Shraman SS-Marriage Tales *Chapter6 and VM UPDATED 7-8-17* - Page 13

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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi Mittu..
Sorry, for such late reply..
Aww!! this one, my favourite!! Such a lovely, cute, romantic, light hearted FF is it! It makes me "AWW" after each single lines.. 😳

haha.. "Suman se Sumo mood" & "Jooru ka Gulam" 🤣 🤣 your comic timing are too much perfect..

Haww!! Then the Bold Sumo!! Hawtt!! 😉 & Shravan was nervous & blushing!!huh!! Damn!! 😆😳 It's just outta world!!
Why this wasn't happened in the show!! I wanna see Shravu's face in real.. 😆🤣🤣
Sumo, our hero & shravu heroine. 🤣

love the total part a core..
& I seriously want #EDKV2, though it's now next to impossible but still I just want to see aall these cute romantic family moments.

waiting for the next one to be updated.oh, yaa.. how can I forgot to tell you tht how cute the cover pic is!! 😃 & also thanks for updating all in whttpad..
. Keep enjoying your holidays & in between treat us with your brilliant lovely writing skills..

with love
Poulami :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
Superb update Mittu
Khushi is so cute
Joru ka ghulam 😆
Suman in sumo mode and then her boldness it was hot
Lovely Shramanlicious update

Lots of love
Zainab
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thank You :)
SleepyPsycho thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Poulami11

Hi Mittu..

Sorry, for such late reply..
Aww!! this one, my favourite!! Such a lovely, cute, romantic, light hearted FF is it! It makes me "AWW" after each single lines.. 😳

HEY! Its okay.I am glad you like this no drama only smooth going FF and I am gald it makes you smile :)

haha.. "Suman se Sumo mood" & "Jooru ka Gulam" 🤣 🤣 your comic timing are too much perfect..

First one to tell me that but thank you :)

Haww!! Then the Bold Sumo!! Hawtt!! 😉 & Shravan was nervous & blushing!!huh!! Damn!! 😆😳 It's just outta world!!
Why this wasn't happened in the show!! I wanna see Shravu's face in real.. 😆🤣🤣
Sumo, our hero & shravu heroine. 🤣

IKR! I always wanted something like this but alas :(

love the total part a core..
& I seriously want #EDKV2, though it's now next to impossible but still I just want to see aall these cute romantic family moments.

Thank You :)

waiting for the next one to be updated.oh, yaa.. how can I forgot to tell you tht how cute the cover pic is!! 😃 & also thanks for updating all in whttpad..
. Keep enjoying your holidays & in between treat us with your brilliant lovely writing skills..

Cover picture credit goes to Kiran(hope you know her),she is such a brilliant editor. I will enjoy my holidays and write.Thank You once again :)

with love
Poulami :)

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Zenab78

Superb update Mittu
Khushi is so cute
Joru ka ghulam 😆
Suman in sumo mode and then her boldness it was hot
Lovely Shramanlicious update

Lots of love
Zainab

Thank You :)
Hhahaha Glad you liked it.
Lots of love back at you.
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Posted: 8 years ago
What u wrote Mitali. This is incredible !! 🤗 this is such beautiful piece. Shravan is a such a baby, he is smaller than Khushi. But can't leave Sumo, his love is so pure for his love of his life.
Waiting next chap.

Every episode one function can't wait for too long. 🥳

Vinu


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: vimikrao

What u wrote Mitali. This is incredible !! 🤗 this is such beautiful piece. Shravan is a such a baby, he is smaller than Khushi. But can't leave Sumo, his love is so pure for his love of his life.

Waiting next chap.

Every episode one function can't wait for too long. 🥳

Vinu


Awww Thank You :)
Aren't all men small child at one point? ;)
Will update soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Very nice dear 👏
Hotty Mr Malhotra and sexy Mrs Malhotra 😉..
Tempreture badh gaya 😉
Update soon


Love
Shrujani
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Posted: 8 years ago
Chapter 5

"Bhaiyaa,bhabhi?" Pushkar asked,they all were ready and were to leave for the venue of the engagement soon.

"Pushkar,Sumo Tiwari Killa gayi hai,Preeti ko tayar karke saath he ayege"Shravan answered.

"Papa I am tiered sitting here,hum Mausi ko lene kab jayege?"Khushi asked innocently as she munched on her favorite snack.


"Bas beta apki dadi and choti dadi aajaye,then lets get go your mausi and mumaa"smiled Shravan.

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The guest started pouring in,congratulating Pushkar who sat waiting for her soon-to-be bride to arrive.Shravan on the other side sat sulking as Suman had not arrived and despite numerous requests to her to send pictures of her look,he had only received smirks and hearts.

Soon it was announced that the bride along with her family had arrived and Pushkar had sprinted across for their grand entry together.

Fancy fire lit up the ground from both sides, colorful and bright fireworks adorning the black and dark sky and the sweet soft tunes of the 'Rabtaa' song filled the air as Preeti and Pushkar made their way to the stage,hands intertwined with the Tiwari family behind them.

