Shraman SS-Marriage Tales *Chapter6 and VM UPDATED 7-8-17* - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
#61
really loved it 😳
awesome
khushi and pushkar partners
and *bas 5 days* and it will be long for both of them naa
and thnks fr d pm dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62
amazing...luv sharman ❤️ khushi-pushkar
update next part soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
#63
Aaah! I am so in love with this married Shraman and Khushi is undoubtedly the star of the SS. Eagerly waiting for the next part. And Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64
This was so cute
A big hug to you for this
I am loving this khushi -pushkar bond
So continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65
It's really awesome! 👏 loved the cute shravan ❤️😆and khushi too😊 penned down beautifully 😊wanted to read more and more 😛please continue soon😭 will wait..
Achaa do u send pms?
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66
Hey, Mitali.
This was such a cute update.
Loved how Sumo got jealous!
And just like everyone of us does, I love Shravan too! :')
Khushi is so cute and Pushkar and her are like a small adorable naughty gang.
All chachu's and mamu's are in actual so cute with their nephew's and neice's!'
All the best for your UT's, girl. Killl it!
Love,
Palak.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
so sweet and cute update..
aborable shraman..
ahh khashi and pushkar partner in crime..
beautiful..
thanks for pm dear..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#68
Please Continue soon! its so sweet! i wanna read more!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey!So I was originally planning to update my Karva Chauth TS but then I was in a mood to write something cute and hence I wrote Marriage Tales.Some of you have been longing for this one so here it is for you all.WARNING:It gets a biiit cheesy at some point so be aware 😉.
No Proof Read.


Chapter 3

5 days finally passed,ofcourse with some 'I Love You' and lots of 'I Miss You'.

The marriage week had finally begun and it was the morning of the engagement and the Tiwari's were busy wrapping gifts for shagun while Sumo was busy running behind Khushi to feed her breakfast.

"Khushiii stop running,pehle breakfast khatam karo!"

"No!Mumma you know na mujhe poha pasand nahi hai."

"Dekho aapko roz nutella sandwich toh nahi milega and waise bhi aaj aap evening mein tasty tasty dishes milne waali hai."

"NOOO" Khushi giggled hard and ran away,leaving a highly tiered and pissed Suman behind her.

"KHUSHI" Suman shouted,voice full of anger making Khushi to stop at her spot,all nervous.

She knew it was time her mother turned Sumo from Suman.

"Who dared to shout at my princess?" Shravan called out entering Tiwari Killa.

"Papa"Khushi slyly pointed at her mother who stood glaring at Shravan,she knew it was now her father would get a proper dose of her Sumo mother.After all Mom are always right, specially when it was her mother.

Shravan blinked his eyes indicating Khushi that she would deal with Suman while she shall stay mum.

"Sumo"Shravan pulled of a puppy face as he walked towards her.But Suman just kept glaring.

"Yaar yeh gussa ab chodo bhi dekho Khushi ke papa aye hai"Shravan said in a typical old fashion tone.

All this while Khushi kept looking at her parents and kept smiling.She knew how much her father loved her mother,how much her mother loved her father and ofcourse how scared was her father of her mother and she undoubtedly enjoyed that.

"Chalo agar Khushi ko poha nahi khaana toh uske papa he kha lenge after all I have heard ke Khushi ke mom ke haathon mein jadoo hai.Like she is MAGIC!"

Shravan could see Suman smiling.BANG and he had hit the spot,now he had to just proceed a bit further and get his Bindaas Sumo activated.

"And I guess I am just more than just willing to have myself under her magical spell"Shravan smirked.

Suman's anger now seemed to have vanished and blush accompanied with a heartfelt smiled on her face.

"Tum bhi na Shravan"Saying so Suman lightly hit Shravan on the chest and hugged him.

"I missed you"She whispered.

"I missed you too"Shravan whispered kissing on top of her head.

"Chalo princess,now no more of irritating your mother.Aaj Khushi aur papa milke breakfast karenge"

"Yayayaa" Khushi laughed and ran into Shravan's lap,kissing him on the cheek .

Suman served poha two both and sat in front of them.The sight in front of her sent some kind of warmth inside her.Khushi sat on Shravan's lap while Shravan fed her and at times Khushi did the same,laughing and teasing each other along all the time.

"Areey Sharvan beta tum?Kab aye?" Mami asked as she entered the Tiwari Killa along with Mausi,bags in her hands.

"Mamji,Mausi aap!"Shravab got up,placing Khushi on the floor.

"Khush raho"Both Mami and Mausi said as Shravan touched their feet.

"Voh actually kya hai na mein yahan Sumo aur Khushi ko lene aya tha"

"Shravan"Sumo glared at him.

"Voh kya hai na Chachi ne bola tha ke koi rasam hai jisme Khushi ke zarrorat hai,toh miene socha ke mein Sumo ko bhi saath mein le jaata hoon."

"Shravan meine kaha tha na ke mere yahan zaroorat hai."Sumo signaled him to drop this topic.

"Areyy Suman,agar Sharvan itta keh raha hai toh chali jaa na"Mamiji said.

"Par mamiji..Preeti?Usko ready bhi toh karna thana."

"Areey uskeliye toh abhi time hai.Dekh Sharvan itta bol raha hai toh tuu chale ja,sham ko wapas aajana.Theek hai."Mamiji explained.

"Theek Hai"

Shravan smiled at his victory and thanked Mamiji for the help.

"Chaloo Khushi pack your bags,aap,mumma aur mein ghar chal rahe hai"Shravan said and Khushi ran into the room to get her essentials.

Now Shravan and Suman were left alone in dinning area of the Tiwari Killa.As Suman started walking towards the kitchen,Shravan pulled her hard towards him and she landed up banging on his chest with his hand tightly clutching her waist.

"Shravan koi dekh lega,chodo mujhe"

"Shhh"

"Shravan Please!"

"I Love You"

"I Hate You"


Your comments and views are highly valuable.Also this time I promise that I would reply to all your comments.


Thank You.

-Mitali❤️



Edited by SleepyPsycho - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#70
😳 Super Cute !! was feeling dry whole day without some shraMan. thanks for bringing this today !
Shravan Sumo are intense as always, of course Shravan and HIS daughter are adorable. but could also feel the other special special bonds. Since shrav is a part of tiwari killa from childhood, how delightful it is to see his relationship with mami ji, mausi and all. Even after wedding, after parenthood, he is still the little boy who played around that house. That is very special thing about this story line and you wrote that as well.

Shravan fear sumo, and khushi enjoying it. ha ha ha Please write more. Waiting for all your updates !!

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