
Seriouslyy this??? And first time??? Yaar tu toh!!!! What can I say!!!
For being the first timer I must say its beyond the mark!! πŸ‘ πŸ‘
I mean reallyy its was so so mindblowing u write too well dear just join us here !! N plzz do write more not only here I would like to read your stories as well!! 😳
Seriouslyy u write just perfect for being first time!! I mean i'm still amazed ...tell me really it was your first time ..?? I doubt πŸ˜† 😳
It was beautiful
And that Ramnath scene !!! Ohh god hillarious !! "Suman se baat krni hai par kamini zada important hai!!" 🀣
I really enjoyed it a lott!! If u want u can write one more part as i'll be writing after I update my story so till then anyone can write...so u're free to write one more part
Btw what's your name? 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: Ammiey

Amazingg!!! πŸ‘
Seriouslyy this??? And first time??? Yaar tu toh!!!! What can I say!!!
For being the first timer I must say its beyond the mark!! πŸ‘ πŸ‘
I mean reallyy its was so so mindblowing u write too well dear just join us here !! N plzz do write more not only here I would like to read your stories as well!! 😳
Seriouslyy u write just perfect for being first time!! I mean i'm still amazed ...tell me really it was your first time ..?? I doubt πŸ˜† 😳
It was beautiful
And that Ramnath scene !!! Ohh god hillarious !! "Suman se baat krni hai par kamini zada important hai!!" 🀣
I really enjoyed it a lott!! If u want u can write one more part as i'll be writing after I update my story so till then anyone can write...so u're free to write one more part
Btw what's your name? 😊



Oh thank you so much dear!! πŸ˜› This means a lot to me. So many praises 😲 πŸ˜† Honestly, this is the first time I've ever written any story and such feedback is great to see. 😳 I will try to write in the morning as its 3:15 am at my place and I'm still awake πŸ˜• πŸ˜† Thanks again πŸ€—

My name is Sahib btw πŸ˜›
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: sabk



Oh thank you so much dear!! πŸ˜› This means a lot to me. So many praises 😲 πŸ˜† Honestly, this is the first time I've ever written any story and such feedback is great to see. 😳 I will try to write in the morning as its 3:15 am at my place and I'm still awake πŸ˜• πŸ˜† Thanks again πŸ€—

My name is Sahib btw πŸ˜›



Ohh hey sahib pleasure meeting u i'm Ameesha 😳
Its 3:15 am??? πŸ˜› where do u live?
Here in India its 1 pm right now 😊
Just go to sleep dear or else tabiyat kharaab ho jayega sound sleep is necessary !! Dont play with your health 😳
Its alright write in the morning or i'll write after updating my story!!
And!! You're worthy of the praises which I gave it was actually amazingg believe me!! πŸ‘

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