' KISSED ' A SHRAMAN OS - 100 EPISODES CELEBRATION - Page 6

Originally posted by: pinky.padda

amazing
absolutely loved it
kiss was mind blowing
superb

Originally posted by: sheeluneelu

That was lovely os loved it

Thanks for d pm darling 🤗

Celebration time 🥳

Can't write long comment in office but truly it's great

Originally posted by: Zenab78

Awww I found it cute 😛
" sarson ka khet lagri ho" that dialogue cracked me up 😆
And then kiss that was it was hot
I was thinking about Ramnath reaction 🤣
And others were also good but Ramnath bechara armano par pani pher diya shravu ne
Than last part his explanation for kissing sumo 🤣 Papa ka aashirwaad thn haath aur muh 😆
It was fab OS mind blowing Zoya Api 🤗

Originally posted by: Anapneo3003

Awesome one🤣

well written zoya

lovedd d kiss part and aftermath of the kiss🤣

everyones reactions perfectly written😆

can imagine ramnaths face😆

lovedd ittt😊

Originally posted by: Shree06

Zoya

It was something too good

unbelievable Shravan you have mentioned here, If it happened na ti I will die man wow 👏

Superb
Specially this paragraph is like OMG!!!!!!!!!!! 😳☺️

"People, Sorry for scandalizing you guys. Aj kal ki generation" He said tried to lighten the mood. "Papa ko pata hai iss baare mai, unhon ne apna aashirwaad de diya hai. I mean kiss ke liye ashirvad nahi, hehe, humare rishte ke liye ashirawad. Kiss mai sirf mera haath tha, I mean muh tha. Actually Sumo aur mera dono ka muh tha. I don't think we should talk about this any further." Ramnath knew all was lost. Pushkar was delighted. Mammiji was gaining consciousness with the change of tide.

Zoya you don't know what you have done sweety, love you for this

Big hug yaarrr 🤗

Originally posted by: Deb_05

Lovely OS, zoya!! 👏

I really wish that shraman at least come back to talking terms like this. I can't see them fighting constantly. And after, if such a scenario takes place like written in this OS, then Ramnath. ..🤣. He will go into the "shock" mode that Shravan went into after hearing his father's plane crash news. 😆 When I was reading the whole interaction between Shraman, I was like OMG where is ramu? He has to see all this. And of course, he shows up. But not like a creep this time.😆 Such a hilarious and beautiful piece!! 👏

Originally posted by: Eeshaal

First of all so sorry zoya Been so busy that not being active that's y missed such beautiful thread , bravo what an OS , amazing writing 👏 , it was simple , cute and took me to Shraman land , the kiss hotness to the max 😳 . Write more

Originally posted by: mannu100

Omg omg

Thiis just jhakash bindadh and rapchik
.zoya standing ocation

Oh god writers ko yeh aab ideas kyun nahin atey

That old aunty fain ing

And kiss me hum Dono ka hath i mean muh cracjed me up.

Oh gid wish cbs could think in that way.

Originally posted by: mineforever

Zoya!!!
It was super awesome!! 😊
I had so much fun reading it.. 😳
Now this is called a passionate,sensual kiss..😉
Kash yeh sach main ho jaaye..mazaa aa jayega or Ramnath ko shayad heart attack aa jayega.. 😆

Originally posted by: ramya06

Woah! What a piece zoya!
Sumo looking like sarson ka khet in yellow and shravan as always like khamba! 🤣
Shravan ka workload badhing because he'll be sued for abusing and attempting to kill those who dared to look at sumo! 😳😆
OMG, that warning and the kiss, vo bhi sabke samne! ☺️ Sabke samne announcing marriage! 😳 ❤️ Bechare ramu ka face dekhne layak hoga! 😆 😛
Zoya you are a really good writer! 👏 Tussi kamal ho! 😆 🤗