Shraman SS-Marriage Tales *Chapter6 and VM UPDATED 7-8-17* - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: nith125

Beautiful ! Khushi is really cute !

Thank You!
Yes she is.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: singh_palak

Hi, Mitali!

This whole scene that you wrote was so cute!
And she calls him lambu! Haha, i loved that!
Currently, the show is getting on such a tension filled track, amidst all that, this write up was just adorable!
And the maternity shooot, I could imagine how they'd have clicked and it was 'aww' worthy.
All in all, mast tha!
P.S. Ek question hai, yeh sleepy psycho username kahan se socha baba. Why did you get this username? *just curious*


Thank You soon much :))
This username is given by Samridhi(AyeChavanni) to me. I wanted something related to sleep cause I am one sleppy head whom sleeps like a psychopath so I asked her something like this and she gave it :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: pinky.padda

wow
totally amazing story
truly brilliant
cannot wait to read more
continue soon
please


Thank You soon much :))
Will update today probably.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: Tulip.

Unres. So I m now officially a fan of your writing. You are fabulous girl. Loved it. Jldi update krna. 🤗

Reshma🤗
You are the sweetest!
Thank You soo much.
Will update today.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
really loved it
KHUSHI carbon copy of suman and her nature is like shravan
awesome
plzzz update sooon
and do pm me dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
So as promised update is here.Since my laptop is going on repair tomorrow and I was not in a state to write all day,I update my story at this odd hour.Thank You for all the appreciation.Keeps me going.
This chapter is going to be long.Now the next updates will be coming next week since my UTs start today.Hope you have a good time reading it.
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Chapter 2
Malhotra Mansion

"Sumoo shut the damn alarm clock" Shravan screamed sleepily and turned the other covering his ears with the pillow

But the alarm didn't go off and it kept ringing. Irritating him.

"Sumoo tuu.." And he was cut by himself when he realised that the other side of his bed was empty,Sumo was at her home.

'Ek raat tumhaare bina nahi reh jaara pata nahi poore 2 weeks kaise paas honge' Shravan thought to himself,switching of the alarm and heading towards the bathroom

"Sumooo towel" Shravan shouted only to be hit by himself,realising once again that she had gone for 2 weeks.

'Its going to be a tough time'he thought,grabbed an apple and left for his case


Tiwari Killa

"Mummaa..Mumma uthoo" Khushi yelled sitting on Sumo trying to wake her up

"Mmm Shravan sone do naa" Suman mummered in her sleep and tossed away dropping Khushi on the bed.

Khushi giggled. She had always seen how Shravan had a tough time waking her mother up but she noticed one particular thing too and that was how when instantly her father kissed and rubbed his stubble her mother,
she used to wake up.
Keeping it in mind,Khushi again climbed on Sumo,leaned in and kissed her on the cheek proceeded by the rubbing of her cheek on Sumo.

Sumo felt something was different.Today the kiss was softer,didn't linger around longer and strangely his stuble did not prick her at all rather it was soft.
She thought she heard a soft giggle and opened her eyes only to see an over happy Khushi sitting on her and laughing away.

"Accha toh Khushi apni mom ko tease karne ke mood mein hain?" Sumo sat up taking Khushi in her lap
"Haan" Khushi nodded trying to hide her self inside Sumo's night wear

"Achaa chalo baby aap side mein utro, mumma ko tayar hone jaana hai. Aaj toh aap mumma see pehle ready hogaye na"Suman said taking of Khushi from her lap and placing her on the bed

" Mumma aap ek cheez bhool gay" Khushi called out running behind Suman who was headed towards the bathroom

"Haan bachha kya?" Sumo asked

Khushi opened up her harms,asking Suman to take her in her arms.Suman did so

"Yeh" Khushi kissed Sumo on her nose and wished her Good Morning
Suman smiled.
"Mere kiss?" Khushui asked pointing her finger towards her nose
"Yeh lo" Suman said and kissed Khushi on the nose
"Ab mumma jaye nahane?Agar mein late ho gayi toh apka favorite nutella sandwich kon banayega?"Sumo said