Shravan moved left and right to catch a glimpse of Suman but was finally successful when Khushi had called out to Suman and she had waved back.There was his lady clad in the heaviest and probably the most beautiful saaree he had ever seen in her.The blouse that reached a few inches below her breast had flowery pattern on it with a glittery border on its neck and hand sleeves.The saree was of net material,a pastel pink color that showed her abdomen, highlighting hthe curves she had gained in the gym.Her hair tied up in a bun,white flowers outlining it.

Shravan was brought back to reality when Suman had held on to his hand,dragging him to the stage with her to seat Pushkar and Preeti comfortably.

"Vanilla"Shravan soke huskily and his hand now made its way up her spine slowly.

"Dior Sauvage" Suman returned with the same husky voice lightly grabbing his ass.

"Sumaaan"


"What?And you thought only you could be naughty." Suman laughed at her her husband,who was probably thinking what his wife would do next.

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The engagement ceremony began and respective sides from the groom and bride family finished their duty.Once the ring ceremony began,Shravan lightly held Suman's hand in his,creasing her ring finger ending the little gesture by kissing on the ring that proudly sat on her finger, indicating that she ruled someone's heart.Suman smiled seeing this and remembered the act he had pulled at their engagement.

** Shravan and Suman had now made each other wear their rings and when Suman was descending down the stairs,she had felt a hard pull and next thing she knew was that Shravan was on his knees,her hand in his and his lips on the ring proceeded by a forehead kiss.**


She still remembered how this simple kiss had earned few hearings from the elders ad thanked herself that it wasn't the usual passionate kiss he would give her now and then.

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The sangeet began and everyone including the kids and Nanji grooved on their respective songs.

Khushi,Vedika,Vedant(Vandy and Varun's daughter and son) and Daboo had performed a ganesh vandana proceeded by a medley on Nach Dene Saare,Prem Ratan Dhan Payo and Cham Cham.

Nirmala-Raamnath and Kaamini-Lalaji danced on Dil Cheez Dedi.

The whole Tiwari family then gave a performance on Mahi Ve,expressing the love they had for Preeti.

Suman and Shravan swayed to Jag ghoomiya,stealing their own moments followed by the song Zaalima and ending by grooving on Humma.Suman smiled recalling how few years back,during Anuj's sangeet she had been pregnant with Khushi for 7 months and Shravan had held on to her and her swollen belly protectively and they had given one of the best performance dancing on their own tunes.


The sangeet ended with a romantic piece by the bride and groom,followed by joint performance by the Malhotras and Tiwaris.

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"Hahhahaaahha Adi you are so funny.School ke din yaad dila diye.Hahhaaa" Suman laughed, oblivious to the man behind her who was burning even during one of the coldest months in Delhi.

"Kya yaar Suman,Mrs banne ke baad see toh tum mujhe bhool he gaye.Mr.Malhotra ne aisa kya jaado kardiya joh mein na kar paya"Aditya joked.

"Kuch bhi Adi"

Shravan clenched his jaw,angry at his wife.She never called him by any nickname,just Shravan.

"Yaar Suman tumhe dekh ke lagta nahi hai ke you are a mother of a 5 year old.Loook at you,how young do you look.Be careful haan,koi single samajh ke patta na le"

"Tum bhi na,bilkul nahi badle.So cute! Hhahahahaaa"

Aditya had been in the same school with them and was the closest to Suman after Shravan.Suman had planned with him to make Shravan jealous during the last year of school and it was because of that Shravan had finally confessed his feelings.Though both Aditya and Suman had denied to have any feeling towards each other but Shravan was sure that Aditya was lying and deep back he had fallen for Suman hence,he hated him even more.

"Idhar mein Khushi ko leke ghum raha hoon and udhar voh 'kaam mein busy hai' ka natak kar ke reunion with BEST BUDDY mein busy hai" Shravan muttered to himself angrily.

"Papa aap Khushi ko sambhaal lenge?Mujhe Sumo see kuch important kaam bhi hai.Time lagega." Shravan asked Ramnath,his angru gaze still fixed on his over happy wife with Aditya.

"Haan beta.Sure" Shravan who had been carrying a sleeping Khushi over his shoulder for sometime now handed her over to Ramnath .

"Bye Aditya" Shravan spat as he held Suman's hand tightly and dragged her away from Aditya,away from the gardern, away from everyone,wanting her for him,only him.

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A/N- Hello! Sorry for the late update.I really was caught up with lots of stuff.But to compensate for that,I have given a fairly long update.Hope you all are happy.

So how was this update?According to me,not upto the mark.I am sorry but I am not a fan of writing songs and describing the steps according to them and hence I couldn't write the sangeet that way.

So what do you think the jealous Shravan would do now?Shout at her or question her politely?Leave your answer below.

Also remember a good amount of reviews always helps me keep going.So,just don't be a silent reader but comment.

And please do me a favor and follow this page for heartfelt quotes -https://www.instagram.com/the_introvertspeaks/?hl=en

Thank You.

-Mitali❤️



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Posted: 8 years ago
Dance performance was super
All the Malhotra's & Tiwari's danced well on their respected songs. Shravan & Sumo danced on the tune of jag gumeya & Zaalima. One of my favourite song Zaalima.

Possessive Shravan is back again. I thought he would break Aditya's nose thank God he didn't. So he took Sumo away from everyone only for himself to spend sometime with her.

Beautiful update

Vinu

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