"Nutella Sandwich,YIPEEE! Toh aap yahan par kyun khade ho?Jaldi jaoo" Khushi said and lept out from Suman's hold
"Nautanki"Sumo nodded her head smiling away

In the kitchen
"Preeta accha hua too idhar agayi,shaadi aur Khushi ke chaakar mein PCT aana he nahi hua" Sumo said seeing the bills of PCT
"Areyy Sumo tuu shaadi enjoy kar,hum hai na kaam sambhalne ke liye"Preeta said

*Tring*
*Tring*

It was Pushkar's call.
"Haan bol Pushkar kya kaam tha? Preeti ko bolaoon?"Suman smiled
"Areyy Sumo...I mean Bhabhi nahi,muje aapse kaam tha"Pushkar said
"Haan bol"
"Aaj mera aur voh bhaiyaa ka case tha..voh Mr.Paul wala,voh hum jeet gaye"
"Areeyy wah.That's good."
"Toh mein chaha raha ke khaane mein kuch special bhej dee"
"Theeke par tere bhaiyaa ko mat batana.Okay?"
"Haan BHABHI"
"Good"
"Achaa suno Khushi see baat karvana"

"KHUSHIII KITCHEN MEIN AYO,CHACU KA PHONE HAI AAPKE LIYE" Sumo called out for Khushi who was watching her favorite cartoon on TV

Khushi ran inside the kitchen and snatched away the phone from Sumo's hand. She absolutely loved her chachu.

"Hii Chachu"
"Hi Partner. Mazze aa rahe hain vahan par? Aap toh mujhe miss he nahi karte"
"Nahi nahi Chachu, mujhe yaad aa rahi hai hai apki,voh toh mumma phone nahi karne dete" Khushi smiled and looked upto her mother only to receive a shocked face of Sumo
"Mumma toh hai he aise. Achha aap mera ek kaam karoge?"Pushkar said
"Haan"
"Aapki Mumma na apke papa ke liye kuch bana rahi hai,toh aap check karo ke voh kya bana rahi hai aur phir papa ko bata dena Okay?"
"Okay Chachu"
"That's my partner."
"Bye"
"Bye"

Khushi hid herself behind the kitchen door and listened to her mother talking to Preeta aunty.

"Preeta mein Shravan ke liye sev ke sabji aur moong daal ka halwa bana rahai hoon,too roti bana dee,aur haan patli aur choti banana"Suman said preparing the sabji on one stove and halwa on another
"Sumoo merese roti nahi ban payege jaise to chahati hai,too kyun nahi bana lete"
"Dekh Preeta agar meine roti banaye toh Shravan jaan jayega ke khana meine banaya hai and I don't want that.Ab chal tu chup chaap kaam kar"

And with that they began preparing the food

"Mumma mujhe aapka phone chaiye,dress up wala game khelna hai" Khushi said climbing onto the stool beside Sumo
"Yeh loo,khelna par kuch buy mut karna okay? Suman said picking up Khushi and putting her down on the floor carefully
"Thank You mommaaa" Khushi yelled running out of the kitchen

*tring*
*tring*

Shravan smiled seeing Sumo's name flash on his screen.'Door nahi reh sakti,bada natak karti hai'He thought to himself

"Haan bolo" Shravan said
"Papaaa"
"Princess app? Kya hua?
"Voh papa mujhe aapo kuch batana hai"
"Haan bolo"
"Voh momma hai naa apke liye kitchen mein kuch speciall bana rahi hai kitchen mein aur unhene Preeta aunty ko batane ke liya mana kiya hai"
"Achha.Toh aapne lunch kar liya"?
"Nahi par meine breakfast mein nutella sandwitch khaye thee toh meko bhook nahi hai""Achha papa mein phone rakhti hoon nahi toh momma dategi"
"Bye princess,take care,love you"
"Love you too papa"


Good amount of time had passed by. 'Abhi tak toh usne khana kha liya hoga'Sumo thought to herself and called Shravan's number

Shravan on the other side let it ring for sometime.
Finally after plenty of rings he picked it up.

"Shravan kabsee phone kar rahi hoon!Uthaaya kyun nahi?"Sumo shouted
"Aree voh Mr.Paul ka case jeet gaye toh unhone chote see party dee the office mein toh vahan busy tha,phone cabin mein reh gaya tha"
"Achhaa usko chodo,tumne lunch kar liya?"
"Voh actually Sumo baat kya hai na, Mr.Paul ke secretary Miss.Dutta oops Nikita bade pyaar see cheez cake banake layi thee mere liya and you know na how much I love them" Shravan smirked,enjoying teasing Sumo
Sumo could feel jealousy creep into her
"Aur voh tiffin jo PCT see aya tha?"
"Voh meine Mr.Paul and Nikitaaa ko de diya" Shravan said stressing on the word Nikita
"Mein tumhe maar doongi.I hate you.Ek toh itte pyaar see meine tumhare liye tumhare favorite cheeze banayi aur tumne voh na khakar NIKITA ko dedi.BYE!"Suman was angry and on the verge of crying
"Areeyy Jaan,I am just joking.Khushi kaa call aya tha usne bataya ke you cooked for me so meine kal ke phone call ka revenge lene ke liye yeh kiya,Khana toh meine tumhara he khaya hai,no cheesecake"
"Khushi? Usne kab call kiya? Achha toh isleye voh phone leke bhaagi thee zaroor Pushkar ka plan hoga.After all they are partners in every crime"
"Areyy bache hai dono. Achha voh chodo,I smell some jealousy here accompanied with some I miss you too"
Suman's face flushed
"Sorry Shravan kal ke liye,voh meine socha ke agar tum see aise baat karoge toh tum call nahi karoge and fir mujhe yaad nahi ayege tumhari,but iska opposite hua"
"Toh ghar aajao naa,vaise bhi bhabhi ke zaroorat hai shaadi mein"
"Nahi Shravan more than that mere Tiwari Killa mein zaroorat hai,I am the only sister to Preeti na"
"Toh mein udhar aa jata hoon"
"Nahi.Tum Pushkar ke bhai ho and you need to stay there"
"Sigh!! I miss you Sumo"
"Mee too"
"I Love You"
"I Love You Too"
"Bas 5 days"
"Bas 5 days"

Do leave your likes and comments.
Thank You.

-Mitali❤️
Edited by SleepyPsycho - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
Psycho 🤗
Adorbs!
This keeps getting better and better👏
Shravan bechara, lagta hai saans kam leta hai, Sumo ka naam zyada😆
So damn cute❤️
Khushi and pushkar partners in crime! Gosh I love them!!! 🥳
Shravan calls her jaan ☺️ so hot!
Only 5 days!
Sigh!
Can't wait for the next part Mittu!

All the very best for your UTs.. nail it🤗
Edited by orion23 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
Mittu 🤗
Shraman are so adorable 😳 ...hard for them to stay away from each other
Khushi...my munchkin ❤️ . She is way too cute.
I wish she was for real and i cud keep her for myself 😳
I just love her ❤️
Khushi and pushku partners 😃
She cooked for him moong daal 😕 ka halwa...gawd i hate the word daal
Ohh u used nikki's name here 😆 ...he was jalaofying her using nikita's name 😆
Thank u for a long and lovely update 😃
M loving this story!!!!!
Thanks for the pm bachcha 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
Aww.. ShraMan are so cute!! I love them and Khushi!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
Lovely update mittu
This trio is just adorable.
Fanx 4 pm dr

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